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By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on May 02, 2004
    DD: AAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! That was so sweet!!!
    YD: Ok, for fluff, I liked it.
    DD: *looks shocked* You liked fluff?!
    YD: Well, it's Tris and Joey.
    DD: I'm loving this story, babe!!
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  • From ANON - Leaf zdor¢dor on May 02, 2004
    eeeee i so wanted to review before this but because of computer problems i couldn't! this fic rocks though! eeee i love it to bits and pieces! ^_^ ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - AlesserBeing on May 02, 2004
    Fuck that was hot. And soo sweet. *'aww's and sighs*
    Thanxies for the great new Chappie! Luv ya Shakster! ;X
    lol

    your fangirl,
    ~Alesser*Being~

    fuck..now i gotta go download that song *sighs and shakes head*
    Ja ne! ^^
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  • From ANON - Tanya Maxwell on May 01, 2004
    This story is just *aweso Tha That's all I can say...every word esomesome. Hope to see more soon!

    Tanya~
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  • From ANON - Kat on May 01, 2004
    Woohoo! Loved it!! Lemon was great! Whoa... I'll never think of Bakura without that comment about needing his own code. Gods, I am so glad I wasn't drinking something when I read that! Hmm, Bakura being all domestic is a twist too. Loved the whole debate about the coffee too. *G* just loved it all and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - jenna on May 01, 2004
    shakster, this is an awesome piece of fiction. you are very talented! i have a thought though.. could you write a story involving females?? like a fic about girls?? cuz i see how well you write about gay guys, but what about lesbians? that would be really really hot!! or you could incorporate some of those things into a YGO fic....also..... a variety of toys make stories a lot better! imean, i love how the guys use cockrings and whips and stuff.. the domineering tone you took in "enslavement" was genius! but i for one would like to see a few more different kinds of items used in their beds! otherwise, keep up the good work and never go into retent ent like you said you might..
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  • From ANON - DirtyD on April 28, 2004
    My compute cra crap-tas-TICCCCCCCC!!! With that said. ^___ was was utterly sweet the way Duke purposed (even if he turned out to be a wolf in sheep's clothing.) Getting the 411 on Joey's backround was cool. OOOWWWWWww I can just imagine what's going to happen now. Your story is making me just a bit more geeful since that 'incident'. I need your writing to brighten my day. MY COMPUTER IS S@%#!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cameron on April 28, 2004
    Wow this story is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo realistic.
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  • From ANON - Kat on April 28, 2004
    Fantastic chapter! I can see why you cried writing it. I got all choked up reading it. I think that anyone who's been in a bad relationship (ie; been cheated on) will be affected by this. God knows I was!
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  • From ANON - ask on April 27, 2004
    so sad!! evil duke.i loved this chapter! i love angst and drama!!! oh let me guess!! after joey gets happy with tristan duke will come into the picture again or something
    or!! the brown hairs on the pillow was tristan or something!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i dont know
    i usually hate tristan/jou fics but i like this one.....please update or i will die
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  • From ANON - crimsonvioleteyes on April 27, 2004
    Sorry I haven't had a chance to review until now hon. What an intriguing tale you weave. This is like nighttime soap-opera yugioh yaoi style. I so admire the way you can flesh out all the different characters and delve into the background you created for them. I just wish Kaiba wasn't so much of an asshole in your story. ;_; You know I'm a huge sap, especially for that pair. But I love the way this is shaping up. Great storytelling as always my dear.

    cve
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  • From ANON - blackwidow10 on April 26, 2004
    oh gods, u actually put ME in ur a/n *criez and bowz to wonderful amazing writer that iz shakster* And i will say this as many times as i have to, YOUR STORY RULEZ! it is absolute magic on a computer screen. joey and tristan's first date waz so incredibly cute that i just wanted to cry! and the dance/"sex" at the nightclub waz too hot. i luv that song too! and i think it waz so cool how u didn't make them do it on the first date. and that part about falling hard and fast for a guy soundz a LOT like what happened with me and my b/f. hmm...hard and fast...oh, uh, there goez my mind to other "thoughtz" again, don't mind me...^_^ but really, u r a totally great writer, keep up the good work! (though u seem to manage that without my encouragement, but there it iz anywayz!)
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on April 25, 2004
    Sorry took so long to read this, been busy. It was great Babe! Yugi is so sweet and cute in this *L* I wonder what will happen with Honda and Joey.
    Guess I'll have to see.


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  • From ANON - Disobedient FanGirl on April 24, 2004
    Bad fangirl, BAD! *hits hand* Why is it something so little as remembering a kind review each chapter too much of a task?ove ove many things in this story and if I can remember any of them I'll let you know what they are. *thinks very hard* I liked all of Tristan and Joey's date. The thing I loved most in the chapter is the 'mirror'. Whoa! What a kink Tristan is! I love your stories immensely. If for nothing else you use the most neglected/overlooked hot cheerleader Mr.Taylor. Of course your skill and plot lines have nothing to do with it. *sarcasm* Nothing at all. *cough bull poop! cough* It amazes me how much of greedy review hog you are. ^_^ You basically have a fan base of girls/guys and even knowing that you still disregard your hot lemons. Tsk, tsk, what are we to do with you Mistress Shakirah? (Like the new name? ^_____^) Before I go...

    "I was drunk. I thought we ran over a tiny pink elephant… I jumped out to check." -Yami
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  • From ANON - keisha on April 24, 2004
    excellent!! well done!! i just love it!! : ) ... i hope you update soon cuz i cant wait to read the next chappie ... the teaser of the next chappie was kinda confusing, but i cant wait!! :D:D:D:D:D:D grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreaaaat!!
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