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Reviews for Rivals With Benefits

By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - DirtyD on April 10, 2004
    I don't think Acid is luring you to the darkside anymore, she as already brought you there. ^_^ But hey, this is awesome anyhow. It makes me wonder, the prequel to this story was written so that Seto wouldn't even use a riding crop on Yami, now he is f!@#$%! him to death, literally. Makes me wonder what horrors your next idea will hold. Nope not gonna to say anything thing on the chapter. Not until I expand my vocabulary and come up with some new words... how about vacuous? Wait, that's not the right word. Nevermind, I'll try again next review.
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  • From ANON - loveswhore on April 10, 2004
    OMFG! i looooved it! as ias intense. intensely erotic. I'ma read it again. the pic *looks at it again* was kawii! almost makes me happy enough to write again. can't wait until the next part.
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  • From ANON - Kiraya on April 09, 2004
    Wow... this is so fucking awesome... and as frighteningly dysfunctional as you're writing their relationship, I can honestly see Yami and Seto's relationship ending up like this, they both feel so intensely. I really hope they can figure out what the hell's going on between them emotionally...
    *shakes head* Just... wow. Amazing... I eagerly await the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - zro-delta on April 08, 2004
    Good luck on your test and I hopoe you update this on saturday please!! ^_____^ I love your storys!
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  • From ANON - Anna EC on April 08, 2004
    I love your story! You're a very good writer. I can't wait for the next chapter.
    But I hope there will be a happy end.
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on April 07, 2004
    HAHAHh oh man, I can;t help find this funny, you do them so well, hehe good job!
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  • From darkvixen on April 06, 2004
    “No, we’re going to finish that 500 piece aw paw puzzle.” Yugi rolled his eyes, but smiled. “Of course we’re having sex. At least, I hope so.” that was so fucking funny,
    i thought it was so cute/funny, in any case this is the best story, i only have threefavorite authors and your one of them, this story is cute, with lots of great sex^^

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  • From ANON - Fangirl #1 on April 06, 2004
    Damn... that got really serious. It's insane! They are like both bipolar, never know what mood they are going to be in next. What are you doing Shakster? Has Acid finally lured you to the darkside?
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  • From on April 06, 2004
    Darn, spelled awful wrong.

    But what matters is I forgot to wish you good luck on that exam of yours. So, good luck!!

    ~Blue September~
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  • From on April 06, 2004
    Oh dear.

    My love of angst is now warring desperately with my love for this couple. I don't know what I want more; for them to end up together or for something really, really aweful to happen. I'm hoping that there's a way I can have my cake and eat it too.

    Not sure what to make of the preview, but it got my spidey-sense tingling. Sensing something bad, and am looking forward to it!

    Perfect way to end the day!

    Thank you!

    ~Blue September~
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  • From ANON - Kat on April 06, 2004
    Wow.. really good chapter! Damn, they seriously need help. I cracked up at Bakura's 'YES! oh wait, what do I do now?' moment. That teaser for the next chapter is almost frightening, given what has happened so far! I can't wait for that to be posted.

    Good luck on the exam and I'm glad the lyrics worked!
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  • From ANON - Cami on April 06, 2004

    Me-oh-me-oh-me-oh-my. This is me : Oh they love each other?... Wait, they hate each other...that's a good boy Kaiba be nice to Yami...WHAT?! Yami! Seto was being nice to you, why'd you do that?! ***Anyway, yeah...

    This chapter (4) was great (As they always are), but it scared the bejesus out of me...please get them help before they kill each o...
    ...
    Why won't Yami eat? Why didn't Kaiba go "Oh, how long I have waited for that!" when Yami called him 'Baby'... OH! I know why, it's an ANGST (a damn good one at that). And thank you for taking the Yugi/Ryou thing into consideration... I'm so humbled!

    Anyways, I look foreward to the next chapter and GOOD LUCK ON YOUR EXAM! Wait, why are you reading this? Shouldn't you be STUDYING?! ~_^ As, always I'm in a pleasant suspense.

    - *Cami (New Fangirl of the Great and Powerful Shakster!) The Homicidal Bunny*
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  • From crimsonvioleteyes on April 05, 2004
    Doll--

    You've completely melted my brains with this story. I hope you have a happy ending for this! I can't write the way I was previously, not with your images in my head. I'm going to attempt ancient egypt for a while. Your story rocks. You rock. I'll write you later--

    take care--
    luv

    cve

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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on April 05, 2004
    HAHA damn Seto and Yami are me and my ex, I guess that's why we broke up huh? That fucking ass, oh well he was good in bed, that's all that matters right ^_~
    You are the shit girl! the shit! You're like so good at this love stuff! But i can see why! I love that little 90201 thingy I'm doing. Anyways keep it up, you rock you rock,
    you rock. They give you so much damn room in here, anyways, more kick ass fics alright!
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  • From darkvixen on April 04, 2004
    holy shit, that was the best, please write more, u so totally rock! now if u excuse me i have to try to get my lungs working 'cause i stoped breathing some where in the middle of your great writing
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