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By : Kyoko
  • From ANON - moon on March 26, 2004
    more more more... Let me know when you update
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  • From ANON - Kiyteoura on March 24, 2004
    Aww. . .!!!! I feel horrible for poor Jou! And Seto too! *sniffles* Update soon so hopefully my tears will go away. . . *sniffle*
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  • From ANON - KO on March 24, 2004
    Uh hm... the first chapter was written well, but what the hell happen to the second and third one? Your grammar and syntax went to SHIT.
    I REALLY suggest you get your chapters’ beta before posting

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  • From ANON - KC on March 24, 2004
    Me: yay, it updated!!!
    Yami: *sighs* oh boy...
    Me: CONTINUE PLEASE!!!
    Yami: here we go again...
    Me: can't wait for the next chapter!!!
    Yami: *leaves room*
    Me: poor jou in the real world, his worried i hope in the later chapters that you put Seto/Joey together!!! well, anywayz, continue 2 update and i can't wait for more!!! *runs after Yami*
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  • From ANON - MOFAF on March 24, 2004
    Hope Seto is able to get back at Tusaka for what he's doing to both he and Joey in the alternate universe as well as get things going better for himself, Joey and Mokuba.

    In the real world hope Seto wakes up soon so that he can be with Joey.

    Hope both Seto's are able to find a way back to thier own universe and thier own Joey and Mokuba.
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  • From ANON - Terry on March 24, 2004
    Ahhh coma Joey was almost raped, real Joey was almost raped. Both Sete lye lying unconscious! I love it! Please update soon! These is definitely a suspense thriller!
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on March 23, 2004
    Love it. I am really enjoying this stroy. Poor Jou in both worlds. I hope SEto comes back to the real soon. Too long in the coma could be a bad thing. Man hitting the car of the person you love that is rough. waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kat on March 23, 2004
    ooo poor Seto. Sheesh, poor Joey. Ewwww, weird peeping tom!! *reads last part* Whoa... Joey caused the accident?! Oh man... I hope the next chapter comes soon! I'm gonna go nuts waiting!
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  • From ANON - Terry on March 20, 2004
    Blasted it! Kaiba can't get a break even in his fanasty world! Freaking ppl. i'm really into this story! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kat on March 20, 2004
    Oooo that description of Jou! Lordy, drool-worthy. It's a weird world you're building and I so want to know what you're going to do next! I hope you update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on March 20, 2004
    Great chapter. Poor Jou, ugly dirty old man after him. So when si Seto going to realize oth other life is or would be better had Jou in it. I mean he can go back when he wakes up can't he? This is one of those comadreams stories? Anyway good chapter. waiting for the next one.
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  • From ANON - KC on March 20, 2004
    Me: wow, Joey doing a lap dance (i think)
    Yami: *sighs* want me to do one for u?
    Me: *blushes* NO! NOT NOW ANYWAYZ....
    yAMI: aw, but i think the author wants one too
    Me: *glares at author* see what u've done now?
    Yami: *laughs* its not the author's fault, its you
    Me: Me?! How?
    Yami: *snicker* wearing that sexy leather all over you and walking around....
    Me: YAMI! I WANTED TO WEAR THIS!
    Yami: *smirk* whatever....*leaves room*
    Me: anywayz, continue 2 update and i can't wait 2 see what happens next!!! *runs after Yami*
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  • From ANON - Rayne on March 20, 2004
    Wow. . .I can't wait for this to be updated.
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  • From ANON - dragonkitty on March 20, 2004
    I love this fic! The idea is sooo cute. Can't wait until the next part is updated.
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  • From ANON - Rurouni_agra on March 20, 2004
    This looks like it's gonna be good. Please update soon and often.
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