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Reviews for Lion's Pride: Rebirth of a Dream

By : ShiniMacCloud
  • From mkay3223 on February 13, 2010
    Please don't discontinue this story! Its so good and I really wish you would finish it. Are you just taking it off of here and putting it somewhere else, or are you trashing the story? :(
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  • From anniehdz on February 13, 2010
    Aww, it's so sad that it took me forever to find this story, it's even more sad that I've fallen in love with it and it's been almost 6 years since the last update!! (Yeah, I know you ended up either dropping or just plain forgetting about the story)
    If it isn't too much trouble, and you have some time on your hands do you think you could write a bit more? Maybe hastily wrap it up or something if you don't want to continue it. I'm sorry, it's just that at least then I'll know it's over and done and completely a lost cause, if not already, to get anymore out of it.
    Gomen Nasai, I'm very sorry to disturb you. Thank you for your time.
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  • From Phyrephreak2008 on February 06, 2010
    oh please please please continue i hope you work on this its really good
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  • From qeenofgames on March 07, 2004
    Cool I liked it and I was wondering if you would like to review anyone? anyone? for me get to chose a yaoi couple of your choice

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  • From ANON - Santurion on March 07, 2004
    That was great! Something new and good to enjoy.
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  • From ANON - Keishi on February 29, 2004
    Just a quick note to say, thank you for putting in that you had a co-author, though I would like to point out to anyone who cares that the co-author was originally not mentioned. I meant what I said, it is an interesting fic, which means I -had- read it, and that nice lil note about it not being, I believe, 'PLAGARISM' (sic) was not there. Anyway, thanks for adding it in, though are you sure your co-author has no problem with you revamping something that was a joint effort? Might want to take it up with her again.
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  • From ANON - Dchan on February 28, 2004
    The author DOES mention that she had a co-author, and from what I've heard, that's more credit than she deserves. She tends to make characters go COMPLETELY OOC, then wonder why the other person's char isn't responding to this the way she wants them to. And as much editing as this fic has unone,one, I doubt I'd even mention I had a co-author at all...she got removed in edit, too.

    As for the fic itself, great job, Shini. ^_^ I can't even imagine how much work it was to go through and weed out the crap and actually fix everything. I just comment on stuff like that in MST form. Hmmm....
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  • From ANON - Keishi on February 28, 2004
    Interesting fic, I think, however that it would have been much more enjoyable for me had your co-author been mentioned, at the very least in passing. As it's been previously stated, it is -very- poor form to neglect that not-so-small detail. However, not only is it bad form, it's also a form of plagiarism. Any contribtution, however s, sh, should be noted and recognized by an author, or -smiles beatifically- it's illegal.

    In order to avoid plagiarism, according to http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/wts/plagiarism.html, one must:

    'give credit whenever you use

    another person's idea, opinion, or theory;
    any facts, statistics, graphs, drawings--any pieces of information--that are not common kedgeedge;
    quotations of another person's actual spoken or written words; or
    paraphrase of another person's spoken or written words.' --indiana.edu 'Plagiarism: What It is and How to Recognize and Avoid It'

    Just so ya know. ^-^ (and I even gave an example! -gasp-)
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  • From ShiniMacCloud on February 25, 2004
    This fic has been previously posted on yahoo message boards like A Dragon's Lair.
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on February 20, 2004
    luvies the last part with the thought of tap dancing naked!!

    please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Terra on February 20, 2004
    Wonderful Job, Please continue soon. I don't think Seto is OOC here. His character comes off to me more in the way you portray him here than as the uncaring hard ass of other writers. Yes he can be tough but there is still a heart of an uncertain person there. Update, update.
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on February 20, 2004
    AWE! this fic is really cute and good. ^_^ it's a good perpective to...it's actually a relalistic oocness for Seto. it makes alot of sense to ^_^ -runs around- i hope to see more soon^_^
    ~Leaf~
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