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By : Shakirah

From ANON - Terra on August 07, 2004
That was a wonderful chapter. Such emotion!! It was sweet, hot, loving, tempting...just great in my book! And the little teaser you put in for the next chapter, now that was just mean!! To tease us poor readers that way!

Can't wait, it'll be great as usual.
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From ANON - Kat on August 06, 2004
*glomp* You're alive! *smirks* Glad real life intruding meant some fun for you. *blinks* Musta been some pictures.

Loved this chapter. Dayum that lemon... I think you just raised the temperature for the entire state of California. Okay, maybe just Silicon Valley.ey dey did say it'd be hotter today. *snickers*

I really liked the interaction between Bakura and Yugi. That's fantastic.

OOOOOOOO Tristan is so in trouble for working out with Seto. Have both he and Bakura fogotten how hot-headed Joey is??

HEY!! So, what did they do to Malik??!?! Details, details. *snickering* Bloodthirsty much, me? *innocent look*

Great to see you back!

KB
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From ANON - Renee on July 29, 2004
Great chapter! ^_^ Poor Yugi...at least he's healing a bit now though.

( T_T no more sex scenes between kura and Yugi!! *bawls*)
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From ANON - Ashla on July 24, 2004
Sorry I didn't review the last part. I was away and when my mom, dad and sisters stopped down to meet me two weeks ago I had them print out the last part and bring it with them for me ^^ It was my birthday prezzie! Heehee. I knew they had it and I was on edge all day, dying to read it, but I couldn't until they left. It was great! Now, for this part ^^
Oh, that teaser looks really interesting! ^^ I wonder what Bakura's responce to that will be? Great part! That piece with Bakura and Yugi saying they love each other was so sweet! Great work! ^^ Lol, you menchioned psyical stuff again in your note at the end. You've been so good with the last few chappies! So clean of all that randy business, heehee. I love this fic! I really liked the last few chapters and I can't wait to read more! ^^ Later!
Sl�n sl�n!
~Ashla~
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From ANON - cve on July 22, 2004

Couldn't leave without leaving you a review, since it will be my last for a while--

I'm so glad to see Yuugi is finally starting to heal, with Bakura there to pick up the pieces. They really are such a splendid pair. And Tristan, the saintly knight-in-shining-armour once again. Adored the fight scene between Bakura and Joey.

Woman--I wish Seto wasn't such a prick in this story. You know I hate to see him portrayed as such a slimeball. But I know everything will work out for the best.

Fabulous chapter once again babe--

much love--

cve cve
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From ANON - Horizont on July 22, 2004
Hey there!

WAFF and angst combined I guess. ^^x I'm sooo happy for Yugi! And Bakura even cried, that is so wonderful! *near to crying herself* But that chapter left a nice and calm feeling, like there's a clear progress and everything's going to be all right again. AND I'm looking forward to that Tristan/Joey-lemon to come! ^^x hey, I'm just a fangirl! ^^;;;
But... dersderstand Yugi (in a way), but is he serious? Really? Oh my...

Well whatever I can't wait to read the next part! Beautiful as ever!
Horizont
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From ANON - Illuvkenshin on July 21, 2004
I luv fight scene Bakura/Joey...poor Yugi...caugh the the middle...
good resolution...with Bakura/Joey/Yugi...almost made me shed a tear...
I'm pondering that Seto...is after Yugi 4 sex again or just 4 Yami's sake...
Also, I'm think that if Malik tries 2 hit on Joey...Seto tries hit Joey again...
here's plot twister: Duke wants Joey back...or Ryou wants Joey or Tristan...
Things that come in2 my mind while read this story...just a thought...
Love this chapter...wait 4 next one...thanks again 4 updating me with
new chapter...

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From ANON - blackwidow10 on July 21, 2004
YAY! bakura's back!! aww, i just luved that scene where kura was telling yugi how much he luved him. that was so cute! im happy that yugi is getting better, i cant wait to see some of that joey/tristan action u mentioned. ^_^ keep up the good work, and write another awesome chappie soon!
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From ANON - Terra on July 21, 2004
Finally caught up! Whew, 3 chapters ie nie night. It was good! Man, Bakura is such a sweet heart to Yugi. I can just see Tristan working out all sweaty, man makes a girl want to pass out!
Can't wait for the update. But I must.

