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By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - blackwidow10 on January 16, 2005
    joey and tristan are back together!!! yay!! *does a happy dance* and i forgive u for the long time u made me wait...it made these two chapters that much better! just as long as u get that make-up lemon out soon ^_^ well done, as always, and i hope that whatever happened with you is all resolved now, as another wait like that might send the world into an apocalypse of screaming fangirls...
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  • From ANON - Horizont on January 15, 2005
    It's there, it's there! Update, woohoooo!
    ...
    Okay, I'm happy, I admit it. :P
    I'm so glad Tristan and Joey sorted it all out... that Hiro guy... gods, interrupting the whole making up thingy....

    I wish for all of them to be together again... and that coming from me is really rare! ^^;;

    Thx for updating!
    You're the author, take all the time you need to write!

    ~Horizont
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  • From ANON - take-chan on January 15, 2005
    Yay you finally updated!!!!I was starting to wonder if you'ld deserted this fic.. I guess christmas came early this year. Im so glad joey and tristan are finally back together, it was just getting to sad!
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  • From ANON - zehlyah on January 15, 2005
    ooo!ooo!ooo! so glad you updated! and don't doubt yourself, your writing is just as good as it was before your eventful absence. Hope that whatever drama you had to deal with works itself out in your favor as soon as possible. But whatever it is, don't let it keep you from doing what you love. Its obvious in your talent that writing is something that gives you a lot of pleasure. Don't lose sight of it.
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  • From ANON - koalared on January 14, 2005
    Damn *lump in throat* I thought I was going to cry when Joey caught Tristan getting ready for his
    *date* with the creep,oops. Hiro. So glad they are back on track! Keep writing. This *soap opera* is
    fantastic. 2 chapters almost make up for such a long time between updates. Maybe you should give us 2 more very soon.
    *grin*
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 14, 2005
    Oooo worth the wait. Damn, that lemon... i needed to umm, change clothes after that. Hell, I even quit complaining about how fricken cold it was today too! Wow! Who knew that Yami and Bakura could actually have a real conversation. With manners and everything! Lordy.

    Is it just me or does there seem to be a kind of.... Softening, about Seto? *blinks* ooo clear as mud, Kat. Looking at how he is treating Tristan, it's like he's well... showing a soft side. Thankfully, he's not going all soft! *leers* mm, that intern. Nope, don't like him. Not at all. *shakes head* Nuh huh, nope, not at all. going through the employee files? Dude, you know he's just looking for a sugar daddy. Boy's got dollar signs in his eyes...

    Oh man... Joey hung up on him like that? Cold, very cold.

    “Hold still…you’re getting a blow job…”
    *howls* I love that whole scene!

    Oooo what Seto did to Yami in the supermarket! Ohmygod, a billion boyfriend points for him!!! SEE!? that's what I mean by softening! Oh yeah! Hot, nasty dragon sex! Sweet!!! *run run runs off to the next chapter* (Kat + sugar high = strangeness abounds)

    Cool, Seto trying for more boyfriend points. *blinks* Ohhhhhh Seto doing manual labor. *fans self* Hot damn!

    “So I guess getting a goodnight kiss from you afterwards is out of the question.”
    “Oh shut up, Bakura.”
    “But you’re so sexy…I can’t help myself around you.” Tristan rolled his eyes.
    *falls over laughing* Gotta love Bakura! Hell, he deserves a prize for taking ol' mopey pants to the hot spots of Tokyo.

    *blinks and drools* ohhhh hot sweaty Seto. Dayum, that's an image that's gonna haunt me!

    You know, when Tristan threw up I was thinking that the ulcer was roaring back with a vengance...

    So, umm.... did Grandpa go loopy or was that whole thing about Bakura/Kura an act?

    Seto all hopeful is a slightly strange thing to see. Seto really opening up to someone, very strange.

    Wow, I thought I was the only one who did stuff like the "counting steps then this will happen" thing. Freaky....

    Dude, Duke's changed a bit! WHOA... married?! Dayum. Boy, I'll say he got his closure. That part was fantastic.

