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Reviews for Lust, Longing, and a Videotape

By : Shakirah
  • From Pridestucks on August 16, 2016

    I understand that this was written years and years ago and even though the writing isn't horrible ( typos and such ) I can't help but be slightly grossed out. I don't feel like Kaiba would be into "dirty talk" and I was more than a little uncomfortable with the dubious consent that this fic was based off of. Certain parts were funny, such as when Kaiba's talking about his meat...Or any part with Mokuba ( Mokuba is my favorite, he's a good kid ). While this isn't the best fic I've read it's decent. I in no way intend to be flaming you, but I give this a 1.5/5. I won't be reading the rest of this "series" ( regretably ). If you get this, thanks for the ride?


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  • From DrummerDancer on December 25, 2015
    This story is one of my favorites on this site. It's hot and dirty and all sorts of messed up.
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  • From heidlebergchick on April 22, 2009
    Absolutely great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Rosebud on February 04, 2007
    This was so damn HOT!
    I got to the end and I wanted to read more lol!
    Awesome job!
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  • From Iyasu on July 11, 2006
    *eyes are very wide* Um... whoa... I have nothing to say, really... it was just that good...
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  • From ANON - RWThunder on August 30, 2005
    I admire you. I love S/Y and I always thought that their get-togethers might be something like this but I could NEVER write it. You're amazing, hats off to you. That, and PLEASE write more S/Y fics, you're obviously really good at it.

    Love and Hugs,
    Thunder
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  • From ANON - ... on July 30, 2005
    W00t! Bondage! This fic is seriously flawless!!
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  • From ANON - Valonsbiznitch on July 07, 2005
    oh my god. *speechless* that was the MOST erotic thing ive ever read. You definetly have a gift. Fuck me it was just so..so..everything! *cannot find words to express complete and utter hotness* ...

    *re-reads several times*...

    Kinkey fuckers.
    WRITE ANOTHER! lol. Its too good not to write something similar again.
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  • From ANON - shiba on June 01, 2005
    oh......WOW..... i......i.....i cant describe ..... wow.....i don't know what to say...i loved it... it was amazing...holy crap..... i hope you write more yami/seto pairings.......now i beleive i have something that i need to cool off.

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  • From ANON - Harpie Yamazaki on December 23, 2004
    Wow... best Seto/Yami fic I've ever read. Seriously. Awesome...
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  • From ANON - zehlyah on October 16, 2004
    Amazing
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on August 11, 2004
    Oh. My. God. -pantsandsweats- Sooo fucking /HOT/! That was, like, sex for my eyes. No joke.

    "I ate your fucking cookies, Kaiba."

    "If I taste you am I going to taste cookie?"

    LMAO. I loved those lines, too! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on August 06, 2004
    Ummm...Wow. That was intense - and that was your first? Lordy...I'm gonna have to wake up my fiancee now...Bye!
    PS - Great little 2 parter - I think that's the longest (and one of the best) lemons I've ever read.
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  • From ANON - aè a on June 03, 2004
    Poor Yami! Seto's a hard guy to keep happy *blinks* Erm, sad pun there, lol. Why I have suddenly started reading all of these kinda lemon fics I have no idea! You're a very good writer ^^ All I can say is good thing the room was sound proof and little Moki didn't come in. He'd be scarred! Five hours? Cruel Seto! Really cruel.
    Slán slán!
    ~Ashla~
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  • From itsallgood on May 17, 2004
    o.O Dear God you are one incredible lemon writer. *fans self* This is some good stuff. I'm tempted to make extremely lewd comments now, but I won't. I am so reading every last one of your fics, anwishwish that aff.net had a favourite author's section so I could keep track of your stories better.
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