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By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - cve on July 10, 2004

    Ah the aftermath. Poor little Yuugi, what a complete mess he is. What *have* you done to him. I liked Tristan's conversation with Yuugi, how he was able to open up to him and reach Yuugi a bit. Tristan, the knight in shining armor for both Jou and Yuugi. And Bakura, I know he will be back in the picture very soon. And hey, bring back Seto and Yami soon. Never mind, I know they won't resurface for a while...

    And NO it's not too short. You have a strange perception of a short chapter.

    great as always--

    much love--


    cve
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  • From ANON - diablo on July 09, 2004
    BABE!!!! hehehe, finally, i can review... oh my good lord... are you trying to kill me with these chapters? have i really been that naughty... MORE!! MORE I WANT MORE MORE NOW!! *pulls out whip* the drama/angst holy shoot ... geeze babe, i must of been naughty, if its not your lemons, its everything else... BAKURA!!!! WAAAA MOREEEEEEE

    luv ya! more more more!!

    -diablo
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  • From ANON - Horizont on July 09, 2004
    Hey, they cut my review! Well, I was telling you how much I liked the chapter and how perfect Tristan was and they erased the whole text! That's so frustrating... but please update soon nevertheless! ^^x I just can't get myselftypetype the whole thingy again... *curse*

    Horizont *kicks her computer*
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  • From ANON - Horizont on July 09, 2004
    Hey there Shakster!

    I hope you allergy got better by the time (I have it, too, and I#m doing a terrible test at the moment... >_
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  • From ANON - Kaeo Kekai on July 09, 2004
    That was worth the wait. Awesome Chapter the insight that you had and the research that you did made even better and i think we all appreciate all the work you put into this story. Can't wait to the next chapter.
    Kaeo Kekai
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  • From ANON - DirtyD on July 09, 2004
    Okay fifthy reviews later and you still want more? I can't handle giving you anymore! Okay, I'll try. My gawd, this is a crazy f'in chapter. (Yeah like it wasn't one chapter ago.) I just can't wait to see how Bakura takes the news, and what of Yami? A'hole Seto probably won't care. (Or you do tend to throw us for a loop with him.) Get to wrg thg this is some shit you've written. GAWD! I hate your talent! (Okay, I love/hate it.) And sorry for not im you lately, but then again, you've probably been busy, little bed hopper you. ;p
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  • From ANON - Kat on July 09, 2004
    Two great things today! AFF.net is back and you've updated! Fantastic chapter. I'm so glad that Tristan was able to help and that he and Yugi seemed to have buried the hatchet. I remember that book you mentioned. It is a good book.

    You're doing a fantastic job on this story. As emotionally wrenching as it can be at times, I love every word of it. Although, I'm hoping Bakura shows up to kick some Malik ass!! *EG*

    KB
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  • From ANON - blackwidow10 on July 08, 2004
    oh no...it sounds like joey is gonna screw up royaly next chapter...but i'm glad that tristan is helping yugi! i laughed when i read the a/n and u said that he had more issues than a magazine, though it is true. good chapter, im happy that the story isnt going to get anymore depressing. but why did tristan have to be afraid of spiders? spiders r kool! (i probably sound crazy, but anywayz...) awesomeness and keep up the good work, update soon! i wanna see yugi feeling better!
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  • From ANON - Scarlet Moonflow on July 03, 2004
    ARG!! YOu evil evil girl! You didn't e-mail me, so I thought that you didn't update! Theacciaccidently clicked the link to the story on ym Favorties list, and found out you updated!! EVIL!!

    ^^ Anyways, good, sad chapter. Though I didn't cry, maybe it's because I cried enough on the other sts I s I read. Man, I read ansgty too much, it's sad!

    I can't wait until you update, ooh, I can't wait for the happy ending!
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  • From ANON - leaf zelindor on July 02, 2004
    i know i havent' reviewd the last several chaps but omg! -glomps- that was such a good chapter! sad and moving and i couldn't stop reading! (which is a big deal because i need to go to bed, have work tomorrow -lol-) anyway! good chap! can't wait for more! ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - crimsonvioleteyes on July 01, 2004
    Wow that was intense. So sad and gut-wrenching. No one deserves to get raped, not even someone promiscuous. Even though you already told me about it previously it is still hard to read. Poor little Yuugi. The pivotal turning point. But I know the story can only go uphill from here.

    Great chapter, great story, great Yugioh Yaoi soap opera drama you have created. Kudos to you babe--

    much love--

    cve
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  • From ANON - Kaeo Kekai on June 30, 2004
    Awesomely Sad Chapter. This ch was so love hate for me the writing was awesome and loved that but the whole thing was sad which i hate. but as always this chapter was great! I've had this on my mind so much i had a really weird dream guest staring Tristan whom i made a bet with and had to bottom for him but damn even in MY dreams hes a top (u got to write him bottoming soon) worst part was that my dog woke me up before the good parts. oh well maybe it will conclude tonight. but anyway love the writing keep it up. cant wait till next update. C-YA,
    Kaeo Kekai
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  • From ANON - Horizont on June 30, 2004
    Hi.

    Poor Yugi... this is so... well, you get to read a lot of rape fics these days, so one should say you get used to it, but... this was so real. A friend of mine told me of a similar thing quite a while ago and I just didn't know what to say. Only thing I could do was hold her hand and listen.
    So will Yugi be all right? Will anything be allright again? And what about Bakura? He's not going to let Yugi down, is he?
    So... that keeps me from writing much. There's nothing to be said about something that terrible. Joey's right, nobody deserves that.

    Thanks for writing such a wonderful story for us readers!
    Horizont
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  • From ANON - blackwidow10 on June 30, 2004
    oh gods...*sniffs and pulls out another tissue* poor yugi!! can i kill malik? and ryou? even just in my imagination? oh please tell me there's not gonna be another terribly depressing chapter in this story...im focusing on that happy ending u mentioned. ur writing is awesome, as usual, and u described things very well. i dont think i could have written a scene like that.
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  • From ANON - Renee on June 30, 2004
    *BAWLING*

    Poor, poor Yugi! Poor Joey! It was so sad!!!

    Me and my angst-loving issues... XD
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