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By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - ketall on August 27, 2004
    Whew! It's about time Yami confronted Seto. Poor Yami. And poor Seto. Ouch! I'm, like, holding my breath for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - zehlyah on August 21, 2004
    Oh. My. God. How could you end it like that?? I've been following your story for quite awhile now and I just HAD to review after that one. BEST CHAPTER YE! !
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  • From ANON - day dreamer on August 20, 2004
    *cheers* yes he got what he deserved! bastard! ^^
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  • From ANON - akuchan on August 20, 2004
    I'm glad Yami finally stuck it to Seto, but that's going to be nothing but problems for Yugi and Bakura, eh. And I've had this theory about who Duke fooled around with for some time now, I think I'll be finding out real soon if I was right. Great chapter.
    Akuchan
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  • From ANON - dragonkitty on August 20, 2004
    OMG that was like the best! I mean that was good television right there. Even though it's a fanfic you know what i mean. All that time Yami knew huh, And when he confronted him he just slapped him. o.o oh....the shit hit the fan. and the emotion that Yami was going through when he was telling him about how he knew and how he hoped that Seto would stop, but of course he didn't. And i love how Seto was trying to kiss up.^^ LOL and then Yami got all sexy with him, and broke his dick. LOL Oh....i loved that. I wonder what's going to ha nex next. Yami hitting on Yugi sounds kinda funny hehe. Best EVER!!!!! .....i'll stop ranting now.
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  • From ANON - sn3kers on August 20, 2004
    oh my f gawd you can write with the best of them i have never seen such talent it was absolutely beautiful i for one always thought yugi would be more apt to be with tristan than joey but good call um if you wouldnt mind go and join up at http://sn3kers.proboards27.com thanks if you do but if you dont im sorry to have wasted your time it is so wonderful God finally gave me an oppertunity to witness perfection
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  • From ANON - Terra on August 20, 2004
    My, my, my, what goes around, comes around. Looks like everyone is getting their licks in on Kaiba.
    Great chapter.
    Update soon.

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  • From ANON - Horizont on August 20, 2004
    Okay I think I totally got into Tristan's point of view for the last few chapters, but I#m back to my very own pov now, so... did Tristan sleep with Duke w/o knowing he had a boyfriend?? Brwon hair...!? Hey I simply LOVE trying to figue out what's behind that! It makes the whole story soooo much more intersting! ^_^x
    And Yami and Joey... did they suffer the same way? Does Joey understand the guy he can't stand? And does Yami want to have Yugi back? Or does he like Tristan...? I can't wait to read the next chapter, please please please, update soon, don't let us wait too long!
    Have I told you that I think you have an amazing writing talent? Well you do. ^^x

    Keep it up!
    Horizont
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  • From ANON - Terra on August 20, 2004
    My, my, my, what goes around, comes around. Looks like everyone is getting their licks in on Kaiba.
    Update soon.
    Great job.
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  • From ANON - Kat on August 20, 2004
    *howls* What did Grandpa put in his own crab sushi?! He's funny. That tangent about Bakura's "aliases" and the bird named Petey... I swear, I laughed so hard I had to wipe my eyes. *roars* He's already planning a wedding?! *falls over laughing* Priceless, Grandpa is just fucking priceless!

    “It wasn’t that I was trying to be dishonest. Baby, I just knew you wouldn’t understand.” *considers hitting Tristan with a lead pipe for that stupid remark*

    "I should have asked you how you felt about the situation before I made it a regular thing." *puts lead pipe down*

    *cackles* I didn't know that there were that many shades of black. I guess I shouldn inn in my "girl" card. Ohhhh, so _that's_ how you get a man to get ready faster! Damn, all these years I've just nagged. *laughs* Gods those two are perfect for each other: spoiled boys wanting constant attention.

    *cheers* NAIL HIS ASS TO THE WALL, JOEY! Woohoo! Hit 'im again! Awwww, don't make him stop. You no fair! *pouts*

    *claps hands over mouth* Joey! You fool! You idiot! You just had to tell him that!

    *grins* Hit him again! on Yon Yami, do it! Whoa.... what a scene! Seto as a sex addict. Yup, I can see that.

    Yeah, why did you let him get drunk? You know he ends up starting conversations by sticking his foot in his mouth. *grins* Gods, does Tristan ever stop flirting?!

    Nice teaser! I can't wait to read that chapter. I'm also going to hope that Yugi doesn't screw things up with Bakura or Kura or whatever alias he's using today. *smirks* Maybe Petey?

    Love it girl!
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  • From ANON - Horizont on August 18, 2004
    Okay, one thing *I* see is that Yugi is definitely not the only one in this fic who needs to see a therapist... honestly, Joey's close to a panic when it comes to relationships and quiting them or whatever... Tristan tried to commit suicide, Bakura is just a bit violet ("he's alive"... oh well) and I wonder what kinds of problems Yami and Seto come up with... *lol*
    Well I underestimated Joeys hate towards Seto ás well as the influences of his last boyfriend. So WHO THE HELL was it? Duke? Come on, it's him, right????? So Tristan and Joey are in a fight...
    And why is it going to be Yami's fault? What's he doing? Friday... it's not that long... Friday...

    Hope I'll stand wai wait!
    Horizont ^_^x
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  • From ANON - DirtyD on August 18, 2004
    Ughhh, you have to forgive me Shakster. I can't review. I've been more crucial to stories of late. Any little thing in them I don't like annoy's me, your story wasn't an exception. Wow, this almost seems like a nice flame or something huh? But seriously I've been too negative to all stories lately it seems. Must be a reflection of things going on in my life. If it makes you feel better most of my harbored dislike is aimed at Seto, is seeming like this nice guy. I loto hto hate him, and now I have this feeling him and Yami will still end up together (probably start over or something.) As I see this, as long Seto was evil I could hate him. I have alot of hate in me right now. I hate this. Even rereading my review is making me angry. >_< Issues anyone?
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  • From ANON - Day dreamer on August 18, 2004
    *gasp*! Evil cliffy !!!!! seto is such an ass, i hope he gets what he deserves
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  • From ANON - cve on August 17, 2004

    Baby Girl-- you and your damn cliffhangers. Glad to see some tender bakuraxyugi moments. And whats going on with Tristan's folks. haha to see Joey win in poker was great.

    And Seto and Yami are still in the background lurking, I know what you have planned, you evil evil woman you.

    Great chappie as always--

    My internet lover, I have to whip you back into writing more SetoxYami fics. You're being a bad bad girl---

    much love--

    cve
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  • From ANON - Nancy on August 07, 2004
    I love your story so much! it rocks my world, keep up the exellent writing
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