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By : Mellybean
  • From ANON - DracOnyx on September 20, 2004
    WOOHOO! Another chapter, and Yami's back! Yippee! *goes around dancing*

    Marik - Don't mind her . . . her life is finally straightening itself out and we decided to come back and help her write again, so she's in a really odd mood.

    Sephiroth - you mean good mood, don't you?

    Marik - No, I mean odd mood. Even her 'good' moods don't get her dancing here lately. *shrug* anyway . . . *grunts as he gets shoved out of the chair*

    Drac - Anyway, good chapter and can't wait to see more. Hope everything is well with you : ) *goes back to dancing as Marik picks himself up off the floor*

    Marik - See? Odd mood . . . *shakes head and wanders off to try to calm Drac down* The things I put up with . . . .

    DracOnyx and Her Muses
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  • From ShadowedRaven on September 19, 2004
    I would love to know how you come up with these wonderful chapters. They are so well written and attention grabbing. And not to mention some pretty hot scenes. I can't wait for future chapters in any of your stories. I really like your work.
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  • From ANON - Terra on September 18, 2004
    Gods! I wanna see Seto's PEN-IZ too!! That was too funny, and an interesting way to open wine. And a nervous Bakura? Isn't that an oxymoron?
    Love it babe.
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on September 18, 2004
    thank god for updates!!! ^_^ awesomely cute cuddly chapter!!!!! good job! ~Leaf~
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  • From smalvina on August 15, 2004
    Great chapter as always
    You know i can't wait for your next chapters.
    Is Mokuba having nightmare?
    please update soon!
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  • From ANON - zatken on August 11, 2004
    Man, this chapter is meaty (literally and figuratively). I'm so jumping up and down for joy because I got a glimpse of what I wanted - a hot lemon between Tristan and Otogi. *Fangirl Zatken's sporting an idiotic and dreamy smile right now after getting what she wanted*

    And am I reading it right that Mokuba's thinking that Seto's doing something inappropriateh bah baby Matthew? Boy, bo, boy...

    And both of you made my day with Lexi. OMG...I couldn't stop from laughing aloud, especially with how Bakura acted when he was explaining to Ryou what happened underneath the sheets. It was just so darn funny, even I'm blushing ;-D

    Keep it up, guys. I've been waiting for a good long while from an update from you guys and I'm so happy when you posted this one. Will be waiting for Soulmates ;-D
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  • From ANON - Terra on August 10, 2004
    Bakura has met his match in a little pint size girl. Too funny. I can see a lot of red faces stemming from her curiosity. I wonder if she'll be asking all her Papa's co-workers if they have pee-nizes?

    Poor Mokuba, I see a lot of heartache coming from that. He has a few hugs waiting from one cute little red head.

    You know the rest....update really fast!!


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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on August 10, 2004
    I don't think I've ever laughed so hard in my life! Poor Bakura . . . so, what promises did he make to Ryou, I wonder? *ponders thought for a moment* Ah well, I'm sure Ryou will be suitably evil about collectin the them.
    I feel for Tristan. The poor guy . . . he really does have some hang ups. With everything else that's going on . . . just wow.
    Still a great read from start to finish . . . can't wait to read more.

    DracOnyx
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on August 10, 2004
    Oh holy gods, am I glad you're back and updating... I swear I wasng ing into withdrawls. But what the holy hell are you doing to them now?!? Mokuba's getting strange memories and ... and... ugh, I can't even think it. ... You're not actually, tho... I mean, you couldn't... I know some victims turn it around but... oh Ra, I need an aspirin. Or a drink. Or both. Please update soon. Either story. Both, preferably. And in multiple places in case AFF freaks out again. Oh, and Bring Back My Yami! Well, not /my/ yami.. trust me, you wouldn't want her. But Yami should be able to come back by now..... I mean, it's been like a month or something...... Err, sorry, super long review, I'm off now. Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - White Nymph on July 19, 2004
    OMG, that was a mean cliffie, i've just spent the last few days reading all of this 'series' and only just got this far. I really need to get some sleep. I really like how you guys have conversations with each other at the beginning and end of every chapter. i really like the relationship that you havveloveloped between Seto and Tristain. Your stories are the first I've read with Seto/Tristain Lemons. I just love Lexi, shes so cute, and as for Justin, hooray for all the awkward questions!!! whens his operationnaonna be? I'm going on holiday on wednesday so I'm not gonna be able to read any of your new stuff, if you do anymore! well I'm about to make a start on Soul Mates. Just wanted to say that this is a great story and keep it up!!! and tell Bakura no i didn't mean it like that!!!
    suki White Nymph
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  • From ANON - Dranzers_Yami on July 16, 2004
    PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!!!! KEEP GOING WITH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    i'M LOVIN' IT!!!! (no not McDonald's) It's a great story!!!!! It's shame you can't publish fanfics like these ones!
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  • From ANON - Dranzers_Yami on July 16, 2004
    I've been sending alot of reviews. I noticed that,while going over the story again looking for the definition of the jelly beans (found it) that you changed the name Jacob to Josh. I was just wondering if that was intentionnal or not. Really great story so far. Plus i can't wait until you finish One Way Street i think it's called. Keep writting! Plz? I'll give you a cookie and a hug? *puppy dog eyes* ^^
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  • From ANON - Dranzers_Yami on July 16, 2004
    Ok now i'm in tears, you made lexi be scared of Bakura. I was seriously crying there when i read that part!!! *sniffles*
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  • From ANON - Dranzers_Yami on July 16, 2004
    I was reading your chapter 13 and i'm happy to say that i have rotten tomatoes and apples with your names on!!! !!! GRRRRRR!!!!! *throws veggies and fruit* HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO LEXI?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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  • From ANON - magget on July 08, 2004
    OH YOU EVIL EVIL PEOPLE....I LOVE YOU!! *HUGS*....once again, on the edge of my seat...always had a feeling about dan...YOU HAVE CONFIRMED IT! *GASP*....joey flipped...angela sounds familiar...*looks through yearbook* *points at random girl* like her *points again* and her....*trend of druggies in my old school*....wonderful....you no update, i no read, you no get review...KEEP GOING!
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