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By : Mellybean
  • From ANON - Scylla on May 16, 2004
    It just gets better with every chapter! I think...Tristan as the way he is in your story is really the kind of person he'd grow up to be, even if none of the events in your story ever came to pass. I suppose Otogi's attitude of submission irks me a little - I always thought it'd be he and *Tristan* who were the equals, but that's the personality that came through in the series, and everybody's free to interpret them differently. How you arranged him to fit ideally between Joey and Tristan is wonderful, so I can easily forgive Otogi for shutting up when he really should be having pissyfits. *grins* Though I'd LOVE to see Otogi have a good spirited pissyfit. We're going to get to see him have it out with Tristan over this, aren't we? Pwease?

    And...oh lord...BAKURA! "I am the Queen of Sheba!" Yes, yes, he makes me squirm and that's quite all right with me. I'm *so* glad you didn't make him super!fluffy the way I've seen some people write him. But the humor you toss into the situation...it makes him easier to deal with. He's just one of those characters here that makes you want to laugh...and then makes you feel terribly guilty for wanting to laugh in the first place.

    Just keep going! I'm certainly going to keep reading! And thanks for the updates - they keep me coming back. ^_~
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  • From ANON - Bluesake on May 11, 2004
    YOU UPDATED!! Yugi's being a jerk!!!!! *pouts* come on your upseting me....CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shakster on May 11, 2004
    another good chappie... i guess Tris is gonna have to make this difficult, and Yugi, holy hell... Yami better come batter come back asap.
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on May 11, 2004
    awe....silly Tristan...it's funny how neither of them thinks the other loves them...-shakes head- anyway excellent update! ^_^ as always, i'm glad Mokie woke up! and i hope that Yugi and Seto can patch things up soon, don't like seeing Seto like this. nope nope ^-^ ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - zatken on May 11, 2004
    Ah, it was an awesome chapter and a fun rollercoaster ride for the emotions. I have laughed, cried, got envious because of how much action they're having (pulls hubby closer to her), got angry, got bloodlusted, felt sorry....everything.

    Justin's piece was a classic. I really laughed out loud on that one.

    And Tristan, you ARE an asshole! Why do you have to be so mean to Otogi? And I don't know about yougi..gi....**shakes head**

    **feels Lexi pull her pant leg**

    Oh, where are my manners....sorry, honey.... **scratchead aad and blushes for cursing in front of Lexi**

    Great chappie, guys ;-D Have a safe trip and don't keep us waiting too long for an update ;-D
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on May 11, 2004
    That was just fricking PERFECT! Gods, that was great. Bakura was dead on target with what he did. I do hope Yami wakes up soon . . . he needs to smack some sense into Yugi. And Tristan needs to get his head out of his ass about Otogi. But hey, great chapter! Enjoy your time in the States (you'ret upt up the road from me, actually) and can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Terra on May 10, 2004
    Poor Ryou. Poor Tris and Seto wonder if their eyes burned? Ewww how gross, skinned alive. Well he asked for it. Seto's penis had a booboo. Gods the things kids come up with.
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on May 10, 2004
    Oh MY!! *giggles insanely* Go Kura!! yummy!!! Man, Yugi has gone all insane on everyone!! Poor Seto!! Poor Otogi!! *smacks Tris for being such an ass*

    Have lot fun fun on your vacation, see you when I get back from mine (same week!!)

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Sapphire on May 05, 2004
    Wow, I almost missed this one, if it where not for the update notice you sent me I would have!
    I did not need a box of tissues, but it was sad. If you actually killed Mokuba, seto would have your head, so it's a good thing you didn't.
    I know tris is not really ok with the whole Joey Otogi thing, I don't want to know how that is going to go over.
    And seto finaly accepts rodger! WOOHOOO! Even if it took mokuba getting shot for him to do so.
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  • From ANON - Magget on May 04, 2004
    OMFG YOU GUYS ARE GODDESSES!! *worships* *sobs* FINALLY OTOGI IS HAPPY!! *YAY!!* *sobs hysterically*
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on May 03, 2004
    So, Seto finally gets it, huh?? Poor Yami and Yugi!! Yum, Otogi and Joey action!! Ohh, GO KURA!!!!!!!!!!!


    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Bianca on May 03, 2004
    Damn IT. Yay, another chapter! Is Tristan ever gonna living in denile? Anyway, good chapter, I can't wait for the next one! Want a cookie? I made chocolate chip.
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  • From ANON - zatken on May 03, 2004
    Oh, man, I love all your work but this is one of my favorites ;-D Finally, Joey and Otogi got together (yipeee)....

    And yeah, I want some blood, too....someone's gotta pay for what they did to Mokuba....
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on May 02, 2004
    -glomps-OMG!!!! i couldn't review before because my computer was screwed up! omg omg omg! i don;t know what to say...but i'm glad some things are working out..just wish circumstances didn't have to be so bad! -gives everyolushlushies- poor Mokie....awe.....i'll be watching for more! ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on May 02, 2004
    Great chapter, as always. Made me cry. I was ok just teary eyed and then Seto hugs Roger and I cried. Please let Bakura get information fropm Walters before he dies? Thank you for not killing Mokuba. Man how are Joey and Otogi going to react if/when they find out that Tristan was the target. Thank goodness the cell phone was there.
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