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Reviews for Bed of a Slave

By : Shiroma
  • From tinkletimekelly on June 05, 2008
    That was Hot! Sequel?
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  • From ANON - Myou-hime on October 11, 2005
    Love your story but you made one huge mistake. In your notes you mentioned wives jumping into their husbands cremation fires. That goes against the most basic rule of Egyptian burial. In order for the Ka, or spirit double, to survive, the body must remain intact. Hence, we have mummies. no ashes in Egypt, I'm afraid. That's a Roman tradition.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2005
    love it first person is a bit confusing when not told but i love it. your good
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  • From ANON - midnighteyes on October 03, 2005
    I thought it was a very good start... I do hope you update, and keep up with the story..
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  • From on February 16, 2005
    :)
    must I say more
    I loved it, question.
    Update?
    I really want Yugi to slove the puzzle and etc.
    I just love this paring!
    You are a really good writer, I mean if I had half your talent I'd be writing all the time.
    Hope there will be more.

    Carinto

    P.S Liked it so much I saved it in my computer
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  • From ANON - Yana on December 12, 2004
    whoo hoo I love Yami/Yugi stories
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on December 11, 2004
    Yay!!! What a clever idea...I loved it!!! And you wrote it well, too -- great descriptions!!! ^__^ Keep up the good work, and please fee free to write more/add to this story! Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2004
    loooved it!
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  • From ANON - Horizont on December 11, 2004
    That's a great one shot (it is one, right? ^^;; )! I liked reading it a lot, espesially the end. ^_^x

    I just wanted to add sth to the fact that slaves went around nude (which I really don't mind... XD):
    Wenn some one in egypt wore nothing more than a sheet aound his waist he was aleady considered naked (at least for protection reason they should wear sth). I don't mind your version though! ^_^x

    Ciao!
    ~Horizont
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  • From ANON - CiJay on September 25, 2004
    A beautiful fic! Wow! You have a talent for writing. *nodnods* You gotta write more!
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  • From ANON - SoulDreamer on July 28, 2004
    I really like your story. You have great talent in writing. Thanks for writing; it's greatly appreciated. Fantastic work here and keep up the fabulous work!
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  • From ANON - Zizi on March 28, 2004
    Update SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Sin on March 28, 2004
    COOL update soon, more s/m please. It's hard to find good fanfics of this pair now that some of the better writers that did this pair left AFF.
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  • From ANON - Arainaina on March 27, 2004
    This was very good please continue soon I want to know if yugi fiout out who the slave is but he'll probably find out that it's him and Yami right? anyway just a guess, for I won't really know until you post another chapter anyway's very good
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  • From ANON - Miss Reika on March 27, 2004
    This is really good. Keep up the good work. I really wanna see how this turnes out.
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