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By : Mellybean
  • From ANON - Shakster on May 02, 2004
    So I go on AFF... and see you updated... I'm doing the cha cha dance, Update, Update, Update.... Update, Update, Update... I look and notice that I need tissues to read the story and my cha cha ended.... well, the good news is, I didn't cry... What a wonderful update... Despite Mokuba's situation... Good to see Seto starting to come around with Roger. and it's nice to see Otogi and Joey together.. as for Walters... well, we never really liked him anyway.
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on May 02, 2004
    Walters is FUCKED! (giggles insanely) 'Kura's gone mental! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! GET HIM KURA!

    Okay, now that I've finished ranting about my favorite psycho . . . great story, absolutely love it, and can't wait until you update. Poor Seto . . . and Yami. Just when Seto needed him most, he couldn't stay. He's going to be highly upset. Well, I anxiously await to see what happens next and how things turn out. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Terra on May 02, 2004
    YOU ARE TREMENDOUS!!!!! Damn that was great!!! Wonderful lime!!! Seto gets it finally about Roger!!! AND BAKURA GETS TO KILL SOMEONE!!!!!

    We need more here.

    BEAUTIFUL YOU SO ROCK!!!!!
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  • From ANON - RyuArashi on April 30, 2004
    *crying hysterically* How could you?! How could you allow Mokuba-chan to get shot? Please don't kill him off! Give him a chance to make up with Seto! I know our favorite dragon was being an asshole...but come on!
    Seriously, your story has to be one of the best I've ever had the pleasure to read...Nowadays, everyone and their brother is a fanfic writer...and the results...well, let's just say sometomes feel the need t cry and bang ny head against my computer, they were s bad...Anyone that has the guts to critisize...just ignore them. Continue writing great stories, and I'll continue printing! Need more...though...update soon!
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on April 26, 2004
    GAH! VILE CLIFFHANGER!
    *grovels* please update soon.
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  • From ANON - zatken on April 26, 2004
    Ah....I just had to read this chapter again....still can't get over the fact that Mokuba's been shot....

    That's a first - Yugi pulls away from Seto **lol** he must be REALLY pissed ;-D
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  • From ANON - RyuuKokoro on April 26, 2004
    Oh my friggen god. 0_0 Don't kill Mokuba!!!! ;_;
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on April 25, 2004
    First of, that bineedneeds to get bent. Your right. Well, her loss, not yours.

    Reads story, squeealing happily at al the good lemons. Squeals at Otogi and Lexi.

    What?? Kill Tris. No!!

    What?? They Hit Mokie!!
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    Passes out cold........

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on April 25, 2004
    OMG! OMG! You didn't do that, did you? Mokuba shoot, and I am willing to bet it was ment for Tristin. Poor Otogi, so close and yet so far, from the ones he loves. Now I am waiting for the next chapter on the edge of my seat.
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  • From ANON - magget on April 25, 2004
    ...*SERIOUS EYE TWITCH*....*TH TWH TWITCH* .....you dont update soon i might not stop twitching....*hunts for good knife* *leaves to go stab asshole that shot mokuba* *hugs seto* it's ok seto, he'll pull through like he always does *hug*

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  • From ANON - Bianca on April 25, 2004
    I SO should have seen that coming but I didn't. Great job! Here, have a cookie for yet another amazing cliff hanger. You totally rock! Love!
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  • From ANON - Sapphire on April 25, 2004
    YOU. SHOT. MOKUBA????
    How could you? I thought it was bad when Ashes ran Seto over with a truck, but you SHOT mokuba???
    Evil! Evil! Evil women!!!! You better update quick if you don't want me to throw fruit.
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  • From ANON - Keisha on April 24, 2004
    OMG OH MY FUCKING GOD!! WHAT AN ENDING!! HOLY SHIT!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG I WA THE THE EDGE OF MY SEAT THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE FIC!! oh and dont worry about what that bitch said, this is by far the GREATEST fic i have EVER read, your writing skills is excellent and the pis iis intricate and complex (and origional) ... i love the dialogue between the characters, and i dont think you should change a thing about this... if this became a manga i would SURELY buy it ... please dont kill mokiy hey heart would break!


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  • From ANON - zatken on April 24, 2004
    OMG....how sad....as usual, this chapter and story are good ;-D

    BTW, don't pay attention to the nutty reviewer. If she / he did read your work, then he / she would realize that it is not in script form.... On the other hand, those who do appreciate your work are still here supporting you on every chapter with reviews and stuff.

    And a writer's best accomplishment is if the characters come to life that people could relate to them.

    Hope everything's going well with the store. Keep me posted, and please update soon ;-D
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on April 24, 2004
    Yuji: ;_;!! Whhhhaaaaaaaaaa!! Moki!!
    Yumi: To believe that if Moki wasn't there Tristan would've gotten shot or if Roger didn't make Moki go talk with Seto, Tris would've gotten shot
    Yuji: Both are bad!!
    Yumi: True
    Yuji: Why Moki why be mean to Moki!!??
    Yumi: That an interesting chap
    Yuji: Moki could be dead!!
    Yumi: Part of the conflict.
    Yuji: But Moki was going to marry Roger!!
    Yumi: Well if he's dead he isn't
    Yuji: Why are you being mean. You're being just as bad as Seto!!mi: mi: What do you want from me!? The only thing I really enjoyed were the lemons!! Yum ^_^
    Yuji: But what about the other stuff?
    Yumi: Eh. Lets see. Tris call Duke kitten and smooched him, Seto is being an asshole and pratically dosowned the boy, Yami was jumped last (lol), Yugi thinks Seto's an asshole, Joey....is horny for Tris, Duke can use his hair to hide Lexi, Mr. Tayler wants someone to kill Tris, Roger want to marry Moki, Moki is feeling pain in being prepared and didn't got good advice from Joey. I think that all. Oh yeah Lexi was being extremely adoreable!!
    Yuji: You remembered all that?
    Yumi: Yup. So of course I read the other things too. Not just the lemons
    Yuji: ok
    Yumi: Now I would kill the author. But I wo bec because she is my friend and I wouldn't be able to find out what's next. So please update
    Yuji: UPDATE!!
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