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Reviews for Sleeping

By : Oneida
  • From on August 23, 2008
    OMG how sad... Meanie Seto!!! how dare you kill my... I mean your puppy...
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  • From ANON - GarnetStar on December 16, 2005
    Your fic reminds me of the wreck I had back in May. My two year old niece was in the back seat when a car rearened us with me driving. I don't blame myself for the wreck but I miss her so much. I was there at her birth and at her side when my sister had to make the choice to let her go. I really did like your fic. I hope others do as well.
    GarnetStar
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  • From ANON - Ayeshagirl on December 12, 2005
    It's so sad... sobs... mokuba is so cute... poor seto...
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  • From ANON - Yaoi_Love on October 12, 2005
    So Kawaii, Poor Sato,Poor Mokuba,T.T....at the end....did that mean that drink made them sleep and die? or was that a figure of speech? -sweatdrop-
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  • From ANON - jousetoyaoifan on September 25, 2005
    I am confused is Seto and Jou dead or is he just plain old sleeping@_@ it was good anyway+_+
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  • From ANON - setosgirl (not signed in) on September 20, 2005
    Wow... nice. I like it, a lot. Mokuba death fics... yay! Teh angst... *droolpurr*
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  • From ANON - yukiko on September 14, 2005
    whoa..... that was goood. kinda of romatic in a werid sort of way. poor jou and seto T.T. good
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  • From ANON - nicky on February 03, 2005
    Oh, this was really sad. That's why I usually don't read stories that have character deaths of stuff like that in them.
    But this is really good, from the stylistic point of view. I mean... all those little things that you mention, that have ... like a double meaning... and we expect them to be the obvious, but in fact... they're not. Like Seto calling Jou Katsuya, and there's two reasons why he'd ever do that and we just assume it's cause he's horny, or you mention the tube is empty and they don't need it anymore, or the whole orgasms... paraphrased as coming to an end...
    As I said. REALLY good!!!
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  • From ANON - eclipseluva88 on January 08, 2005
    sooooooooooo sad
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  • From ANON - Kouga\'s girl on November 22, 2004
    OMFG that was so twisted and sad but a very good story i was crying so head at when it hit me that seto had poisned Joey and then him slfe and than to find out poor Mokuba was dead wow i'm still crying as i write this ( Seto walks up behind me) Seto: Hey what they Holy ra iyou killed me Joey and my borther! ( runs off Crying) got to go he's haveing a cadagory 5 fit got to find him befor he blows a mine vain in his head ( runs off looking for Seto)
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  • From ANON - Nocturne22 on October 22, 2004
    Sniff sniff... Sappy and heartbreaking! Please dont just make this a one shot! I need to read more about this! UPDATE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Angelical nightmare on June 19, 2004
    oh my fucking god.... that was so... sad. shit I am actually crying.. I never cry.
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  • From ANON - Sophia on March 11, 2004
    ;_; A very intense and grippling fic. I feel somewhat ashamed at enjoying the pure Angst and grief of it so much, really. I love the way you wrote Seto and Jou though, both struck me as very in-character. (I think that there's a good chance indeed that Seto wouldn't really feel up to living anymore after Mokuba would have passed away, not even with Joey at his side [or should that be 'feet'? ~.^ Sorry, lame dog-joke]). Your style of writing drage ree reader very much into the story, with a great choice of words and (near) impeccable grammar. (You keep writing [Setos'] and [Jous'] when you denote possession, instead of putting the apostrophe before the s ([Seto's] and [Jou's]) as is usual, but aside from that, it's perfect. [At least, I thought so. ^^;]). I also like the arrangements Seto made and the way he had planned it all out, down to a letter to Jou's friends. It's almost scary (no, wait, it *did* scare me) how he keeps being so organized and orderly while planning a ... double suicide? It's not quite murder I think (well, at least Seto might not think of it that way. More li'Jou'Jou is mine, so when I go, he goes too'.)
    I hope you'll write many more fics (if possible happy ones, though if this one's any indication, your Angsty ones will be great too. ^_^)
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on February 13, 2004
    awe -sniffles- that was sad..and very well written..
    ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - Myoubi on January 25, 2004
    *sniff sniff* You're mean and evil... *tear* But god, do I love ya.
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