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Reviews for FIRST ANNIVERSARY

By : Kurxally9SOAD101
  • From ANON - maliksLove101 on February 22, 2004
    How old are these kids again?...their like what? 15...16...that really young to be having all of this sex...and how would you know what they do?*looks at darkly*...well anyway....to make this better i would put malik in it...well...a normal mali...not an all sexed up malik...u r probally thinking 'what the freaks wrong with maddy"...and you are right to do so*glare*.
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  • From on February 21, 2004
    Lgladglad he found those tickets. I like the idea of Malik/Marik (duh) a lot...but great job, nice lemon. I also like the idea of angst...but comedy is good too. Update soon!

    ~Bambi
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  • From ANON - Mandy D. on February 19, 2004
    I like the side pairings idea; probably the usual though. Yami/Yugi, Seto/Jou, you know. I know what you mean about the rape thing. It sorta brings bakura and ryou closer together. Newayz continue!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on February 19, 2004
    I LOVE RYOU/BAKURA!!! YEAH! I love this fic, please hurry and update soon!

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  • From Shakirah on February 19, 2004
    I apologize for not reviewing chapter 1, although I meant to. It's always refreshing to see a Ryou+Bakura fic where Ryou's not being tortured and sodimized against his will, although there's def. a strange appeal there. Anyway, I enjoyed both chapters, you're talented, and it is nice to read a comedy/fluffy story while reading angsty/dark stories. Side pairings are always fun, because it makes chapters longer... and that's good when the chapters are as well put together as your first two. I suppose this is just my long winded way of saying, I think with the way your story has already gone to have Ryou suffer at this point would be too much. Let him have some fun, cause you're right... it's literally like every other Ryou/Bakura story the guys being attacked or something. hehehe.... Update soon. I'm enjoying this. ^_^
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  • From ANON - EgyptianGoddess on February 19, 2004
    No! don't rape Ryou! pleeasse! he always gets picked on, one of the reasons why i love your story is because it isn't like that, and besides Ryou's too cute! ^_^ Yes you should definatly have side pairings! I would like to see Yami/Yugi and Marik/Malik, espically Marik/Malik, i don't see enough of those two, and they are so damn hot! ^__^ Hey maybe they could all be celebrating their anniversies too! And definatly humour, i'm getting sick of seeing all those dark, depressing fics out there at the moment, i want something funny. No offense to all the dark authors out there, there are some great dark authors/fics out there! ^_^ I'm just craving a comedy right now. Keep up the great work, this is a cool fic! ^__^

    ps: What happened to your challenge? Is it over?
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on February 19, 2004
    Oh wow....so hot! I love your fic so much! I don't wanna read Ryou getting raped. He's just so sweet and innocent.
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  • From ANON - Naomi on February 19, 2004
    Okay. I'll review.
    YAY RYOU FOUND DA TICKETS!! THEY'RE GOING TA EGYPT!
    I like egypt. And happiness between Ryou and 'Kura.
    GIMMIE MORE!
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on February 19, 2004
    It was a good chapter; nice lemon. And yes youshould have side couples, who? Seto/Jou, why? Because I lOVE THEM! And rape, sure, why not? Dark, ooohhh I love that even more!
    LATER...
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  • From ANON - black- kaytee on February 19, 2004
    No rape scene. Not to Ryou! But I would suggest more comedy. This is a great story though.
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  • From ANON - ChibiMisu on February 17, 2004
    i love your story!! ryou and bakura are one of my FAVORITE pairings!! ^^v update soon, okay!! i love your writing by the way!!
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  • From ANON - EgyptianGoddess on February 17, 2004
    Very hot! I like Bakura/Ryou in this fic. It's nice to see a fic where Bakura is beong nice to Ryou instead of abusing him. Keep it up! You'e good! ^_^
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  • From yugistenshi on February 17, 2004
    Great first chapter! Hopefully updates won't be too long, because that is one hell good of a Bakura/Ryou fic! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on February 17, 2004
    Well, it's good, and I think it's just going to get better. I do hope you continu soon, I can't wait for the next chapter.
    And the lemon was, damn hot!
    LATER...
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  • From ANON - black- kaytee on February 16, 2004
    Great story! I thought your lemon was very good. Of course, this is my favorite pairing. Please don't delete. It's a great story.
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