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Reviews for The Return

By : rayemars
  • From ANON - dogmatix on October 03, 2005
    Feeling very sorry for poor Ryou and dearly want to smack Bakura. *whuff* I just finished the previous chapter and read the note for this one and thought I'd comment(and if you have this in a later chapter, I apologize for wasting your time ^.^;; ). 'Pharaoh' ~is~ an Egyptian word. It's originally 'per a'a', or 'the great house', and meant the palace, not so much the god-king. By the New Kingdom(which is roughly 3000 years ago and when Yami would have been on the throne), 'per a'a' had become shorthand for the person - the god-king - who lived ~in~ the palace.
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  • From ANON - Elys on June 06, 2005
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    i'll shoot my self if you don't continu, J/K but please! you must up date!
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  • From ANON - Elys on June 06, 2005
    i love it! you must undiscontune this story! please! this is the most beliveable story that i've ever read! please???????
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  • From ANON - Elys on June 06, 2005
    Oh My GOD! you have to undiscontinu this! PLEASE (Puppydog eyes) PLEASE?????????????????????????? i will give you my undieing love if you do! (not that you really would want it) I love all of your stories! please???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? it's so inresting, you must contenu. please?!
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  • From ANON - aramis_chan on January 25, 2005
    This story is amazing... I think it’s the best, most believable (if you can call it that, I mean I do now think that this is exactly what happened to them) Ryou-Bakura I ever came across (together with “Possessionem Regis”).
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  • From ANON - Tjay on November 10, 2004
    you have to finish this... please don't stop! I really like it! *begs*
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  • From ANON - Kamikakushi on September 25, 2004
    Gawd...I truly love this fic... It's so well written, save for the irritating English names...But other than that, it's definately one of my favourite YGO fics of all time! ^^; I wish there were a little more lemon scenes, though...
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  • From ANON - day dreamer on September 01, 2004
    Your story is exellent! I enjoy it muchly but its rather depressing when you read it all at once.
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  • From ANON - letainajup on August 29, 2004
    HOORAY! I'm so glad you've updated! Poor Ryou, he needed more camera time in the anime - that's why I love that you're going by the story in a way and ellaborating on the scenes! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From SpiritDancer1 on August 29, 2004
    This is one of my favorite stories and I hope you update soon! I love your writing style--quite creative and interesting. I also like your take on Ryou and Bakura's relationship, very intense and involved.
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  • From ANON - Letainajup on July 10, 2004
    I like how this chapter summed up the episode of Bakura and the others duel on duelist kingdom, one of my first episodes I saw ;p Poor Bakura, but I can actually see this all happening throughout the story! Can't wait to read more, great job!
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  • From ANON - Eden on March 20, 2004
    Oh!!! You MUST update!!!! This is great! and i need sooo much more!!! =^.^= pleeeeaaaaase!!! plz email me when you update
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  • From ANON - WAT;LJAF on March 05, 2004
    AHHHHHHHHH YOU HAVE TA UNDATE SOON OR IM GONNA DIE X( PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE
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  • From itsallgood on January 22, 2004
    Wow...chapter 14 was amazing. You are insanely talented and you'd better never stop writing.
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  • From ANON - Elle-Fate2x1 on November 09, 2003
    This is such a great fic!!! I love! It! It's so angsty and it really captures a side of the Yu-Gi-Oh series that was never even speculated on. It's awsome!! I can't wait to see whappeappens in the next chapter!!
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