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Reviews for Fucking on the bed

By : Shiftgunx
  • From ANON - Fern on August 12, 2005
    Great story but.. i think maybe you should consider changing all the "Ryous" in the fic to "Bakura" simply because.. that was highly unlike ryou. Im sorry to rant, i really did like it but eh.. y'know. I cant see Ryou ever saying 'babe' and he was just so Bakura-ey. lol.
    Anwyays, i did like it. Good stuff.
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  • From ANON - Slytherinette on February 21, 2004
    O_o this made NO sense at all. It should be longer, with more paragraphs and words, and try doing it in more time then just 3 minutes. A Perfectly good couple, and maybe even an idea if more thought out and more clearly executed.
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  • From ANON - Meriah (Val) on February 20, 2004
    Aww! Kawaii! ^_^;;

    ...o_o
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