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Reviews for Joey the cleaner

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  • From ANON - Polka dot on March 11, 2004
    Naughty boys are always the best!
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  • From ANON - Shadow on March 07, 2004
    BUM BUM BUM WHY MUST IT BE A CLIFIE???? well ne way great story update soon plz!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on March 07, 2004
    Oh man, that was great, and sort of romantic. You left an evil cliff, but I like it; great work!
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
    LATER...
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  • From ANON - Kat on March 06, 2004
    awww, sweet beginning. LOL Seto should just give in and buy himself a mug that says "Make me late for work" I'm thinking thaey wey would happily do that every day. *bangs head on keyboard* Second cliffhanger tonight. Just not my day.
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  • From ANON - KC on March 06, 2004
    Me: i really like this story
    Yami: u said that already
    Me: i'm just saying that they do make a great couple
    Yami: yea, but i also do luv the lemons
    Me: that's your opinion, what are lemons?
    Yami: *frowns* i thought u knew
    Me: i thought they were a fruit or some sort
    Yami: your too innocent... *leaves room quickly*
    Me: *whispers to author* i know what lemons are, but don't want her to know. Anywayz, cnue nue 2 update!!! can't wait for the nexappiappie!!! continue!!!
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on March 06, 2004
    Great chapter. Ilook forward to the next one. So whos on the phone? Joey's dad? Yugi? Tristian? I think only Joey's dad whould effect him that way, but I may be wrong. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - ChibiMisu on March 03, 2004
    wow!! that lemon was HOT!! finally! go joey!!! please, please, please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - KC on March 03, 2004
    : HO: HOLY CRAP!!!! *wide eyes in shock*
    Yami: u surprised her actually
    Me: they finally did it!!! Go Joey for making the move!!!
    Yami: *snicker* yea, dressing up so sexy...
    Me: *laughs* guess so, but are you still going 2 update?
    Yami: please say that u will!!! can't wait 2 see what happens next after what they did!!!
    Me: too shy to say the word koi? *grins*
    Yami: no...i'm not!!!
    Me: i can see it!!! let's hear the word!!!
    Yami: FINE!!! THEY FINALLY HAD SEX!!! HAPPY?!
    Me: *snicker* definitley!!!
    Yami: *leaves and grumbles something about revenge on me*
    Me: *laughs* anywayz, please continue 2 update!!! can't wait 2 see what happens next!!! continue on!!! *runs after Yami*
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on March 03, 2004
    WOW! That has to be one of the hottest lemons I've read! That was absolutely great!
    LATER...
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  • From ANON - Terry on March 03, 2004
    Wow! That was a hot chapter! Keep updating! :)
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  • From ANON - Kat on March 03, 2004
    WOOHOO!! That was one hell of a lemon! My favorite chapter so far!
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  • From ANON - KS on February 29, 2004
    Really good chapter adn story! I hope you update sooN!
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  • From ANON - KC on February 26, 2004
    Me: yea! They both kissed!
    Yami: actually its more than that...
    Me: watch it, oh, go look in fanfiction.net for "JoeyWheelerKaiba Y Yami: that's her, she's making stories now that she gotten an e-mail
    Me: shut it, cause of my spanish teacher we were suppose to get an e-mail
    Yami: anywayz, please continue 2 update!!!
    Me: i can't wait 2 sore ore what happens next!!!
    Yami: continue! *grabs me and runs off*
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on February 26, 2004
    Awe, Mokuba, and just when it was getting good! Don't get me wrong I love the little guy, but still...Damn!
    -Anyway- Great update, please continu when you can!
    LATER...
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  • From ANON - Jane Silver on February 25, 2004
    Well, It's about time. I was starting to wounder if you had gotten writers block or something.
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