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Reviews for So In Love With Two

By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - halowing4 on February 09, 2004
    I have soooo enjoyed this story. Great lemons, very funny dirty talk especially in the epilog. Loved the flashback between Seto and Tristan. I'm looking forward to any future stories.
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  • From ANON - Lady Jade on February 08, 2004
    I have to say that I am really impressed. The dialogue was engaging, the characters were pretty true to cannon, and the stroy line was excellent. You never once lost sight of detail in a whoppingly long story. I think this was absolutely excellent! As for you being exhausted but sad, thats how it always seems to go with longer storys. Lets just say that my short ones end somewhere about 45 to 60 pages and I always have to ask myself how they became such life consuming, energy sapping (much loved mind you ^^) pains in the @ss. Anyways. I really enjoyed this storys emotional twists and turns and excellent attention to detail. Please keep writing, you do this Fandom a service by being involved in it.
    Sincerely
    - Lady Jade (Watari's girl)
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  • From ANON - Portia on February 08, 2004
    Hey that story is worth reviewing. It was excellent, although sometimes the angst was so intense. However, I agree those who want a story with Tristan/Seto. I like Seto/Joey, but there are so many stories with them out there it can get pretty tedious reading them all the time, and I am beginning to like the Tristan/Seto pairing.

    Keep the fics coming!!!
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  • From ANON - Evil Windstar on February 07, 2004
    this fic was great, wonderful, etc. i luved it! it was just... amazing. and to think that they're all getting along. lol, i think they could all get along if theyreally wanted too. man that the scene with seto and tristan talking about a threesome... was freaky. O_o me and joey would certainly have a heart attack if that actually did happen. lol. i luv the flashbacks. it cleared eveything out and the end was great. hope u make another seto/joey fic soon~
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on February 06, 2004
    YD: GODS! Bakura is SOOOOOOOO funny!!
    DD: *pout* It's over.
    YD: But it ended good.
    DD: Hot lemons all around...yummy!!
    YD: We enjoyed this so much!!
    DD: Good job!!
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  • From ANON - Snowbird1487 on February 06, 2004
    This was one of the BEST stories I have ever read!! I loved it! Good Luck in the future! :)
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  • From sharem on February 06, 2004
    I really like the epilogue. It closed up so many things that were going on in the story and I do like how you made Tea and Mai ending up toge. Y. You know, I'd like to see a sequel to this story if there is one possible in the future...^_^
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on February 06, 2004
    AWWWW!!!! i'm going to save this to my computer and cherish it forever and ever! -grins- god i loved the convo between Tristan and SEto -snickers- ^_^ -huggles- it was an awesome fic!!! ~leaf~
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  • From Shakirah on February 06, 2004
    MC Dirty D, u figured me out about the song lyrics. I was wondering if anyone would notice! Actually there were at least two more I could think of off hand, "i bet you're hard to getr" r" is from a Matchbox Twenty song, and "I'll never get over you getting over me" is a song by Selena. SO cool you caught that! Thanks for reading my story!

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  • From ANON - justpassingby... on February 06, 2004
    Oh man, the conversation between Kaiba and Tristan in Epi Epilogue was just so... *shudder* Sorry, I just don't favor these two together. Initial reon won was EwEwEwEwwwwww!!!!! If I was a gay guy sporting a hard-on, it would've died the instant I read what these two had just conversed with each other, it was that bad.

    But seriously, on the whole the story was just too emotional and I find it sometimes kind of hard to believe that all those heavy duty talks about love, emotions, betrayal and psychological mumbo-jumbo had been said out loud by teenagers in high school (and Mokuba?!) with each of them talking like an experienced psychiatrist...or something equivalent to that. I find it even more disturbing when more than half of these talks have been produced by Joey Wheeler himself who had been known as an insensitive buffoon with a big-fat mouth (despite that, I still adore the Puppy *hugs*).

    Overall, it may be a little too emotional and angsty for me (since I'm not the emotional and angsty kind) but I read it up anyway because I want to know what happens next. There's that suspense that I rarely have when reading a good story and considering that this isn't a mystery whatsoever, it proves that it's a damn good story to me. There are insecurities living alive inside us that you have portrayed nicely into words in the story, something that I'll never be able to do in a long time coming. Mistaking the variations of love for certain individuals, the misunderstood feelings and thinkings, the meddlings of past history with the present situation...you have incorporated it well into your story. It succeeded in making me to 'want' to read your story. Congratulations for managing to do so.

    And congratulations for finally finishing up your story. Hope to see more Yu-Gi-Oh stories pop up from you.
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  • From ANON - MC Dirty D on February 06, 2004
    *cries a river* It's gone! It's done! boo-hoo... Well it had to come sooner of later right? Later would have been nicer. AWSOME FIC!! I did notice in the second to last chapter or more appropriately the chapter before the epilouge some of the things Joey and Seto said were from songs... did you mean it that way? Like one was from I think a Phil Colins song I died in arms tonight then there was Savage Garden fall asleep inside of you and something from Evanescence, maybe more. Am I right? Or do I know too many songs? Oh and lastly AWSOME FIC! ^_^ I look forward to more from you. Perhaps a TristanxSeto...*wink wink*
    Just one more thing... the Seto/Joey when they got together was the sweetest bit of sugar I ever read! I LOVE YOU!!!
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  • From ANON - Saku-chan on February 06, 2004
    WEEEEEE it rules i loved it very nice indeed ^___^ perfect ending ^_^ write more fun seto/jou stories hehe

    Saku-chan
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on February 06, 2004
    Sorry I mean like more fics!

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  • From ANON - Meg on February 05, 2004
    Yay!!! very very very very very very good!!!! I dont want this story to end!! thanks!!
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on February 05, 2004
    YD: Okay...didn't really expect THAT!
    DD: Loved it though.
    YD: I have to say one thing...Bakura's wrong. W-R-O-N-G! You CAN be in love with more than one person at a time.
    DD: *raises hand* Case in point.
    YD: Having said that...can't wait for the epilogue!
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