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Reviews for Gravitation

By : DracOnyx
  • From ANON - YamiNShadowsGirl on February 26, 2004
    i like it im so glad Yami finally exepted it and returned to Marik and all his friends now they can be happy im still awaiting the return of Malik im dying to see whats gonna happen when he comes back and as for the lemon well what can i say it was hot i loved it great chapter again i enjoyed it alot im lookin forward to the next chapter keep up the great work this is really good update soon
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on February 26, 2004
    eeee awe, whooohoo! sex! -lol- i'm a dork ^_^ ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - Rurouni_agra on February 26, 2004
    THAT WAS GREAT! I've been waiting the whole fic for that. Though I LOVED Bakura and Yami.
    One question...why didn't Marik and Yami float like he and Bakura did? Just kinda wondering if there was some significance behind that.
    I know I haven’t reviewed but I've been following Gravitation religiously...I think it's that good. Hell it's one of the best fics out there in my opinion. It's always the first thing I look for. And that says a lot cause I'm on here way more then is probably healthy.
    I LOVE your writing style...I can just picture it...especially Yami on the bike and the three of them on thece fce floor early in the fic. *drool* I also liked the scene where Yami is floating about the lake. I'd like to see a fanart of THAT (or the dance floor ... that was the BEST PART, yo!). You know an authors good when their words paint a picture. (And the fact that this picture is three sexy guys always helps.)
    Keep writing. I know you've got more to this story, and I want to see Malik dead. *pulls our assassin’s knife*
    Do me a favor? Put a little Ryou/Yugi in this? I want to see what you can do.
    Love ya lots! Ja.

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  • From ANON - Dai-Nemesis on February 26, 2004
    O.O Oh my god that was great!Keep up the good work!

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  • From ANON - Keishi on February 25, 2004
    Interesting two chapters, yay for Bakura finally breaking through to Yami! And (duh) of course the word is empathic, dammit I would get that wrong. -laughs- Please continue, and don't mind the yaoi fangrrl climbing into Bakura's lap every so often. He's just too cute to resist!
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  • From ANON - YoukoKitsune on February 24, 2004
    god! this is a wonderful story please update soon I can't wait
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on February 24, 2004
    I am liking this story a lot. Way to hang in there Bakura! This is a great concept and you are doing a good job with the story.
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  • From ANON - Kalee on February 24, 2004
    hello me again and yes it was a loveldatedate. i was wondering if ur ever gonna let yami come home happy? will there always be problems? ne ways grate stories. Write on!
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  • From ANON - Arainaina on February 23, 2004
    Aw that was very good please write more soon
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  • From ANON - Ryoanna on February 23, 2004
    Hey, Sorry I didn't review the other chaps. I just wanted to say that you've got quite the talent for writing!
    PLEEZE WRITE MORE!!!
    Thankies,
    Ryoanna ^_^
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  • From ANON - YamiNShadowsGirl on February 23, 2004
    another great chapter awww i hope Bakura can make Yami see sense and i hope Yami goes back to everybody soon cos they miss him especialy Marik and Yugi i love thiis story keep goin update soon
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  • From ANON - Yuriko on February 23, 2004
    Hey, no, I'm not disappointed. ^o^ As they say, If you don't have something nice to say don't say anything at all - in other words, better to have no Anzu at all then Anzu bashing. ;)

    Another great chapter with yummy craploads of angst! I love angst.
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on February 23, 2004
    AWE! ^_^ very cute, i'm glad Yami's going to at least try ^_^ ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - Kalee on February 22, 2004
    OK im a widely known bysexual. so is my mom and i was raised with an open mind. i happen to be a naturalist so there is no form of prejudice in my body. i have to admit that ur srorys are amazing. i love them. i was wondering if we were gonna ge see see ne senes between Ryou and Yugi though. there so sweet and inocent i just wanna see what its like to watch them in private. love ur work.

    byebye
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  • From ANON - Drama Queen on February 22, 2004
    Wow. I defenetly can say that I like this version better then the one on Fanfiction. I prefer the sex details. But I absolutly love this story. How can you come up with the details. I hope you update it soon. What are you going to do about Marik. Are Yami and Marik going to do what Yami and Bakura did? I hope so that will add to the whole thing. What about Malik? Oh I bet that he is really pissed about what Yami did to him. Oh I hope he doesn't hurt Yugi. I hope I didn't give you an idea. Where do you get your inspiration? Well that is enough blabbering. Love the story hope you update soon. Looken forward to it.
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