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Reviews for Rivals With Benefits

By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - Eliza on April 16, 2004
    Excuse me BlackWindow, your comments were extremely inflammatory.

    " *stickz her tongue out at stupid evil "Eliza" chick*…i suggest u apologize to this wonderful writer before i unleash some of my cruzan ass kickin' on ya! -_-"

    Your threats are problematic in a five-fold manner. First, you are addressing a stranger, myself, who you do not know, and know nothing about. Secondly, your choice to make the threats online is significant in that you are cowering behind your computer. Thirdly, any derogatory comments can be sent to me directly, not put on display for the whole pervert community to read. Fourth, you assert some loyalty and towards Shakster; please get in touch with reality, she is not a friend of yours. Lastly, my initial review of Shakster’s story was completely appropriate because, in fact, it was included in the REVIEW portion of this site.

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  • From ANON - blackwidow10 on April 15, 2004
    oh, and i have to get my two centz in to that bitch who flamed u:

    *stickz her tongue out at stupid evil "Eliza" chick*
    u just dun know good storiez, how can u be on aff.net in the yaoi section of YGO, and not expect some sort of perverted thing? really, i would like to know why in tha hell u r here if u dont like what u r reading.
    i suggest u apologize to this wonderful writer before i unleash some of my cruzan ass kickin' on ya! -_-

    there im done. again, great job on tha story girl, keep up tha good work! *bowz to almighty powerful writer of amazing seto/yami fic*
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  • From ANON - blackwidow10 on April 15, 2004
    *squealz* Yay, u gave them a happy ending!! ^_^ i absolutely luv u!!!!!! but not like that... anywayz, this waz an incredible, fantastic, amazing, wonderful story from the mind of a very g and and creative writer. (could i have anymore adjectives? but really, i meant every word of it) and those lemonz were hot! ^_^ ur love/hate thing going from a weakness to a strength at the end waz really a great idea, and i luv Seto's idea, he's so smart. ^_^ geez im kinda smiley tonight... anywayz, i cant believe that this amazing story iz over already, (of course if i had my way it would go on for, like, 30,000 chapters, but, i have no say in the matter *poutz*), but i will live as soon as i get over the fact that there will be no more chapters...i guess i'll just have to go read ur other stories, huh? ^_^ great job, really, on this whole story, and the prequel of it, and i can only hope that i can write as good as u some day!
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  • From ANON - Moonlitspire on April 15, 2004
    *cheers* yup, i agree that was probably the best 'ending' that could happen. theyre both really too stubborn but smart in their own way. hmmm just wondering..what ever happened to that counselling appointment they had? o_O o well, it was a great ending nonetheless. kudos to you, shakster!
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  • From ANON - Horizont on April 15, 2004
    Hi.

    So, they simply accepted their weird way of emotion and found a way to live with it. What I still aks myself is, will they be able to control themselves or will things like Wednesday happen again? Do they want it to happen agaWillWill they go back to their violent relation ship but without the psychological damage? That would mean they will indeed be able to control themselves far enough not to cause any severe damage to their bodies anymore.
    This is how it ends. Wow, I didn't expect that. And what about Bakura? He's not getting any, poor spirit. ^^x

    I loved reading this, I almost finished that easter chocolate rabbit during the last part. Still, I'd like to know what Yugi's thinking about Yami's decision.

    Neway, you created a great piece of art. ^_^x
    Baba! Horizont
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  • From ANON - artimus on April 14, 2004
    it was great, i think that was a kick as story!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on April 14, 2004
    I loved your entire story. Your story was crazy to say the least. Don't ever quit writing cause your great. ^-^ -from 1 of your many fans
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  • From on April 14, 2004
    Oh! I'm sad now. It's over. What is there to look forward to?

    *sniff* This was one of the best Seto/Yami fan fictions ever written! I enjoyed it very much, so I hope that you're very proud of it.

    I don't know what else to say right now. I guess I'm speechless. You did an awesome job with the characters and I never really knew what to expect. Thank you for all your hard work.

    ~Blue September~
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  • From ANON - dragonkitty on April 14, 2004
    ....WOW...simply wow. i am pleased with the ending it seems to fit in with the characters...Hehehe i loved it.
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  • From ANON - Eliza on April 14, 2004
    ACIDFOLLOWER: Your responses really answered my questions, thank you!

    "Hmm.. Maybe because we’ick ick fucks?....Like, look at all the writers here, we’re all writing about the same guys in some case. Hell you want to see fucked up, I rape them! Yeah that’s right rape them! Torture them, and I’m PROUD OF IT!!!"


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  • From ANON - kylie on April 14, 2004
    That was a great ending. I really liked it a lot.
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  • From ANON - darkness on April 14, 2004
    I have to say that this has been one of the best stories I have ever written, the drama, the emotions, the hatred, the love!! It all worked together so well. Wow, you've got some talent there!! It's a shame it's ended but it ended well!!! Yey!! Definately a top favourite of mine!!
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  • From ANON - aniron legolas on April 14, 2004
    Great work! Absolutely splendid! I must admit, I didn't like the rough emotion in the beginning, but it ended so well! It was both a dark and a romantic fic, especially in the end. I loved it. Please write more SetoxYami stories!!!!

    luv lots, AL
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  • From ANON - yamislove on April 14, 2004
    Hi,

    OMG! girl that was so HOT! I think I need a cold shower ^_~.
    I really enjoy your story. I look forward to your next.
    Please write more about the pair. I never get bored reading them.

    Thanks for a great story!!
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  • From ANON - zero-delta on April 14, 2004
    This was a wonderfull storie!! I enjoyd every minut of It!! That was sucha sweet and cute ending!! you just half to write more stories like this!
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