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Reviews for Gravitation

By : DracOnyx
  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2006
    i love this story its great, my only problem is i can't read chapter 21 on my computer it comes up with the disclaimer then nothing... and it sounds like its a really good chapter *sigh* keep the stories coming we're all watching and waiting with baited breath!!
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  • From ANON - laineyue on September 02, 2006
    thanks to my, ahem, meddling hands i found out how you could get chapter 21. uh wanna how? hmm.. let me think first...

    *spaces out for a moment*

    i dunno i really want to build up the tension here...

    *thinks again*

    hmm besides i like making those avid fanfic readers of gravitaion squirm in frustration. as this evil (i meant that as a compliment) author does with this blazing hot fics.

    *looks at the reviewer*

    are you really that frustrated? do you really want to see chapter 21?

    *thinks again...*

    *evil grins*

    ok, i don't like people stalling either and i've almost or maybe lost your patience in reading my review.

    http://www.geocities.com/amunamenra/Grav21.htm

    here it is my dearies. i am a 'patron' (using the authoress' words) as well as you are. you deserve it as much as i have.

    are you ok with that *looking at the authoress* or were you expecting to lead them to your site well if that was your plan you may delete this review of mine right?

    *bows humbly* loving your fics and hoping to be seeing the sequel of GRAVITATION. *fades from the shadows* till our paths cross again. or you may see me in vampirerave.com as "laineyue". *her voice echoing in the abyss*


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  • From ANON - laineyue on September 02, 2006
    totally liking this fic dude but where's chapter 21? it skipped i think...
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  • From ANON - mps shadowmaster on January 18, 2006
    damn you bitch!!! the only thing for chater 21 is THE DISCLAMER!!!!! UNLESS YOU GET THAT FIXED, I WILL TOURCHER YOU WITH A POOL NOODLE!!!!!

    btw, you might want to proofread again for errors, i've seen a lot and it can get kinda confusing
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  • From ANON - Kalimoto on January 10, 2006
    I dunno what's wrong, but I can't seem to get chapter 21. If you could send it to me, or something, I would appreciate it. Because I love this story, and don't want to miss a word of it! PLEASE. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ShadowRaven on October 17, 2005
    Wow!!!!!!!!!!! That was a really GOOD! I mean it was like fuckin' amazing!! You did a great job, and I can't wait to see your sequel. ^__^ Hurry Up. *hee hee*
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  • From ANON - Yaoi Lover on July 09, 2005
    Yes! Make a sequel!
    I bet that you will make really good.
    Keep up the work! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Maykia on July 02, 2005
    I really wish you could continue on with it
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  • From ANON - OBSESSED Uber Rei on February 14, 2005
    Great! I cant waitto see the sequel; maybe uplay/emphasize the Bakura/Malik relationship?? Also keeping an eye on your other stories!!
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  • From ANON - Ralphiere on January 24, 2005
    Wow, I almost don't know what to say. I started this fic this afternoon at Chapter one, ignored my children, ignored my husband, drank a few beers and kept my eyes on the monitor. Oh my god! I bow to your superior storytelling, this was absolutely amazing - I can't even put it into words. You're characterization was superb, everyone was so real, OMG, so colorful! The storyline flowed perfectly, all my questions answered fully as I read, nothing left out. You absolutely stole my heart and won my admiration as an incredible writer! Truly, I can only strive to be as good.

    Now to the good stuff! You are queen of threesomes!! OMFG, all your lemons were absolutely perfect, sweet and tender and oh so hot! Having read this all in one sitting it became so apparent that every single lemon was unique and beautifully done ( I am so finding myself wallowing in repetition, my writing lacking). Absolutely amazing.

    You have completely floored me with your brillance!

    Su
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  • From ANON - ken-z on January 16, 2005
    WAY TO GO!
    I love you *glomps*
    I knew there shoudl ahve been a sequel!
    thanx for making sequels !!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Sera on January 15, 2005
    Please,can you fix the chapters problem?
    Many of them are cut and it is impossible to read the whole work.
    I love your story so much! It is a shame not to be able to appreciate all of it. It is so good...please fix the chapters!
    I WANNA READ ALL THE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!T_T


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  • From ANON - AngelKawaii on January 02, 2005
    Wow! That's all I can say this story was really awesome. I loved the plot and everything! I will be anxiously waiting for the sequel. Good luck! Not that you need it. I'm sure it'll be as great or even better than this one! Ja ne!
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  • From on December 25, 2004
    Wow....wow. Yeah, wow. Very well written, you've left me almost speechless. I can't wait for the sequel. You have such a gift, don't waste it.
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  • From ANON - Rei or Ken-z on December 18, 2004
    I love it it is I dotn know wonderful just like you 12 days of christmas I want more of graviation maybe a sequel just suggesting of them getting married it be
    funny the priest would be all like ok who is marrying who it would be funny or how you said bakura had been ignoring his parents for ever nd maybe make more of sequel I dont remeber if Yami killed Pegasus or not but if he didnt it could be revenge of some sort I dont know please just consider this....
    Other wise
    LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

    and I hope you have updated 12 days till christmas or w/e it is titled becuase taht is what Im going for next ^.^

    _December,11(I tihnk),2004_
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