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By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - Nancy on June 09, 2004
    *sigh* I love your story, i cant help but feel sorry for yugi though...very angsty chapter!
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  • From ANON - crimsonvioleteyes on June 09, 2004
    I hate I have to keep switching my emails since someone is after my ass. Woman you are a writing machine. Amazing how you can torture poor little yuugi so much. He really could use some prozac and maybe some zoloft. Such a little slut, poor baby. And Jou and Tristan, wow your lemons are soooo long and detailed you always make me hot.
    PLEASE make Seto a little nicer, I know you will eventually. *sob* I just hate to see him so unfaithful to my little pharaoh.

    much love,

    cve
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  • From ANON - Scarlet Moonflow on June 09, 2004
    Wow! This chapter was really good! ^_^ I loved it, and poor Yugi, and I can't believe the whole Joey sleeping with Seto is out of the bag!

    Ooh, and I can't wait to see how Joey reacts when Yugi knows and how Joey acts towards Tristan's parents! Ooh! Soooo good!

    Keep wriitng!

    ^^
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  • From ANON - blackwidow10 on June 08, 2004
    *sigh* more awesomeness. how DO u do it? u really have a way with words. i just loved the little scene with joey and tristan. hehe, i like how tan tan doesnt take no for an answer. ^_^ just like me...and poor yugi! him and bakura really should be together. anywayz, time to go read that new chapter of possession (which i would have read when i got the email, had my comp not frozen. *growlz*)
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  • From ANON - Kat on June 08, 2004
    Oooo Bitchen chapter!! I loved the converstaion between Tristan's mom and Joey. DAYUM!!! I loved the lemon between Joey and Tristan even more!

    Yaaay for Bakura finally standing up to Yugi about his myriad of issues (he's screwed up 10 ways from Sunday, yes?)! His explaination for the nickname was so sweet though! Great job writing Yugi's breakdown. Painful to read (I've been in that bit of Hell myself), but really well written.

    Oh my god... Seto is so much a true bastard in this! You actually make me wish I could kick his scrawny ass from here to Hell and back! Wow and he's one of my favorites, too. Lordy I can't believe how pissed I got reg thg this chapter!

    I'm glad you said this would have a happy ending. I'd hate for Joey and Yugi to never speak to each other again. WHeeeeeeeeee only half way through?? Yaaaay, that means no withdrawl for quite some time!

    KB


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  • From ANON - Scarlet Moonflow on June 04, 2004
    Wow... This story is great. I never really likes Triston/Joey... But now, I kind of do! And you made my Bakura/Yugi obsession rise again! *giggles* I'm an obsessed fan of S/J, but it's good to take a break every once in awhile. ^_^

    You know what? This story is reality. All these emotions are so real and so well written up, I feel like I'm there. You know how to do this well. I must say, I'm jealous.

    One, you don't has SASS (Short Attention Span Syndrome) and that makes me impossible to continue any story. *giggles* Keep up the story, can't wait for the next chapter! Whee!! *giggles and grins*

    Scarlet
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  • From ANON - Horizont on June 03, 2004
    Hi Shakster!

    Thanks a lot for your mail! ^_^x I wouldn't dare to miss a new part of one ofr str stories, I'm alwasy looking forward to the next part! What I liked best about this part was Yugi's behaviour towards Joey's ralationship to Tristan - he's so cute and jealous! *hugs Yugi*
    You manage to describe his feelings really logically, given the fact that feelings can't be put into words completely neway. He's such a poor little thing, isn't he? ^_^x
    But could you please make Bakura a bit more... uhm... well, brutal, careless, whatever, Bakura-like? I mean, since he has feelings for Yugi it's only natural for him to care and to worry, but although Yugi had that two incidents he's not a child (okay, in a way, he is) and he can look after himself. An Bakura should know that Yugi needs his freedom.

