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Reviews for Why you shouldn't drop soap in prison

By : darkvixen
  • From ANON - Plot bunny giver on August 06, 2006
    okay, for Yami and Yugi, have you read the story called The most dangerous game? This guy hunts people and kills them because he has lost intrest in all the other animals. Something about wanting a prey that can outsmart him.
    Anyway, make Yami the hunter, and Yugi the huntee. But instead of Yami Killing Yugi, He shoots him with a tranquilizing dart. And when Yugi wakes up, He has a nice suprise... sounds fun huh?
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  • From ANON - GraveFlower on December 27, 2005
    BEST ENDING EVER !!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Jessica on November 04, 2005
    That was a cute fic!...Well, as cute as prison and psychotic syndicate leaders can be...^^''...I thought that overall, the story was good...I think if you revised this story and flesh out alot of the scenes, this would be an awesome fic!...Like, I'm interested that Ryou killed Yugi, but I still don't know what Yugi did to Ryou...and when you did those flashback scenes, it would have been even more poignant if you didn't just 'copy and paste' the flashback, but elaborate on different aspects of the flashback (i.e. give us more details on how Ryou killed Yugi)...your OC character, Lelio sounds like a really great villain; I think you could have made him a little more sinister, though...and he was a bit careless in opening the door when he had a willing Ryou in the tub (though you did redeem yourself with having Malik caught by the guards)...and Ryou was a bit ditzy at times, too, like when he openly confronted Lelio to the fact that he knew! He could have at least lured him into some kind of insecurity (i.e. flirted with him and then threaten him to let him go)...but I like how you gave Ryou such a hard-ass persona; he's scarier than Bakura! It ~is~ always the quiet ones! ^_^...and the Shakespeare scene was one of my faves; I could totally see Bakura doin' that (though a bit OOC, I'll bite just cuz it's so hot!)...To sum it up: really intricate plot; needs to be fleshed out a bit; humerous, despite slight angst and violence...Still, nicely written! Know that this is in no way a flame; I just think that a story with this much potential, it should be looked over again! Thanks for sharing and good luck with your other fics! ^-^
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  • From on June 08, 2005
    ::: cheers in wild approval ::: WOOOO! the ending is the best !!! ::Anzu Glares murder at Les::
    Les: ::smiles 'innocently'::
    Anzu: ::turns he back::
    Les: ::waving a flag, wispering joyfully:: Yahhooo....
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  • From ANON - Nocturne22 on May 03, 2005
    This is f*cked up! You could definetely improve on the grammar and make the chapters and lemons longer and better, buts its quite good!
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  • From ANON - inuyasha on February 25, 2005
    yea its me again, i just finished reading the WHOLE story! wow!!!! very nice^^ YAY DEATH TO ANZU!
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  • From ANON - INUYASHA on February 25, 2005
    HOLY SHIT!!!! HE SHOT YUGI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EIGHT TIMES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!! i love yugi, but u gotta admit, THATS DAMN FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - INUYASHA on February 25, 2005
    O SHIT! AWESOME

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  • From ANON - TK on July 08, 2004
    Man I love this fic, also like that you added a GC song in your fic. Anywho, really do like it.
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  • From ANON - Jette Sinovia a.k.a. Soen Konsui on May 21, 2004
    Hi Eris-chan!!!! Long time no hear, huh? Great story! ^_^ Very sexy! Well, I miss you a lot, and really want to talk to you! IM me sometime, okay? Oh, and I'll be sending you an email sometime soon, so look 4 it! Luv always,

    Chel no baka
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  • From ANON - Hikari Rioki on April 21, 2004
    wow. good ending! Ryou and Bakura, in my opinion, is the best yaoi pairing ever! (even though i wish i could have Ryou all to myself...) Anyways, sorry i sorta stopped reading for awhile. i was sick and, well, i kept falling asleep at the computer. please let me know whenever you write another ygo story, k?
    Hikari Rioki, aka Bakura's Sworn Enemy
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  • From ANON - SweetMisery on April 15, 2004
    this was the greatest ending...and i LOVE THAT SONG!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - WIEJ~!!! on April 15, 2004
    WIEH!!!! The ending was great .... it even had my nickname in it!! .... WI!!! !!!
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  • From ANON - Terry on April 15, 2004
    I love the ending song/lemon! The finale with Anzu was a little random, but it made Anzu look flaky which is always funny. I like this dark side of Ryou, i hope it follows him in your other fics! Can't wait to read your next work.
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  • From ANON - cloeyvalentine on April 15, 2004
    -Swoops in and poses- I AGREE WITH MAKKY AND MARIK! >3 Write a ficcu starring them! Because all your fics are damn great, but never star them Dx


    So...Plot can be....-Think.- Oh! Makky can be an exotic dancer, Marik can be someone who goes and kiddnaps Makky, Baku gets pist since he owns teh club, and Ryou just goes and clings to Baku all the time.


    FEAR MY HALF ASS PLOT! -Bow-


    Anywhoo, about this fic:


    GODDAMNFUCKINGAWESOMEWISHTHEREWEREMORE!!! Lelio is hawt..And Kinky..Loved the MakkyxRyou scene. Damn hot.
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