    Uhhh, being a single girl and all.. what is in bachelor casserole? *cackles* Besides paprika....

    “No. I was simply lonely. You’ll always be first, Bakura, I promise.”
    “Lies.”
    “It’s the truth, he won’t be replacing you.”
    *laughs hysterically* Damn, they're so cute. Good thing no one misunderstands their friendship!!!

    “I wet myself just thinking about that sexy body of yours.”
    and Kat almost choked on her drink reading this. *laughs*

    *snickers* I love it when Joey babbles...

    *blinks* and there he goes again.... If it weren't so heartbreaking watching Joey tear himself up, it'd be funny to watch him bounce around like this.

    “Then why are you wearing your heat, seek, and destroy aftershave?”
    *points at "Tristan"* SEE! 'Kura was right! You should have washed that off!

    Joey calling someone a puppy... that's hysterical!!

    "You’re in what, first grade now?”
    Meeeeeeeooooooooooooooooow! *laughs*

    Sooo that's the story Grandpa told. *blinks* I have to admit, I'd have reacted like Tristan. *shrugs* go figure.

    “Tristan, I haven’t breathed since the moment I met you…and if it’s alright with you, I want to keep it that way.”
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWW

    Damn no makeup lemon. Oh well, I can wait. I really can be patient. Really. No, I can. Honest! *stomps foot* I am not lying! I can so be patient. I'll just go read the lemon again! *smirks*

    Kat
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  • From ANON - faith on January 12, 2005
    Needs to be updated *nods*
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  • From ANON - koalared on January 03, 2005
    I found myself holding my breath through much of this story, just anticipating what was going to happen.
    This is a well written, soul satisfying story that REALLY NEEDS TO BE FINISHED! *puppy dog eyes* Please?
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  • From on December 28, 2004
    Gods, I absolutely LOVE this story! *worships you* The only thing that's irking me now is that I can't read on, because chapter 19 won't show fully. *whimpers* Could you fix that? Or is there maybe another page where I could read that part? I'm dieing to know what's going on with the lovely bishies! I'm usually not into Honda/Jou or Bakura/Yuugi, but this story is just too awsome to not like it. Great job!
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  • From ANON - cotton_fuzz on December 25, 2004
    will you please update please!!!!!!! I am begging you. This is such a good story and it would ba a shame to just let it sit and rot for all eternity. There are so many stupid stories being written and I couldn't bear it if a story this intriuging and well just flat out awesome was left unfinished.
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  • From ANON - chicken_soup on December 23, 2004
    You have me (but I really think I'm not speaking just for myself) Shakster-deprived. Please update soon. There are plenty of great fics in this site, but yours are the best. So please update soon. I'm dying to know what happens next.
    This is so far the best story you've posted.



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  • From ANON - Trish on December 22, 2004
    Write More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this story!!!!
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  • From ANON - zehlyah on December 11, 2004
    Shakster, where the hell are ya?? Your fans need their fix!!!!
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  • From ANON - KayElena on November 10, 2004
    "How close is close?" / "I wore a condom"....Hilarious!! Great chappie, please update soon!
    As always: Keep the lemony goodness coming.
    Kay
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  • From ANON - deadghost on November 08, 2004
    The thing I love the most (besides the sex scenes(I'll never get tired of saying that they are THE hottest)) is the way you portrait (I don't know if it's well said, my first language isn't english, so forgive me) the Seto/Yami couple. I can picture it in my mind: Yami being a pampered, slutty diva and Seto being a possessive jerk... it fits them perfectly!
    I really don't like yu-gi-oh (don't like the story and I don't even like the characters design so much), BUT you've really made it possible for me to appreciate yugioh's fanfiction: your work is so well done that I can overlook the fact that I dislike the show. For that I'm grateful.
    Did I mention how much I love the sex scenes? Gods, I swear that you're like the ultimate smut goddess!
    I really can't wait to read more. I guess that writting such a good story takes time, so don't rush it! I'll wait for ever if necessary.

    I adore you, Shakster!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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