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Reviews for Rivals With Benefits

By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - Kat on April 14, 2004
    Wow! Bitchin' ending! I had no clue how you'd wrap this up, but I love it! Made the whole roller coaster ride worth it. Seriously, I really loved this story. Thanks for fhinghing it and giving it this ending!

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  • From ANON - crimsonvioleteyes on April 14, 2004
    OH that was wonderful. THANK YOU my dear! *showers Shak with kisses, hanfs afs and various sex toys* I love this fic and I love you doll.

    AND WHOEVER THAT BITCH IS WHO FLAMED THIS WONDERFUL AUTHOR HAD BETTER JUST SHUT THE FUCK UP. Why the hell are you reading in the YAOI section of ADULTfanfiction.net?!!

    This story is awesome and doesn't deserve shit like that from any holier-than-thou dumb fuck bitch.


    cve


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  • From ANON - Eliza on April 13, 2004
    Why do you write about minors? How do you justify overly perverse scenarios and dialogue? Why is this a good idea in your mind, and is this the best way to use your apparent abundance of free time?

    Does anyone reading this story thing its strange to write about underage gay sex? Is this a hothatthat everyone can be openly proud of?
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  • From ANON - Horizont on April 13, 2004
    Hi there!

    I do have a severe problem finding words that can say what I think about this story. I like it, I really do. It makes me stay up until late in the night (it's almos 2 o'clock right now) to read it all. I can't stop thinking about it, ever since I read the first part I wondered how Seto's and Yami's realtionship would end and I just can't figure out how this could have a happy ending. The logical outcome would be Yami and/or Seto being dead.
    But other than that I love the way you can write lemons! Hell, they are violent (excluding that Yugi/Ryou of course! ^^;;), they are... I don't know, they have everything. They have that thing I can't name that makes them so...undescribable. Wow, that doesn't say anything. -.-x I don't want to male this a "I LOVE YOUR STORY PLEASE CONTINUE", that simply wouldn't do. This is a masterpiece.
    You make their difficult emotions so clear, it's like I was there, hearing them talk and everything, it feels like I can hear every single feeling they put inside their words. Exspecially when Yami said "I'm in love with you, Seto Kaiba.". Brilliant. I was reading Yami's part of the dialogue aloud; it's great.
    Well, I'm looking forward to the final part. I can't wait to read that happy ending... though I really cannot imagine what it could look like. But no matter what, this will always remain one of the best stories I've read. I do think that someone needs a certain talent to write like you do. I'd be happy to read more of your stories.

    By, you're doing a great job!
    Horizont

    PS: I know this got a bit... emotional? ^^x Sorry for writing such a long text that doesn't really say much.
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  • From ANON - Toyo Malloy on April 13, 2004
    I must say that this days it's so hard to find something good to read in the net, especially if the anime (or book etc.) is popular at the moment.... and there is really a lot of crap out there. I'm so happy I found this fic's. It's one of the b's I's I have read till now. The characters are so well written and it's good to see Yami no Yuugi and Seta Kaiba "in charater" !!!!! I normally don't loke it when Yami is written as the brokable guy or as a weakling (that he is not). It is often forgotten that he is the "YAMI" of the two of them. I love how you have written it in your story... I especially liked the part were Yami controlled Seto out of the passive. That was really great!^^ I hope will post the last chap soon. Can't wait to read it.
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  • From ANON - Anna EC on April 12, 2004
    I like how you are able to describe all those confusing emotions of Yami and Seto. Please update soon.
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  • From yugistenshi on April 12, 2004
    Sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry!!!! For not reviewing earlier!!!
    Now, that was one hell of a depressing chapter! I am pathetic and things get to me easily, but people who aren't touched by this have a heart of stone! You really make people feel the charecter'spaispair, how they are torn between their emotions. And I have to say, this is your greatest story so far, at least in my opinion!
    So, please update fast! I can't wait for the last chapter!
    Yugi's Tenshi
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  • From ANON - Kat on April 11, 2004
    Wow... I can't honestly whetwhether I want to see them together or not. I can say that this is ainlainly an emotional rollercoaster for me! I'm almost exhausted just reading it. On the other hand, I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! Emotional rollercoaster aside, this is a really good story.
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  • From ANON - blackwidow10 on April 11, 2004
    ok...i am officialy, completely, speechless right now...part of me wants to say "u luv him u hate, make up ur god damn mindz already!" but the other part wants to say "they make a great couple!" (this would be the sick twisted part of me that likez torturing boyz endlessly ^_^) am i making sense? i hope not. i feel like seto and yami right now...i luv u and hate u too! i luv ur story and the plot and everything about it, but i hate how torture me so by ending the chapter that way! and only one more?! *sobz hysterically* *sniff* guess i wasn't that speechless after all... update soon, update soon! (even th i h i dont want this story to end!)
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  • From ANON - artimus on April 11, 2004
    aww... the next chappy sounds cuuuttteee!... i cant wait!
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on April 11, 2004
    Maddening. don don't know what to say. It's nuts, but I love descriptive every word. I can even relate to this a little, and you made my eyes water reading this. Good job! No fic has touched me quite like this fic.

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  • From ANON - crimsonvioleteyes on April 11, 2004
    Ah, my dear--you're making me feel a bit better now. Such an intense, co-dependent, psychotic, lhatehate portrayal of my favorite characters. Bravo. This story is absolutely incredible. The way you portray them, bound to each other, unable to let go, is how I feel about them as well. Not as destructive as you describe them though. You promised a somewhat happy ending, so I'm holding you to that.

    take care--

    cve
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  • From ANON - Anna on April 11, 2004
    It's me again! o.o; well anyway...you got me addicted to this...it's like a soap opera but with a super rated R....they luck useing the words fuck and fucking....don't they....almost every other word is a sware word or "i hate you" Like i said it's addicting....keep updateing it! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Moonlitspire on April 11, 2004
    damn! this story is such an addiction! it's evil and depressing and suspenseful and fascinating and psychological and im shocked, traumatized ^^;;, appalled, and yet spellbound and absolutely loving it. (woah, run-on sentence there O_o) it's dredging up so maaw eaw emotions from me, since i don't think i've read something like this before. at some points, i was like O_O and ready to scream from all the things that were happening in the story. needless to say, the scenarios were very realistic in the sense that you didn't tone anything down from any given life situations where things were really spiralling out of control. *is in awe at your writing*; i certainly wouldnt hahe whe willpower to even IMAGINE torturing my favorite characters for such a long time. anyway, cha chapter was definitely a nicer wind-down from all the previous chapters. on the whole, this story is going to leave one hell of an impression. hope to see more soon, and good work!
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  • From ANON - kylie on April 11, 2004
    It's a very sad story but then it gets better and better. I really hope you continue this. You have my full support.
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