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Reviews for Rivals With Benefits

By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - Cami on April 11, 2004
    *Dies*

    Muraki-sama: Look at that, Shakster, you made her die. There is one thing that resurrect her: a happy ending. I'm counting on you. *Dramatic ER-like Music*
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  • From on April 11, 2004
    Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!! Oh Thank You!!!

    I'm tempted to say 'aww,' but it just doesn't seem appropriate. It was so good! The chapters just get better and better!! Oh man this is one of my favourite stories. You are such an awesome writer. I can't imagine the skill it must take to go from a 'plot-less' fic like "Lust, Longing and a Videotape" to a masterpiece like this.

    I love it!

    ~Blue~
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  • From ANON - zero-delta on April 11, 2004
    *Claps*Claps*Claps*Claps*!!! great I want to read more!!! and you gotta new fan right here pall!!! ^__________^ I must see what happens next!! your alredy finished right? so can you please put the last chappy like next week!! please!!! ^___^ oh and happy easter!!
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  • From ANON - Cinder on April 11, 2004
    Holy fuckmonkeys, that's good.
    *Giddy squeal*
    More soon would be spectacular.
    *Insane giggling*
    And now I'm late because I couldn't stop reading that.
    But it was worth it! I'm gonna be giddy for the rest of the day. Yay!
    - Cinder
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  • From on April 11, 2004
    Gods this story is so cool I love the angst. Yami and Seto's love life is heartbreaking really but fun to read yep great story.
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  • From ANON - blackwidow10 on April 11, 2004
    NO!!! Holy shit... you've got me addicted! I haven't reviewed this story before, or the first one (i don't think). I always forget, my memory is terrible. But you've done a great job on both stories, and I can't get enough! Usually it's hard for me to become so obssessed with a story but you've got me hooked! Keep up the good work...damn...and update soon! Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Cami on April 11, 2004
    ... ... ... ... ... ... ... Oh my Godfathers. *Sobbing* Why? Why all the HATE?! *Cue that "Where is the Love" song*

    I thank for for the lemon but I must admit I am guilty of speed reading the Yugi/Ryou parts, I mean at first I read every word but then all those bad things with Yami/Seto... I'll probably have to go back and re-read that part.

    Here's what I say 1. I'm glad Yugi/Ryou are in love (at least somebody is) 2. Will Yami ever be able to have anal sex again *snicker, I mean, Sobs* 3. Oh God, I'm becoming sadistic 4. What about Bakura? 5. Is the end (of the story) near? 6. Why no "I've always loved you" (And IIIIIIII e IIIIIII will always love yoooooou!) 7. Oh, I know why, because you like to see the poor innocent bishounen hurt 8. My reviews are too long 9. Why am I reading this at 11:30am Easter Sunday *Cue the "It's 11:30am do YOU know where your life is?" commercial* 10. Just to make it an even ten, I will say this, No matter what you decide to do with the Yami/Seto relationship I have faith that it will be a good decision/ending and not too cruel (?).

    -Cami The "I should be doing that report that's due to-morrow" Bunny

    P.S.- I'm beliving you about the not-sappy happy ending, don't get all evil and change it on me... Or else I'lve tve to get my Muraki-sama plushie on you *Muraki-sama plushie lifts bangs and glares with the big creepy eye.* Heh... ^_^;
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  • From ANON - Anna EC on April 11, 2004
    I really don't know what to say... The contrast between Seto/Yami and Yugi/Ryou was great! Please update, I want to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on April 11, 2004
    Fucking Damn, that was some crazy shit going on there. Yami, holy shit what will Seto do? and AWW you made this out to me. That was dark but holy, very good.
    I can't wait to see how you end this crazy fic. I think it's your best work so far.


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  • From ANON - crimsonvioleteyes on April 11, 2004
    You're breaking my heart with this story my dear. When an author writes for a certain pairing and love them together as I do, they come alive for said author. Your story is so exposively destructive and intense it has literally stopped me in my tracks. I love it and hate it at the same time. Your writing is absolutely amazing. Please do give them a happy ending. I won't write again until your story is done.

    take care--

    cve
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  • From ANON - Anna on April 11, 2004
    I love the story so far it's just with all the talk of death...DON'T LET ANYONE DIE IN THE STORY I BEG YOU!
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  • From ANON - Kat on April 11, 2004
    Good Lord. You weren't kidding when you said this chapter was more intense than the one before it! Damn! Dark doesn't even begin to cover it. Switching back and forth between Ryou/Yugi & Yami/Seto was fantastic. Really drove home the difference between a good and a bad relationship (still not sure Yami & Seto have one of those...). He's right (Yami in your teaser for the next chapter), no one ever said this was a love story....


    Picture was cool! Love it!
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  • From ANON - zero-delta on April 10, 2004
    I hate you!!! You’re so fucking evil!! ^___^ is the next chapter going to be the end? Is it going to be a happy ending were Yami and Seto stay together? Please tell me!! You must update this tomorrow!! I am begging you on my hands and knees!! You must you must!! This is one of the grea sto story’s I have ever read in my life!! You are the greatest YamixSeto writer I have ever seen!! No one can compare to you when you write SetoxYami!! No one!! You are truly amazing!! Tell me were I can sign on to your fan club!!
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  • From ANON - Kylie on April 10, 2004
    I have mixed feelings about this story. Will Yami be alright? It's a wonderful and terrible story at the same time. Please continue though. I have more like than I do hate for this story.
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  • From on April 10, 2004
    I'm feeling so many different emotions right now!

    Joy, because you updated! I feel like I've been waiting forever. I feel so relieved now.

    Anger! Because of that last statement. They can still end up together, right? Right?! *tears*

    More Joy! Because this last chapter was so troubling. Once again, two sides of my personality are at war.

    Oh man, I love this story!! You've made me so happy today. Thank you!
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