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Reviews for Gravitation

By : DracOnyx
  • From ANON - YamiNShadowsGirl on February 13, 2004
    Once agaiotheother great chapter i love the plot and your ideas a great story i fsorrsorry for the trio of Marik ,Bakura and Yami cos they so badly want eachother I cant wait to see what Malik is gonna do next is he gonna try andt Yat Yami im surprised he isnt lusting after Yami too update soon i have to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on February 13, 2004
    don't you juove ove it when your muses think they know best for ya? -lol- very good chap, i like the sweetness and stuff...-sugar.........>.>.......the only good thing about v-day...cheap chocolate!
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  • From ANON - Rurouni_agra on February 13, 2004
    I LOVE THIS FIC! Please write more of it soon. You've got a great plot going and you developed your characters well.
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  • From ANON - YamiNShadowsGirl on February 12, 2004
    Cool story im really enjoying this I love sto whe where Yami is either the main character or he plays a big part (especialy dark stories) what is Malik gonna do next im dying to find out keep it up you are a very talented writer you have to update asap ill be waiting
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  • From ANON - Arainaina on February 12, 2004
    Very good please write more
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  • From ANON - Keishi on February 12, 2004
    ^-^ You are quick with the chapters, aren't you?

    First off, let me do this before actually reviewing the chapter. -melts into happy fangrrl puddle- Um, that description of Jou? Yeah... -smiles dreamily- I'm stuck on the blond, can ya tell?

    Anyway, violent lil chapter this time around, but good nonetheless. I wish I could write as fast as you do! And, uh yeah -cough- I caught the room number pun aswell, lol... I thought I'd be the only one, heh. Anyway, interesting chapter, still can't wait to see where this all goes. 15 or 16 chapters, huh? I think I can hang in for the long ride. ^-^
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on February 12, 2004
    awe!!!!!! -lol- i loved the chap! violence is good in certain amouts...and i look forward to more!!! ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - Santurion on February 12, 2004
    Aw, man, this is so cool! I hope you update soon, b/c it's not nice to torture people with waiting! =^-^=
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  • From ANON - Terry on February 12, 2004
    I would love to read more about Bakura's powers getting out of control, or at least reminabouabout how he got them under control. I like how you added that in there. Marik's 'sensitive', and Bakura and Yami have powers, now they can all hook up! Please update soon!

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  • From ANON - Terry on February 12, 2004
    Hey! Teasing people with suggestive numbers! Shame! That was a great chapter! Bakura's an empath?! L
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  • From ANON - cherry on February 12, 2004
    uhm...... who is the dancer? Malik or his Yami? because in every other fanfiction, it's Malik for uhm... the 'good' one and Mafor for the 'bad one' ..... so I have to say, I'm a bit confused when you write about 'Marik' being the dancer.........
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  • From ANON - Arainaina on February 10, 2004
    Very good please keep it up oh and i have an oppinon are you gonna have a chapter where malik takes yugi just so he get's what he wants?? but if u don't that's fine to anyway very good kepp it up
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  • From ANON - meg on February 10, 2004
    Once again, this is great! This last chapter was in no way a disappointment, it was hysterical! I loved the ending of it too..about the leaking! haha lol. Anyways, the lessons are great too, and I've found that to be true about many things in life, even though my life is nowhere near as bad as Yami's is played out to be. i wish I was telepathic ans telekinetic...damn. hehe anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the fabulous writing!
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on February 10, 2004
    EEEEEEE its sooo cute! and funny ^-^ i love it! ~leaf~
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on February 10, 2004
    LOL WOW Yami as a hang over in both our fics Poor guy hehheh Kick ass fic!
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