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By : Shakirah
  • From ANON - Ashla on June 17, 2004
    Poor Yugi. It can't be easy for him after all that's happened but I really hope he sorts himself out before something bad happens. He's too cute to get hurt more!
    Heehee! Poor Tristan ^^ Embarrassing pictures alert! Heehee. Big tough guy's scared of clowns? Poor thing ^^ Lol, his mother is so mean! Cringe! They're a fun family! Heehee! I'd love to visit ^^
    It's kinda sweet that Yugi's finally going to try with Bakura. I hope it works ^^
    Ohh! Next one sounds like a good one! ^^ Can't wait! Later!
    Slán slán!
    ~Ashla~
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  • From ANON - crimsonvioleteyes on June 17, 2004

    Hey! AFF finally let me through to review! Poor little Yuugi, still such a messed up tramp. He needs some serious happy pills. And I love the way you have portrayed Tristan's family. His parents seem very accepting. The Michael Jackson kareoke is what kills me. That is SO fucking popular with asians, I should know. Why, I have no clue.

    You have set up quite for quite an explosvie fallout for later down the road I see. Just as long as everyone is happy in the end.

    Great job again babe, you always manage to turn out an awesome chapter.

    much luv-

    cve
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  • From ANON - Horizont on June 17, 2004
    Hi! ^_^x

    Wohooo, Tristan's pas res really are cool... like a model fpr all embrassing parents. ^^;; But it's the first time Tristan brought someone home so... I wonder how my mom will react. *g*
    I can't wait for the scene where Joey tells Yugi about him and Kaiba. Well of course Yugi more or less knows already, but he doesn't know for sure.
    And Tristan wnats to kill Yugi with kindness, huh? *laughs* I'd like to see him try! ^.^x
    Bakura is a bit nice, but I guess it's okay.

    Please please update soon! ^^x

    Ciao-ciao!
    Horizont
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  • From ANON - Renee on June 17, 2004
    *sniffle* Angst...

    Yay for the Jou visiting Tristan! That was a fun chapter. I'm definitely sticking around...I love angst, even if it makes me bawl like a sissy.
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  • From ANON - blackwidow10 on June 16, 2004
    awesomeness as usual! i especially luved the part where joey meets tristan's parents. they are TOO cute! mrs. taylor sounds kinda like my...w...which scares me. anywayz, r u gonna tell us what that other phobia of tristan's is? scared of clowns? and likes michael jackson? poor tristan!
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  • From ANON - Kaeo Kekai on June 16, 2004
    Wow! Just finished Chapter 12 and i LOVE Tristan's mom she is great almost like my own mom (I never let my significant other see her because she would do stuff like that). I'm gonna hold you to your promise of happy ending though I couldn't stand to see all of this end somewhat sadly and how it started. Once again your the greatest. Sincerely,
    Kaeo Kekai
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  • From ANON - Terra on June 16, 2004
    I can see where Tristan gets a lot of his personality from. His mom sounds so cool. Update soon. Loved it.
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  • From ANON - Kat on June 16, 2004
    Wow Yugi, can we say "sex addict"??? Seto needs his ass kicked big time.

    *snickers, giggles* Tristan's parents are priceless! *laughs* Clowns! *falls over laughing* Moonwalking?! *wipes tears from eyes* Oh my god! He's actually doing it! Raising the roof... *falls over laughing again* I love Tristan's parents!

    “Well, as perfect as a Michael Jackson crushing, clown fearing virgin can be.” *screams, kicks feet and laughs hard enough to wheeze*

    Oooo Bakura's got it baaaaaad! He's gone all protective-boyfriend-grrr. Love it, love it, love it!

    Uh oh... Joey on the wrong side of Bakura?? Not good, definitely not good.

    Hope you had fun at the party!
    KB
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  • From ANON - Kaeo Kekai on June 15, 2004
    Wow! Just got done with Chapter 6 and God Tristan is such an amazing guy and after what Duke (what an asshole I can't believe what he did to poor Joey) something Joey really needs. I'm kinda dissapointed that Joey didn't fall in love with Mako because Mako/Joey is one of my favorite pairings but I haven't been able to find any storys about them that were more than maybe PG or like TV-Y7 but hey I'll stop ranting and get back to praising. I hope things work out with Joey and Tristan they deserve each other so please let it work out. Your the greatest,
    Kaeo Kekai
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  • From ANON - Kaeo Kekai on June 14, 2004
    OMG This story is so great what a tear jerker. Your witing skills are great and your characters are well built and wasy to relate to. I'm a guy by the way and this story had m on the verge of tears on countless occasions within just the first two chapters. To be both blunt and honest I started to read this story as something to get off on but after reading it i was hooked and would have still read all of it without any sex scenes (well maybe one or two). I loced the quote from chapter 2 it was so deep and meaningful thanks for writing something so great i barely want to write this review because i want to finish the story (im only on chap 3) so im gonna cut this short and say this your great the story is to and you are such an awesome writer
    Love Your Newest Biggest Fan,
    Kaeo Kekai
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  • From ANON - AlesserBeing on June 10, 2004
    *squeals* ooh, i lurved this chappie...but you should have heard me when i saw the chapt. was over..GeEz! i didn't know i knew those kinda words!
    lol, Thanxies..Can't wait to see more (such evilness where you left it..must. see. yuugi's. reaction! waa!)
    *Ahem* er, ttfn, Shakie! ^.~
    ~Alesser
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  • From Ashla on June 10, 2004
    Where do you come up with all the ideas for them doing it differently? You've done 11 chappies with at least one lemn ean each, and they're all different. Lol, I don't know if I should call that talent or what ^^; Heehee.
    I wonder if Joey will get the chance to tell Yugi what happened with him and Seto or will Yugi just push him away? This fic has a very good story line, lol, outside of the lemons even. Can't wait for the next chapter! Laters!
    Slán slán!
    ~Ashla~
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  • From ANON - Horizont on June 09, 2004
    Hi!

    ...and there you go, creating a wonderful new chapter! It's really amazing! ^_^x
    But I still have some suspicions about the story...
    1. Was it Tristan Duke slept with while with Joey? He's got brown hair and Joey never found out who it was nor did he tell Tristan his ex-lover's name.
    2. I'm wainting for a catastrophe. ^^;; Something, that will almost ruin Joey's and Tristan's realtionship.
    And I think I'd like a Seto/Yugi, although I guess Yugi hates him too much... on the other hand, it could turn out as some kind of punishment for a) cheating on Yami constantly b) taking Yami from him in the first place and c) forcing Joey to sleep with him for money. But he has to find out about the last first. ^^x And god knows, I want Yugi and Joey to be best friends agian, no fighting and stuff.

    And of course I want you to continue! Please?

    Ciao-ciao!
    Horizont
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  • From ANON - Renee on June 09, 2004
    O.O

    DUDE!!! Awesome chapter! Hot lemon and then the angst and the tears and the Jou/Emily friendship thingy...

    In the words of teen girl squad:

    SOOO GOOD!

    XD
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on June 09, 2004
    awwwwww
    or yor yugi!!

    please update soon!
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