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Reviews for Take Me

By : kaite
  • From ANON - madness on February 15, 2004
    fabulous fic man!!
    i can't believe it was your first lemon, so well written!
    poor ryou though... i don't recall akura having used lube...
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  • From ANON - dragonkitty on February 14, 2004
    that is just tooo cute. i loved Malik's reaction, and then he just sort of blew it off for food.
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  • From ANON - Bambi on February 13, 2004
    Lol, a woman! Nope, Ryou's no woman! Great update, and your lemon was fine! You say it sucked?? My first was in "Deeper Than You Know", now THOSE sucked ass! Well great job, update soon.

    ~Bambi
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  • From ANON - Moztartz_Ballad on February 13, 2004
    Hey there ^^

    The fic cam out good. You did good on your first time with a lemon fic. ^_^
    I only caught jus just few mistakes. But, to me they are minor ones.
    If you would like to ask me what mistakes I found please be free to e-mail me!
    I can't til you continue the fic and I like to see what happens when Malik finds out that screaming was Ryou *grins*

    update soon

    Moztartz_Ballad
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  • From ANON - Ikyutakei on February 13, 2004
    So Ryou's a screamer, eh? interesting. well, this was pretty good for your first time tingting one. I liked it. But now I must go do some chores before my mom rips my head off. ja~
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  • From ANON - courtney on February 09, 2004
    There why did you stop it there. you are so evil. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ikyutakei on February 09, 2004
    Eight front and back pages? Damn. That's fucked up. Well, this is really starting to get good. Hopefully you'll get little homework so you can update sooner. ^_^ Ja~
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  • From YamiRynEnjeru on February 09, 2004
    ^_________^ Bakura&Ryou!! Yay!!
    Sorry, I'm a nutcase when it comes to this pairing *hee*
    Love it so far, can't wait for more! This is written so well, elentlent job ^_^
    Mmmm, hot, sweaty Bakura...*drools*
    Update soon!!
    ~YamiRynEnjeru
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on February 08, 2004
    Oh wow....that was SO hot!
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  • From ANON - Bambi on February 08, 2004
    Aww, I wanna see them fuck!!! ^^ Well, I guess I'm a little horny, but so? GREAT job. nice Bakura, I love him! ^_~ Update soon, your doing a great job!

    ~Bambi
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  • From ANON - crazieanimefan1 on February 08, 2004
    ^-^!!! LOVIN' EVERY MINUTE! KEEP UPDATING!
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  • From ANON - Now and Forever on February 08, 2004
    Update soon! ^^
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  • From ANON - Ikyutakei on February 08, 2004
    *sickers* teacher-slavedrivers; I agree. The chapter was good. (I am not capable of constructive criticism)^_^;; Well, continue this soon.(or whenever you can) Ja~
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  • From on February 08, 2004
    Oooh! You have to update soon! This story is so, so, I don't think 'amazing' is even good enough to describe it! So Bakura knows what Ryou is going to do? Mind-link omethmething? Great story, though! =)
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  • From ANON - Bambi on February 07, 2004
    NO NO NO! You ended it too soon! It was really cool, half-naked Bakura on black silk sheets, now that must be a sight to see! Update VERY soon damn it!

    ~Bambi
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