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Reviews for Gravitation

By : DracOnyx
  • From ANON - Arainaina on March 22, 2004
    OMG what is Yugi gonna do now? I mean once he finds out what Yami did to save Marik and bakura please write more soon I wish to read more of this soon
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  • From ANON - YamiNShadowsGirl on March 22, 2004
    O_O OMG that was great damn hes evil i love it poor Bakura and Marik damn i cant wait to find out whats going to happen next poor Yami now hes gotta be a toy for Malik damn i love this you gotta keep going i wanna see what he does to Yami this is gonna be great im still in shock you gotta update soon keep goin
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  • From ANON - Kali on March 20, 2004
    Ai! you cannot do that to us... I'm scared of hights, and here you leave me hanging on a cliff....
    I can't wait for the next chapter, I await it eagerly!
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  • From ANON - Meg on March 20, 2004
    Oh no!! A cliffhanger!! You're very good about updating though, so I know we'll get another chapter soon...right?? lol. Anyway, I loved these last two chapters, they were so great! Yami's Sex Ed class on the door was so funny! mmm...Yaammmiii...ahem. Anyway, you kicked major ass on these, and I can't wait to find out if Bakura will be alright. I lvoe this story, and you for writing it! lol. Keep it up. Cheers.
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  • From ANON - Keishi on March 20, 2004
    Beautifully written chapter, as usual. I really only have one thing to nitpick at: lube, or lack thereof. Please tell me Marik anticipated Yami's actions and prepared himself before the performance? Because otherwise, my only thoughts are: ouch!

    Other than that, loved it, and I think I'll just sit back and watch as events unfold, rather than guessing where the fic is going. It's so much more fun that ^-^ ^-^
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  • From ANON - Keishi on March 20, 2004
    Hiii. Down here... no, here! On the floor! -waves from her puddle- Thanks again for another yummy Jou description! I actually haven't finished reading chapter 18, but I had to thank you now, or I knew I'd forget. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Ryoanna on March 19, 2004
    WOW!!!!!!! Great chapter!! If u can, can you make another one? I'd appreciate that!!
    Thankies!!!! ^______________^
    Ryoanna
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  • From ANON - Foxygirl202 on March 19, 2004
    AHGGG!!!!!!!!!! I hate when you leave the story as a cliffhanger. I want to know what happens soooo badly!!! I just read all those chapters for the second time and I still love the story!! If you find the time (And please hurry) can you make another chapter??!! PLEASE???
    Foxygirl gives you much thankies!!!! ^___________^
    Foxygirl202
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  • From ANON - Terry on March 19, 2004
    AHHHH! Cliffhangers!? Grr... this fic is killing me! I love the recent update: the teaser in chapter 17, just cruel :) but well written. i hope you update pretty soon, i gotta know who caught Bakura!
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on March 18, 2004
    Great dance scene. Great Lemon. Had to fan myself. Please don't hurt Bakura? I want the 3 guys to be happy. BUt then you do what the story is telling you to do. Waiting for thxt cxt chapter.
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  • From ANON - Yu-Gi_oh_lover_08 on March 18, 2004
    Wow Malik is getting into the mix again. I was wondering where he was. Well I wonder what our hero's will do next. Find out on next weeks eposode of Gravitation. Hehehe little joke. I do that. Well I love the story. Cant help it just do. Well I want you to sit your butt down and get the next chapter up. Nah just kidden you update it when you have a good idea. Well see you later. Bye. Tell me when the next chapie is up. Later Survivor is on!!b
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  • From ANON - Arainaina on March 18, 2004
    This was very good keep it up
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  • From ANON - YamiNShadowsGirl on March 18, 2004
    another great chapter and things are starting to get more interesting ooh i cant wait to see whats going to happen next poor Bakura i was glad Yami was happier but looks like he wont be for much longer hehehe sorry my evil side again what they did to him was funny too the strip poker and the sign and that surprise his reaction was great hehe well keep going im dying to see the next part whats going to happen i cant wait update soon (im sure you wil) ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kendra on March 18, 2004
    That was evil. How could you cut it off there. It is a truly amazing story. Please update soon. I usually only read PWP but your story is to good to turn away. It has plenty of juicy lemons to. ;) I think Bakura is going to try and fight back, get jumped, sent to Malik, and Malik is going to rape him. Maybe I'm wrong though. Good job and good luck.
    Update Update Update Update Update Update !!!!!!
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  • From angedenuit on March 18, 2004
    Kewl, so, you do no marik is the evil one in the anime and malik is the good one right, meh, I love the story and I can't wait for another chapter!!
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