    I can't wait for the next part! Do you think you could write Possession and Beauty a the same time...?
    Ciao-ciao!
    Horizont
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  • From ANON - Ashla on June 03, 2004
    Funfun fic! ^^ I do feel sorry for Ryou. Doesn't he see he's just being used? Poor lad. Can't wait for more ^^; Email me again? Laters!
    Slán slán!
    ~Ashla~
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  • From ANON - Tanya Maxwell on June 01, 2004
    Girl, you're a genius! I *heart* this ficcie, it's gorgeous. And that Bakura/Yugi scene was absolutely breathtaking! Great job!!

    Tanya~
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  • From ANON - Santurion on June 01, 2004
    *whines* Why are making Yugi so bad about Joey? Joey has finally found love and everything that goes with it. *sigh* But I guess I have to understand it's part of the story. And poor Ryou. I hope there'll be more happy future for him. Hm, I just understood something. I want you to change that story to more happy one, but you see, it's a bad thing. B/c it's your writing style, and if I can't take a little bit angst, too bad for me. B/c your stor rea really amazing! It's good that you always warn, when there is going to happen something. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Renee on June 01, 2004
    Wowie...awesome chapter once again. It's interesting the way you've portrayed Ryou in this story. I feel sorry for the poor guy. Malik's a creep. Tristan and Joey are so CUTE! ^^ Best wishes for your friend's arm to heal as quick as possible.
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  • From ANON - Kat on June 01, 2004
    OOOOO *squeals* New chapter! Umm, can we say Yugi's beyond confused about Joey and Tristan?? Can't have it both ways Babe... *G*

    *squeals louder* LEMON!! Oh my god... girl, you melted my ice cream! I'm so not kidding! Shiiiit Yugi is a riot in this story! Bakura has so many sweet moments that I barely recognize him. That is until he goes all Grrr and psycho, then I'd recognize his sexy self anywhere!

    Ohh, I love the gift Tristan gave Joey. He still managed to keep from being too sappy too. I don't know how ya did that!

    Oh lordy a broken Ryou is a very sad and pitiful thing. Malik just gives me the heebie-jeebies! Difficult to do...

    Love the teaser!

    KB
    P.S. I'm glad you're writing two stories.... More for me to read! Yeah, I'm greedy. I admit it!
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  • From ANON - Kat on June 01, 2004
    OOOOO *squeals* New chapter! Umm, can we say Yugi's beyond confused about Joey and Tristan?? Can't have it both ways Babe... *G*

    *squeals louder* LEMON!! Oh my g. gi. girl, you melted my ice cream! I'm so not kidding! Shiiiit Yugi is a riot in this story! Bakura has so many sweet moments that I barely recognize him. That is until he goes all Grrr and psycho, then I'd recognize his sexy self anywhere!

    Ohh, I love the gift Tristan gave Joey. He still managed to keep from being too sappy too. I don't know how ya did that!

    Oh lordy a broken Ryou is a very sad and pitiful thing. Malik just gives me the heebie-jeebies! Difficult to do...

    Love the teaser!

    KB
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  • From ANON - DirtyD on June 01, 2004
    Wow, that is some shit, as the story goes on it’s getting harand and harder for everyone to walk. (In more ways then one...) I have to tell you, through it all Yugi is by far my favorite character. (With cocky/kinky Tristan in close second.) His sluttly, sexy ways and angst is exciting me beyond comprehension. I hope your satisfied with your smug self smut lord, havehave me squealing like a pig and twice as dirty. I love every second of it too.
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  • From ANON - Horizont on May 31, 2004
    Hey there!

    I finally managed to read up to the 9th part and WOW I can't wait to read on! Bakura is sooo lovely! Although I can't get enough of him being egocentric and meand and everything I love to see him caring for Yugi, it's cute.
    Oh, and there's a main couple, too. ^^;; Tristan seems to be the perfect boyfriend - doesn't he have any weak spots or dark secrets? *courious*

    Okay, so update soon, pretty please?

    Ciao!
    Horizont
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