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Reviews for So In Love With Two

By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - chibi-inu on February 05, 2004
    ^__^ This was one of the best fics I've ever read! It's like a soap-opera-y movie if ya ask me... so fluffy, light, yet angsty at the same time(sorta)... Anywayz, I enjoyed it and can't wait for the epilogue! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Leaf Zelindor on February 05, 2004
    AWE!!!! i wanna read the epilogue!!!! XD i loved this fic! it was awesome from beginning to end! ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - Sharem on February 04, 2004
    I thought that I was signed in...but I guess that I was wrong...heh heh. Anyway, I just love this chapter and I really did enjoy the lines from Romeo and Juliet that Tristan had quoted to Ryou. It was rather perfect, in my opinion. This was a well-written story and I have enjoyed it from the beginning to this final chapter. Very nice...:)
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  • From ANON - princessoflightanddarkness on February 04, 2004
    awwww sniff sniff sniff
    Great job I can't wait for the update
    aww Seto and Joey seem so happy now
    b-but what about Yugi and Yami
    Please update soon hon PLEASE ^_^
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  • From ANON - meg on January 29, 2004
    more soon please!!! i'm begging you!!!! this is sooooooo angsty and good!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ykarzel on January 28, 2004
    this story makes me want to die and live at the same time
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on January 27, 2004
    Seto and Joey need to work this out. Tristian needs to be solo for awhile. Poor Ryou. I can't belive he told Tristian that he was in love with him. Tristian needs counciling. Please let Seto and Joey make up? Waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on January 26, 2004
    ........................................... ask my dorm mates i'm going nuts, i was reading them parts and i was freaking out! -lol- very good chap!
    ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - Sapphire on January 26, 2004
    You are right this chapter was depressing, but I did not cry. It was much more frusterating than depressing... I can't even tell who will end up with who, which is strange because I can usually atleast tell. I'm voting for the JouxSeto and TristanxRyou but who knows what will happen. You made one glaring and kindof funny mistake, you called "yami" "seto" durring yugi's and yami's sex sene:

    Yugi responded by moving his neck so that Seto would have better access to it. “I want you, Aibou”, Yami murmured against Yugi, softly. Yugi closed his eyes, he was falling all over again…

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  • From ANON - princessoflightanddarkness on January 26, 2004
    sniff WOW sniff
    sniff THAT sniff
    sniff WAS sniff
    sniff HOT sniff
    sniff AND sniff
    sniff SAD sniff
    keep up the great work
    HUGS sorut Iut I am sad and sick today
    please sniff forgive me
    UPDATE soon sniff awwwwwwwwwwww
    KICK ASS STORY I SO LOVE IT
    Keep it up ^__^
    yes I am feel better now
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2004
    Excuse me for being so blunt, but... You're a college student and you do kno know that (in dialogue) all punctuation goes *inside* the quotation marks? You've consistently placed commas *outside* the quotation marks in all your dialogue. I respectfully suggest finding yourself a good beta reader to help you with your punctuation. Otherwise, you've got a pretty good story here. The scene where Yami was teasing Yugi about being "naughty" with Ryou was cute and funny, and I like the way you write Mokuba.
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on January 26, 2004
    DD: *sigh* I was waiting for that.
    YD: Geeze...I KNEW Seto and Tris were going to get in a pissing contest.
    DD: And Ryou?! GODS! What the HELL is THAT all about?!?!?!?!?!
    YD: I can't wait for the update!!!!
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on January 26, 2004
    very interestng chapter

    i liked when they were up in seto's room

    please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Laquisha on January 25, 2004
    *reads last sentence to preview* OH YEAH!?!?!? WELL THAT'S WHAT YOU DESERVE SLUTTY BITCH!!! BWAHAHAHAHHAAAAA!!! (Seriously, Tristan is the slut, not Joey.) WAHHHH!!! SETO IS SO SWEET!!! FORGET TRISTAN JOEY!!! Besides, I thinkstanstan needs to fix himself before going in a relationship again.
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  • From ANON - Alina on January 25, 2004
    trippin!! Tristan's such an ass in this fic.. at some points.. Gods, I cant wait until Joey goes to Seto.. Set's SO much better for him.. as for Yugi and Yami, well.. That was bloody awesome!! ^___^ Yugi makin moves on Yami.. yup, I wrote a lemon like that once, for my friend's fic.. that was awesome.. though that dream yami/yugi/Black Magician, that gave baaad mental images.. o_O;; which was probably the whole point.. anyway, I hope you update again really soon!! ^_____^
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