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Reviews for Rivals With Benefits

By : Shakirah
  • From Rosebud on February 04, 2007
    This is the best Seto/Yami story I have ever read.
    Simply put, I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Iyasu on July 12, 2006
    That was too intense! I've never read anything that was so... so... dramatic! (That's not really the word I'm looking for, but I can't really think straight after reading your fic.) I got worried for the both of them. Talk about original... whew... I'm all disoriented like I've really ridden a roller-coaster!
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  • From HemNtjrSeth on October 11, 2005
    *cries* I've been addicted to this story for last 3 days... like a good book, I just didn't want to put it down... but I'm glad it's over... the emotions were getting to me... and now I can actually focus on doing my schoolwork... heh... thanks for a thrilling fic... I am forever in your debt... -Hem Ntjr Seth-
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  • From ANON - Minx on September 01, 2005
    It was good but.. im kind of confused. They're together again?.. but wouldnt it just go in the direction and become all 'ah i love you and hate you and hurt me.. wait no not that much' thing again. I think i get it but.. If you want to know what i personally think about the ending - i think - that Yami would go back and tell the others about him and Seto being together again and.. Bakura would go kill him. Its not that i dont like the ending *actually does like it* i just dont think the others would stand for it y'know?
    ANYWHO *stops rambling* I liked it. It wasnt as good as 'videotape' but im still glad i stumbled across it ^^

    Any chance of writing another Yugi/Ryou fic? *loves heartshipping* there just isnt enough of it *sighs*
    OKay, last words?: Greeeat fic! ^_____________________________________________________________________________^
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  • From ANON - Kim on November 22, 2004
    Love love LOVE you for writing this fanfic!!! I've never read anything as good as this in my entire life (and I read a fucking lot), so thank you so much for it!
    When I stumbled over this fic I'd never imagined that I would spent the whole night sitting in front of my computer because I couldn't stop reading it! Wasn't helping me in school the next day but who cares? ;) I just wanted to let you know that nobody ever wrote such an incredible good fic, and most of all I enjoyed the dirty language and the naughty sex. So, please never stop writing fanfics, will you?!
    Thank you for everything,
    *hugs and kisses

    Kim
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  • From on September 20, 2004
    Your are sooooo good! This has had to be the best Seto/Yami story I have ever read. And trust me I have read a lot. I will have no choice but to indulge in all the other stories you have posted! Keep that lemony goodness coming ;-)
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  • From ANON - Kaiserwomon on August 25, 2004
    I never post a review, despite the fact that I like what I read, but.......your writing......has left me in awe. It has even left my yami.....in awe. That.....is a great accomplishment in itself. Thtenstense emotions, the suspence...IT'S ALL GOOD!!! Kaiser and I both applaud you for this well written piece of literary art. Maybe when I get up off my lazy ass and start typing, you can come check out my story, too. Bleh....I just need some motivation. Maybe you could give me a few pointers; er'ser's too busy laying out the code for his new video game to help at the moment * glares at him* Oh well...T_T
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  • From ANON - Aisu Megami on August 18, 2004
    NOOOO!!!! YOU CAN'T TELL ME IT'S OVER! ;______; *cries waterfall tears* That was the best Seto/Yami hentai ficcie I have ever read in all of my time of loving this couple. You really brought out their true hatred and love for each other, and that's what I think made this story a success...Not to mention your good job on the lemons. ^^ Truely enjoyable...My favorite part was when Yami tied Seto to that chair XD This story of your even made me cry at parts...Very angsty, I wish it wasn't over...VV there aren't enough stories of this couple out there. No one understands the beauty of them, their hatred and love for each other, mingled...You're the only Author who's really brought out this feature in the Seto/Yami coupling...I hope you wright more stories of this couple, i Just can't get enough of your wrighting. ^^ Thanks for the wrighting this beatuiful story! ^_^ Love ya!.......In a non-homosexual way, you understand... O.o

    ~Aisu Megami
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  • From ANON - Renee on May 18, 2004
    Holy shit...this was one amazing story. It had me horrified, turned on, angsty and laughing all at the same time. Well, not exactly at the same time, but when it was appropriate. You are one kickass writer and I salute you hereforth and now. Wow. I feel kind of speechless; you are a GOD.
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  • From ANON - Silika on May 01, 2004
    Wonderful! It was amazing how you made something negative into something...uh... not so negative? I guess their relationship wasn't the best ever but then who's is? Anyways I loved your story and you are an amazing author. Eh. Just thought I'd relay that to ya. Blessed be!
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  • From ANON - YamiLisa on April 21, 2004
    Hello Shakster

    So once again, I am amazed. I have read “Lust, longing and a videotape” as well and was thrilled to see there was a sequel to it. Just like “Lust, longing and a videotape”, this one is going straight to my recommendation list. I hadn’t expected it to turn out like this though. The lhatehate relationship going on between the two of them was sometimes weird, but it was also good because you didn’t know what would happen next with all those mood swings. The lemons were awesome, I liked the name calling too. I didn’t like all the blood though. I once saw a scene on TV (by accident, of course ^_~) where a couple made love, somehow all covered in blood, and I’m telling ya, that was not a pretty sight. Very icky.
    At the ending too, you said it was going to be a happy ending, but the fact that Seto was in that “I’m gonna ravish you”-mode and Yami at first fought back but then was like “Hurt me, I like it” made that very doubtful. Like it would start all over again. Also, the entire story gave the impression it just *couldn’t* have a happy ending. But I’m glad it did.
    The Ryou/Yugi lemon was also very nice. It was just sooo cute. It was very original how you alternated between the violent part of Yami and Seto and then the sheer sappiness and sweetness of Ryou and Yugi.
    Maybe you’ll also be happy to know that I started watching the series because of you, if only to get to know the characters better. I know, there is the internet where you can find tons of character profiles, probably, but that’s not that same.
    I know this was freakishly long, but I got a lot to say, so I said it.

    Bye, keep writing!

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  • From ANON - Cinder on April 19, 2004
    Yay!
    That was fantastical!
    *Does the Happy Dance*
    - Cinder
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  • From ANON - yaoilovergirl on April 17, 2004
    I just stumbled over your fanfic and what can I say...I got hooked! It's so incredible, the way you describe Setos and Yamis feelings and these conflicting emotions between them. You're amazing, really!!! I'm at a loss for words here...At first I only wanted to take a quick look inside this fic, but in the end I read the whole thing in one go! And I (personally) don't think you should write an epilouge. It's a perfect ending as it is. But that's only my opinion and of you decide to write one, I surely will read it. Anyway, all I wanted to say was: thanks for this great piece of work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 17, 2004
    aww i'm glad it ended like that...as twisted a relationship as it was. you did an excellent job!
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  • From ANON - Eliza on April 16, 2004
    Correction to my email address: ewright1180@hotmail.com
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