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From ANON - DirtyD on July 21, 2004
What the hell other kind of shit do you have going on? "Sorry Kura I can't ever be with you that way again." Okay alittle on the dramatic side? I mean, your nothing but ups and downs, lefts and rights, twists that goes there and back again. You get me? Drama fookin' Queen I say. In any case your stories are outstanding and my love for you still grows and wait a minute... why am I reviewing for you? You still haven't e-mailed me back! You pain! I'm such a dumbass sometimes... e-mail me dammit!

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From ANON - dragonkitty on July 20, 2004
AWW...Yugi's doing better. Bakura and Yugi are back together. that momment almost brought a tear to my eye. It was heartwarming.
The fight scene was just funny. Well things are looking up. Are ya gonna go into who Bakura knew that was raped and such? Just wondering.
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From ANON - Kat on July 20, 2004
YAAAAAY Another chapter! Woohoo!! Ooo and an absofuckinglutely great one too!

I loved that exchange between Seto and Tristan. Especially Tris' pointing out that someone may think the "wrong" thing about Seto talking to that redhead. *snickers* I have to applaud that. One thing, did he ever give Yugi's number to him?

Gods, I got all teary-eyed reading Yugi and Bakura's reunion! Sheesh girl, make me cry! *winks* 'Sokay, I forgive ya. Yup, this is the part where I mutter "just don't do it again" *G*

*laughs* I like seeing Tristan and Joey back to normal at the end there.

I think you're doing a great job with writing about the aftermath of Yugi's rape. You've managed to be frighteningly honest about how it can be a second journey through hell and not only for the survivor, but for friends and loved ones too. thank you for writing this.

I'd have to say it's one of the best stories I've ever read.
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From ANON - Scarlet Moonflow on July 20, 2004
Wow! I nearly, not I did-but not too much-, cried in this chapter! You got me crying! Ooh, I loved the fight between Bakura and Joey, then when you got sappy with Bakura and Yugi, and Joey just suddenly changing his point of view, that seemed a little off to me. *shrugut tut that's just my opinion, other then that, I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!! *squeals*

Poor Yugi, doesn't ever want to have sex again. I mean, can't you have a relationship that doesn't have sex? Yeah, it'd be hard (well, not for me, I hardly wont even kiss a guy... It took me over three months of going out with my boyfriend before I kissed him, then a month later we broke up and only kissed maybe twmes mes ^-^ *grins cheekily*), but couldn't that happen? I think it could. Will it happen, or will Yugi just want to stay friends and be lonely (no fri friendship-wise, lover-wise)? Awww, that'd suck.

And I thought I had a poem that kind of represented how Yugi felt, but it looks like I don't. I think I'm going to w one one though and give it to ya! Yeah, hows ths that sound?

Well, hurry up and update! lol, you just put this out today, and I'm like update! Wait, isn't that normal?. . . Yeah, it's normal, for me anyway! But then again, I'm not normal. Listen to my saying: "Don't judge a crazy lunatic by her insanity charges." But, I don't have any charges, yet, and I have yet to go to an asylum. . . I probably will in my near future! ^-^

Update!!

Scarlet (My name is Whitney, yet I use Scarlet, I need to stop rambling now. . .!!)
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From ANON - AlesserBeing on July 20, 2004
*squeals in obvious delight* yayzerz! another wonderful chappie AND my Kura and Yuugi are back together again^^ hurrah!
Thanxies Shak. & see ya next chappie ^.~
~Alesser
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From ANON - IluvKenshin on July 14, 2004
I've not read aftermath...i'll read soon...
since, AFF had technical difficulties, I went back
and read all chapters of this wonderful story...
I can't wait for next chapter...

To author,
U are an excellent storyteller...next 2 DD...
U 2 are my favorite writers...
I hope that I get see Seto and Malik again in
another chapter...I can't wait 2 read about
Bakura and Joey(Jou) get in2 a fighting match...
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