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By : Shakirah

From ANON - Ashla on May 31, 2004
This is a very, VERY good fic! ^^ I love the plot line you have to this, and yeah, yeah, the little firsty moments with the lads are written well too ^^;; Kinda a strange concept, though Yugi would make a cute pimp, heehee. Joey is so sweet! So glad that Trist is being just as nice to him. Seto's a jerk! *Bats him with a mallet* Oh you evil bugger! How could he be so mean to Joey? Taking advantage like that and then going back to Yami is just sick. And to think that there are probably people like that in the world. Scary thought.
Well done! ^^ Read the whole thing in one day coz I couldn't stop once I started, heehee. Nice work and I can't wait to see how all this actually turns out!
Sl�n sl�n!
~Ashla~

P.S. Please email me when you update! This FF.net doesn't send alerts :( Laters!
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From ANON - leaf zelindor on May 26, 2004
awe..Yugi and Bakura are cute...Yami...is..well..somewhat of an ass..And Jou and Tris..awe..XD i love this fic ^_^ ~Leaf~
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From ANON - Portia on May 25, 2004
Keep those chapters coming. I am enjoying this story very much.
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From ANON - Kat on May 25, 2004
*hugs* Oh gods, I am so glad you are okay after that accident!!! My stomach acted like your engine, dropped right out when I read that. Thank you for wearing your seat belt (I'm willing to bet you've just gotten at least one other person to start doing that) and may the bruises and soreness go away soon.

Now, on with the review! *G*
Am I the only one who thinks that Yami needs to use Seto's money to fucking buy a clue?!? *laughs* Ooo Tristan and Joey's conversation in the library. Love it! The Yugi and Bakura flashback... I just about fell over howling at the Pablo Personality comment. *snickers* "I didn't come here to chat." Goood, fucking funny.... *gasps* Oh shiiit, Bakura actually yelled Ryou's name?!?! Ooooo, big slip there Big Boy. *squeals* Awwww 'Kura and Yugi are just sooo cute together! You are the only author that makes them look good together too!

*starts reading the scene where Joey confesses to Tristan about Seto and grabs the kleenex* Ohhh Tristan doesn't hate him? *sniffles* That's so sweeeet. I really love how you write Joey's switches between strength and vulnerability. He's such a great character in this story. *swats author gently - musn't make the bruises worse* I still can't believe you actually have made Tristan soo damned lovable! *jaw drops* Whoa... Malik was uke for Tristan? Holy effing caca!!! Damn... Ryou's really fubar'd, ain't he??

Ooooo teaser for the next chapter sounds good!! *snickers* What do you mean "things are about to get good"? They already are!! However, promise duely noted. *G* Glad you're safe.

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From ANON - blackwidow10 on May 24, 2004
ok, i owe u about three chapters worth of reviews, cause my computer is a piece of crap. awesome, awesome, awesomeness. i couldn't get over yugi's b-day present to yami! LOL!! that waz so funny!! on the other hand, seto iz a jerk!!! poor joey. but it's kool that he finally got to tell someone about that. joey and tristan make the cutest couple, especially the way u write it! and so do yugi and bakura! keep up the good work, and i gotta go before my computer shuts down again! love ya, u awesome writer u!

And to all my fellow shakster-crazed fanz, we should praise whoever was watching out for her when she was in that car accident, cause if she had been hurt, we wouldn't have the rest of this awesome story to read!!
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From ANON - DirtyD on May 24, 2004
See? See how many people love you? (Even though its only for your stories... hmmm thinking of it that way seems horrible. Don't I know how to ruin a good thing?) I know what you mean about the family stuff. In like two weeks I'm moving away from mine. I'm a little scared and I know I'm going to miss them... okay I'm really scared, I'm only 18! It's really for the best. But enough of that, story... awesome. If soap operas were like this I'd still watch them. You do awesome honeydew and I love the drama. Man, I use to like goofy fun loving shit and your supplying me angst! I tell you I'm addicted. It's like a drug at this point. Get to writiear,ear, Babyface needs Cum slut to give her a fix. ^_^ P.S. I luv u!
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From ANON - Renee on May 24, 2004
*sniffles* This chappy made me cry!!! *huggles* Really good work, although it was saddening.
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From ANON - Terra on May 24, 2004
That was a good way to kill a few minutes waiting on laundry. Yugi is ready to tell Yami to take a hike. Bakura is willing to wait. Tris loves Joey and proved it by not jumping on him for the Kaiba thing. Needless to say I'd love an update in like 20 secs. Too much, huh?

