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By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - Horizont on September 25, 2004
    Hi Shakster!

    You get better at this, creating cliffies I mean.
    ...
    But at least he finally told someone! (Tristan)

    Most time while reading this art I was kinda happy for Seto's and Yami's situation improving. I so want the two of them together! I started to really like them! Poor Yami... *hugs him* If you love him, you can forgive and help him. He loves you back - I think that Yami is lucky, having a boyfriend that told him about his problems (okay, it took him some time and it needed Joey to reveal it but yeah). But now Seto and him can work out a solution.

    Well I gotta do that Biology homework so bye and please update soon!
    Ciao!
    ~Horizont
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  • From on September 25, 2004
    O.O!! That chapter was so intense!!!!!!!!!! everything is such a mess right now, its the most intresting chapter so far i think. Dont wait to long for an update^^
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 25, 2004
    Oh. My. God! I'm.... I'm.... Shiiiit, I'm beyond speechless! Good God Dayum Girl! This chapter was amazing! I'm floored. You evil thing you, leaving it like that!

    Gods, I'll think of something else to say later. Now, I gotta pick up my jaw!

    Kat
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  • From ANON - zehlyah on September 24, 2004
    okay...I normally don't resort to this......pleeeeeeease finish this story...i am SO hooked!!!!
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  • From ANON - Horizont on September 23, 2004
    OMG that poor honeys! *gives all characters a hug*
    Tristan - He ought to tell Joey! I mean Joey *will* find out what happened and who Duke slept with eventually and Tristan *has* to know that!
    Duke - It's him who should contact Joey... talk to him, no matter how hard or impossible it seems to be!
    Seto - Poor thing, so in love... I hope he gets a chance to properly appologize to Yami. I wthemthem to be together again!
    Yami - Imo he shall at least give Seto a chance to explain, no matter if they're going to break up.
    Yugi - Who is it you love? Yami or Bakura? Yami isn't that much of a bad guy. He told Yugi he loves someone else and didn't cheat on him. He's just a bit spoiled after living with seto so long.
    Joey - One thing I alwayve ave about him is that he's honest. He doesn't hide anger or love. He's the emotional guy. I hope he lets himself enough time to think before he goe berserk boyfriend on Tristan...
    Bakura - Didn't appear at all this part. He's jealous and would never lie to Yugi and he's strong and protects him. I like that. ^_^x
    Everyone: GODAMMIT SPEAK to each other! You're grwon up enough to know that no problem solves itswithwithout people talking about it and trying to understand each other.gh*
    gh*

    Okay, that's it for now. ^^;;
    Baba!
    Horizont
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  • From ANON - Horizont on September 19, 2004
    I KNEW IT I KNEW IT

    So it WAS Tristan Duke slept with! See? ^^;;;;;
    And what a wonderful wonderful world... pardon me, lemon! ^_^x Poor Tristan... I mean he didn't know, how should he!? It's not his fault and even Joey should know that whoever Duke cheated on him with isn't to blame in the first place. It was Duke who made an mistake here! And Tristan shouled know by now that whenever he doesn't tell Joey stuff like that it comes out and gets much worse! They need to talk, they do!

    Okay, next part: Don't forget to add a lemon or two!
    Other than that: Please update soon! If you're not sure if something who wrote is okay - go after your first feeling cuz too much thinking won't help. ^^x

    Ciao!
    Horizont
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  • From ANON - No-one on September 18, 2004
    I love your story! it is great! keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - day dreamer on September 12, 2004
    Yay anotehr great chapter! I loved it, but seriosuly yami is such an ass, what will happen to him i wonder
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  • From ANON - Terra on September 12, 2004
    That chapter was amazing! Man Tristan is very desparate isn't he. Nice portrayal of a guy who thinks he's about to lose his world. And And Yami.... gods so spoiled, claims not to be helpless hmm? I think not.
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  • From ANON - zehlyah on September 12, 2004
    You do realize that you have ingrained in all of us an addiction that will not be satiated until we get the whole story, right? I know I speak for a lot of your readers when I confess to checking this site at least 4 times a week to see if you have updated. Can't wait for the finale. Keep em coming!
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  • From ANON - kat on September 11, 2004
    Yup, worth the wait! Wow, I actually know someone who handles huge shocks the way Tristan does. Here I thought he was the only one....

    “You have a penchant for flaunting that tight body of yours and flirting with any and everything with a dick.” Bakura crossed his arms over his chest. “You like being a little cock tease. You like stirring things up.”

    Woohoo, someone told Yami the truth! Go 'Kura!

    “All you’re doing is manipulating fruit with your hands. That’s what all gay guys do,”
    “I don’t think I can handle balls that big. I’m good, but I’m not that good.” Yugi smirked.
    *howls* I love it!!!

    Struggle to write? Damn, it was easy to read! I really liked it too. I know, it's the quiet before the mushroom cloud shows, but it was good. *EG* I'm still cackling over Bakura's comments to Yami. Those were priceless and top-notch!

    Kat
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  • From ANON - sn3kers on August 31, 2004
    ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH why do you insist on keeping me on edge over and over again.Anyway very nice chappie you need to finish the next chapter soon so we see what happens to Tris and if he starts to play with Yami(that tramp!!!! I can't belive he's hitting on Tristan)
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  • From ANON - Horizont on August 29, 2004
    Hi Shakster!

    It's true! It *was* Tristan Duke slept with that night!? I knew it all along! I'm sure it was him! ... ^^;;
    I'm so excited I can hardly sit still, honestly! Sad thing, really...

    So, you're going to update soon, right? Right???
    Hope so...
    Horizont
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  • From ANON - ketall on August 28, 2004
    Noooo!!! Another cliffie!! This story is really heating up. I think my suspicions about the guy duke cheated with is coming true. Anyway, another great and intense chapter. You are one of my favorite authors!
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  • From ANON - Terra on August 28, 2004
    I loved that little plot twist cliffhanger at the end. I think if their love survives this it'll survive anything. Boy can't wait for the next update.
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