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Reviews for Lust, Longing, and a Videotape

By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - YamiLisa on April 09, 2004
    My my, that was... WOW!! Even though I don't know Yu-Gi-Oh, this was probably one of the best lemons I ever read. It got me interested in the series. I had to look up Seto on the internet. Woohoo, yummi! Keep writing!
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  • From darkvixen on April 04, 2004
    this was the best fucking pwp i have ever read in my whole ra damned life. you rock out loud! I'm am so serious, you kick ass with a metal spike boot!
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  • From ANON - Cami on April 02, 2004
    Wow, hon. That was an awesome lemon! Beautifully written and I really liked how the plot just flowed along... oh and the really descripitive intercourse wasn't so bad either. ^_^ You don't know how many people (often including myself) skip over the foreplay when they write yaoi lemon. Anyway, I'm rambling so I'll stop now (I'm gonna go read the sequel!).

    -Cami

    *!!!* Oh and you don't know how good it is to see good grammer and spelling...I'm a stickler for it... (yes I know homicidal is spelt wrong in my E-mail, but THAT was on PURPOSE ~_^) *!!!*
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  • From ANON - Aliana on April 01, 2004
    *starry eyes*This was awesome!!!*hands a Kaiba plushie* I loved the little name calling while they fucked XD. Please write more like this!!! Well, Cya!!*goes off to read the sequel*
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  • From on March 30, 2004
    In ur profile where u say 'im into yugioh, inuyasha, and some other stuff' .. is this the stuff that u were talking about? all in all i think u did a real good job writing this, i liked it alot! btw, where do u get ur inspirations for stu stuff? its really hardcore sincsince im pretty sure ur a chick, how come u know so much about boys gettin it on?? haha sorry if thats askin too much from ya, im just curious.. but im sure u know what that feels like right?
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  • From ANON - Kokoru on March 24, 2004
    Christ, girl, that was so fucking awesome! Lol, I was getting wet from Yami jerking off.. phew.. The rest of that story did me in, I can tell you that.. ^_~ The pervert in me likey. Lol. Way to go!

    -Kokoru
    .. who was supposed to be doing a paper but was sidetracked by this yummy story..
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  • From ANON - Yami_Tenshi on March 21, 2004
    Wow... like, oh wow!

    That was AMAZING! Yami makes such a good bitch... *snicker* I loved the constant antagonism, it just made it so much sexier. Yami x Srockrocks, but I think you brought it to new heights. Well done!

    Hmm... anybody got an ice cube?

    Yami_Tenshi
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  • From ANON - Z on March 21, 2004
    WOW...that was...reall good. One of those toe curling stories! ^_^ Good job
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  • From ANON - yamislove on March 21, 2004
    OMG!! That was so hot!!! I love your fic!
    Please write more !! I just love these two.

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  • From ANON - Kendra on March 21, 2004
    OMG!!!!!! You are a fucking lemon goddess. That was incredible. I hope you write more stories withe even more lemons. That was amazing, spectacular, wonderful,and did I mention how incredible that was. Great job.
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  • From ANON - Terry on March 21, 2004
    :Mouth refuse to close:
    :Eyes refuse to blink:
    Wow. I didn't think it could be done, but I'm utterly amazed by this...I don't know what else to type 'cept that was the best lemon i've read in....EVER! Great job.
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  • From ANON - crimsonvioleteyes on March 21, 2004
    Wow. Awesome job. That's all I can say. Hot, steamy, kinky and absolutely incredible.

    cve
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  • From ANON - aniron legolas on March 21, 2004
    Oh my TOTAL GOSH! That was hot!!! Thank you so much for entering this into my Chage. ge. Geez, I'll have a hard time choosing a winner! Anyway, great work. I hope you'll consider writing more Seto/Yami!

    Great job and PLEASE write more

    AL
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  • From ANON - N-J on March 21, 2004
    O_O Oh gods that was Great!!! write more of thise please i am so glad I leard how to read english!!!!!!!!
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  • From on March 21, 2004
    Holy! Holy! Holy!!

    What can I possibly say? It was long, it was detailed and the writing was exquisite. You put so much detail in and throughout the entire story managed to do a wonderful job with the characterizations. My favourite couple written into such wonderfully descriptive sences, by such a talented author; what more could I ask for? I'm not just sucking up either. This was seriously a great fic.

    All I can say is: the next time you feel like getting carried away, go for it!

    ~Blue September~
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