Glad to hear you are doing well from the accident. But the sore part is the worst. I lived on pain meds after mine, at least for a couple days.

As for your flamer. Give it the attention due it. Print it and and use it to line the cat box or bird cage. See it gets all the consideration it rates that way.

Keep up the good work and update soon.
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From ANON - AlesserBeing on May 24, 2004
ok, i just hafta comment on that flamer..WTF?!! come on! what kind of idiot reads EVERY SINGLE ONE of an author's ficcy's and then rants that they suck? *takes a deep calming breath*
*Ahem* Don't listen to that baka, Shakie..you are one of the best writer's on here (My personal fave thankyouverymuch) & all of your stories are original and unique (not to mention jam-packed with very hot lemons^.~) And omeoomeone doesn't like your lemons, perhaps they SHOULD go to FF.net & stick to PG fics..or at least learn to voice their opinions NICELY & possibly give some CONSTUCTIVE criticism!! sorry..i'm ranting again..anywayz..just wanted to remind you how many fans you have out there and to NEVER doubt your awesome talent! *hmmf!*
..and now i'm getting mushy..dammit..::sigh::
luv ya Shak.!
your fangirl^^, ~Alesser
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From ANON - AlesserBeing on May 24, 2004
*shakes fist at dog* >.< *shakes fist at tree*
alright..maybe i can't stay mad at the dog..Hope ya feel better ie &ie & thanx for posting this chapter*smiles*
ok..real review now: That. Chappie. Rocked!!O_O [sorry, sugar-high] *aww's* Tris is such a sweetie..damn you for makin me like romantic shit lol j/k..ooh, that next chappie's gonna be a doozy *can't believe she used the word 'doozy'*
O.o;; er, Thanxies in advance! (Whoo hoo! B/Y Lemon!) Ja!^^
~Alesser*Being~
::sob:: My poor Ryou-chan...*sniffle*
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From ANON - dragonkitty on May 20, 2004
Haven't reviewed in a while i don't think...ne way i love this story. I like how Bakura's and Yugi's relationship is coming along. Very shibby how Bakura punched that guy. And Joey just seems to be going just fine with Tristan as far as i cell.ell. They are a cute couple together. I can't wait to see what happens after joey confesses bout Seto.
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From ANON - Shakster\'s fan�� on May 20, 2004
I can't believe it, I can't believe someone had the audacity to say that. It's not even true. If your stories were all the same it would be like saying every soap opera or love story (Like Sleepless in Settle and What a Girls wants) is exactly alike. I'd e-mail that person if I wasn't so sure that e-mail address is a fake. I might just check. Baby, don't you listen to that foolish idiot. You know your good, and thinking otherwise will insult like every fan fic writer in this domain. Remember you have DrityD under your thumb waiting to be teased mercilessly, you can't be wrong!
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From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on May 19, 2004
Sorry for my late review. *hugs* I like your fics I love the sex i love the hate I love it!!!
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From ANON - okay on May 19, 2004
your stories are all the same. actually theyre boring. they consist of: fucking, pecan waffles, fucking, digging through a drawer for lube, fucking, a marriage proposal, fucking, oh i love you and ill spend eternity with you, fucking, 'oh gods, fuck..shit..gods...' fucking, and thats about it.
why dont you spend your time with a real hobby and not this porn shit. if not, try making your stories a little diversified.
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From ANON - DirtyD on May 19, 2004
Cum slut yah gotta help me out here, my computer is doing it again. -_- This is so infuriating. *sigh* But enough of my drama. Whoa girl, this chapter just flew by. I love your angst. I hope when Yami confrontgi Ygi Yugi goes like, 'The party got boring so I thought I'd go home and 'take' Bakura.' That would be so cool. Oh man oh man, you know just the right way to tease me, I can't wait for the next chapter. I have to wait but I don't want too. -_- You and your cliff hangers!
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