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Reviews for Paint me the sky

By : ShadowSpecter17
  • From ANON - Fanofthisstory on February 13, 2013
    It's sad to see this story discontinued. I love it loads and would utterly love to read more
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  • From KawaiiKilala77 on August 20, 2008
    Aww, you haven't updated. I'm so disappointed. But then again you DO have a life. But I wish you update. Plz
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  • From YamiKuro on June 22, 2008
    SQUEE! THE CUTENESS! *hugs yami*

    MORE PLEASE!

    Kuro
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  • From Diva937 on November 02, 2007
    Cute. I like the subplot with Mai. A little random, but it works. I have to admit, I'd really like to know what exactly Yami 'has' too. It seems to have capped his ability to learn, but he learned English (evidentally) really quickly. It's interesting. Sorry :) Psych major, and trying to think of such a condition would truly exist. Though I still think Yugi's being dumb by not being at that school interview!!
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  • From Diva937 on November 02, 2007
    Oh my goodness, I don't blame Seto at all. Maybe the kicking thing was going a bit too far, but I'd have hit someone I loved too if they were going to give up their dreams, and their future for a friggen day at the water park! I mean, REALLY!!! But yeah, the candy necklace scene was beyond cute...
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  • From Diva937 on November 02, 2007
    First off, I'll start by saying I do love this story. That's why I've read this far, and that's why I intend to read the rest. On that note, I do have some comments that will hopefull help improve your future writing. You have a great plot going on, with a good grasp of your main characters, but I've been finding that sometimes you're cutting corners on details. Some important, others not so much. The thing that confused me the most was why the secretary(? I can't remember what word you used for her) at the complex went from being so cooperative for fear of losing her job, to so defiant of what Yugi was asking. There was really nothing I could see that prompted that change. Then there's other things, like why, if Yami was dropped on this places doorstep at two, why wasn't he just sent to an orphanage? Two year olds are supposed to be trouble. And what is it about Yugi that he trusts so instantly. Yeah, he protected him the day before, but ultimately even Yugi ended up sending him back to the complex. That's kind of an act of betrayal if he doesn't understand what's going on. You're really talented, so I wouldn't bother saying any of this if I didn't think it would change a thing, but I honestly think once you start asking yourself why everything in your story is happening, and give it a reason, you'll have the talent to write incredible, completely unforgettable things! Alright, I'm going to go finish the story now!
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  • From ANON - Alexin on December 28, 2006
    Why aren't you writing new chapters ;( i love this story pls add new chapies soon plsss ^^
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  • From ANON - Alexin on September 08, 2006
    I love this story,what hapens next,pls continue вритинг PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE ^^^^^^^^^^^^
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  • From ANON - Lenne on October 08, 2005
    WOW!!! Yami is soooo CUTE!!! ^_^ Please please please write another chappie soon!!
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  • From ANON - KaiwaiiKilala on January 12, 2005
    Kilala:*hyper as she can be* AHHHHHHHH!!!!!ISSODARNADORABLE!CUTE!!....KAIWAIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!MAKEMORECHAPIEPLZ!!!
    Kulula:=^>_>^= Please excuse my Yami.You see she is in love Yami and when she acts this cute!she gets hyper //Brain:Even though she is always hyper for a Yami//
    Kilala:PLZWRITEMORECHAPYFORMEHNTHEOTHERPPLIDON'TKNOWPLZWRITEMOREORIWILLGOINSANE.
    Kulala:*above a whisper*You are alrwady insane.
    Kilala:*her cat-like ears twitch* IHEARDTHATUDAMNBRAT!!!ANYWAYILOVEURSTORYWRITEMORENKEEPUPTHEGOODWORKORNOTIWILLSENDUTOTHESHADOWREALM!!!!
    Kulala:Kilala stop threatening the author.
    Kilala:*pout*Party pooper!
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  • From ANON - chi on January 09, 2004
    ok, u hve got my attention. da first chapter is very interestin, pls pls pls pls add another very soon
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  • From ANON - Paulina on October 14, 2004
    HEEEY When are you going to update!! please continue your fic T-T
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  • From ANON - yaoi_crazy on May 02, 2004
    This was such a cute story so far! please pleeease update soon!
    Yami was especially kawaii in this fic... so cute!
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  • From ANON - Enock on April 14, 2004
    Oooh another good story! Please keep going. I'm dying to know what happens next. T.T
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  • From ANON - chi on April 05, 2004
    me like dis chappie
    pls update soon
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