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By : MarikIshtar77
  • From ANON - Kat on May 27, 2004
    WHOA!! Yugi did that to Mokuba?!?! Shiiiiiit, he did go all nutso! Dayum, I so did not see that one coming. Awwww one more chapter and it's done? Damn.

    Marik: Damn right! This rod of mine is good for something!
    Bakura: Don’t even go there, Ishtar........
    Ryou: Beat it you two, you’re distracting our readers! SHOO!

    Umm, them beating the.... NEVERMIND! *cursties* Hi, I'm Kat. I'll be the hentai fairy for today. *whispers* Those two doing what Ryou suggested would be a fantastic distraction though. SHHHHHHHH

    Can't wait for the next chapter and the sequel!!

    KB
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  • From ANON - Reili on May 26, 2004
    Ah no! Must know what happens! Gah, I'm so confused. But anyways. The story is ending already? NO! I love this story! Yup. Lovely lovely lemons appearing all over the place. Bwuah. BEST STORY EVER. Ah, but I am beginning to ramble so, I suck!

    ANYWAYS, now I'm looking forward to Friday! WHOOP.
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  • From ANON - Tanya M on May 26, 2004
    Hmm...*pretends she didn't hear authoress say anything about story's ending*... Joey/Seto cuteness!! Ryou/Malik cuteness!! Duke/Tristan cuteness!! Can't wait for next chapter...I want Seto to kick Mokie's hurter's ass!!

    Tanya~
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  • From JavaGreen on May 26, 2004
    *hugs!*

    I'll be oddly sad to see the story end. But happy at the same time to see all the threads resolved.

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  • From ANON - Kat on May 26, 2004
    Oooo great cha! I! I cracked up at Joey's unintentional impression of Scooby Doo. Dayum, him attacking Seto in the car was great! More of that please. The whole scene in Mokuba's room was really sweet. I think they make a good family. I seriously love his reaction to Seto asking "are you coming?" That was just perfect.

    Duke and Tristan... There's a couple that ought to spend more time fighting about who used the most hair gel than anything else. *smirks* Thaght ght to be fun to watch.

    Yaaaaay, I'm glad Ryou and Malik are all good now. They're cute together.

    Can't wait for part two of this chapter!!

    KB
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  • From Silvershadowfire on May 26, 2004
    Oh, I forgot three little things:

    "I went to Dairy Queen for a chili dog and must have passed out on my way home." LMAO. God that was funny.

    The little bit with Atemu at the end of the chappie. Funny and scary at the same time, ne?
    Yami SSF: Only in the thought that Atem might have ALL the powers of his namestake. Good lord, can you imagine the look on Bakura and Malik's faces if he produced kids all on his own? Poor Yugi would probably have a heart attack

    And last but not least: LOVE THE LEMONS! You write terrific, emotionally intense and detailed lemons. Keep it up!


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  • From Silvershadowfire on May 26, 2004
    Well, I don't know how you do it. To have kept my interest after 37 chapters is amazing. Sorry I didn't review sooner, but I just bit the bullent and opened my own account on here.

    Anyway, great story. I wanted to kick Yami from here to next week for interfering with Yugi and Joey's relationship, and I love what you're doing with Ryou and Bakura - the whole soul room thing is very cool. You even managed to make Marik-Malik likeable, and I'm not their greatest fan.

    Isis is a bitch. I know she'd pregnant and all, but as soon as she knew who the father was, she should have told Tristan and Duke. It isn't fair to either to keep them in the dark.

    Nevertheless, you have succeeded in making the characters all very real and very human; something that I admire gly.
    ly.

    Till next chapter! Je ne!
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  • From ANON - Kat on May 25, 2004
    Oh thank god! He didn't make that kind of deal with pegasus! *gets faint with relief* Well Hell... now who's the one that hurt Mokuba??

    “Smack my ass and call me Bakura?” Malik snickered sarcastically as he walked out of the bathroom. *starts chanting "do it, do it, do it"*

    “Joey, I slept with Pegasus." EWWWWWWW ew ew ew ew ew ew ew *shudders* Peggie-boy cooties. ewwwwwwww

    Awwwwww Joey and Seto are just too cute together! Yes, I'm biased. Shoot me. *smirks*

    *cracks up* Deus ex Machina?! I love it!!! Oooo tomorrow morning? SWEET!

    KB
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  • From ANON - Reili on May 25, 2004
    Gah! I don't know what it means! I'm such a twitnit. Um, I don't know if that's a word . . . meh. It's as much of a word as cowprint is as a colour! yup. That Joey and Seto episode was the best thing I've ever read in my life! So sweet! And are we ever going to figure out who did kidnap Mokuba? Because I'm really starting to lean towards aliens again . . . ACK I SUCK. Anyways, I love your story lots. Looking forward to tomorrow morning!
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  • From ANON - Tanya again on May 25, 2004
    Son of a bitch, the whole review didn't go through...here I am refreshing because there are too many damn connections, and then when the page finally loads...!!!

    Ok...I said something about Malik and Marik being sexy, something about wanting to steal Joey's tape and something about poor, poor Yugi!

    Also - :D to school being over - I still got 3 weeks :(
    Can't wait for next chapter!!

    Tanya~

    PS - goin' for a chili dog...hoping to pass out in a gutter and wake up to Malik...wanna come? ;)
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  • From ANON - TanyaM on May 25, 2004
    Aww, glad things worked out between Joey and Kaiba...but does this mean no revenge? >< "I put your boxers in the freezer because I *love* you, Seto..."
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  • From ANON - mariks_toy_hikaru on May 24, 2004
    Hikaru: gah! *throws arms around Marik* You can be sensitive!
    Marik: *shoves her off* go away, little fuck...
    Hikaru: *glomps him again and cuddles* Squeel!!!!
    Marik: ...why do I even bother...?
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  • From ANON - JavaGreen on May 22, 2004
    ((goes on because she's an idiot))

    Seto: *smirk* explains where you two came from.

    Marik and Bakura: O.O!

    Yami: Can't I have any alone time?

    Marik: Seto, you've managed to both disgust and frighten me...

    Bakura: there's a first, does he get a prize?

    Seto: It explains alot don't you think?

    Yami: *pulls his pants up, throws up his arms in frustration and stomps off*

    ((ok, I'm done now))
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  • From ANON - JavaGreen on May 22, 2004
    Ah, so the truth behind Seto's seemingly foul plotting begins to be revealed. Yay!

    *chuckles as the image invades her mind*

    Yami: *reaches down and begins to touch himself slowly, eyes closed, a hoarse moan escaping his lips*

    Bakura: For Ra's sake Pharaoh, put that away!

    Malik: Gods yes, the last thing we need is for you to be secreteing spawgaingain_.
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  • From ANON - Kat on May 22, 2004
    WHAT!??! Seto set up his own brother for kidnapping?! That #*$%^$ bastard! *fumes and snarls*
    Wooohooo, great lemon!!

    “I went to Dairy Queen for a chili dog. I must have passed out on my way back home.” *chokes on her soda then falls over laughing* Oh my god *wakes household up with hysterics* Best line ever!!! Oh crap! The last author's note.... Shiiit, I'm gonna start wheezing soon. *shakes head* I think Atemu needs a really biiiig towel!

    *wanders off cackling*

    KB

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