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Reviews for The Yami Virus

By : Aten
  • From ANON - SwofLwofLight on June 02, 2004
    Thanks for the voodoo doll!! I know the perfect use for it!! *giggles insanely* Okay loved hte lemons and I will never look at a chocolate cake teh same way again. I think Tris and Otogi balance one another out. Almsot like yin-yang. Seto, unfortaunely memories like that will never disappearbut u have to learn to beat it down so it knows who's in control. Oh eayh, when is btich gonna find outt hat ehr lab is now full of dead people adn bureid under sand? before i go (classes start today) i have a gift for Robbie. *hands dreamcatcher with chines shapped like soldiers* to help battle the bad dremas away if u have any. waiting for friday ^^ *goes off to 'play' with voodoo doll* now where did i put those pins?
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  • From ANON - sstar on June 02, 2004
    thanks . this was a real good chapter
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  • From ANON - eternal-dragon on June 02, 2004
    Yugi needs to be involved in your story a lot more. Like all books, any scenes of a book that can be removed and not be damaging or detrimental in anyway should be removed or reworked. I suggest you rework Yugi's involvement in yr fic. Yugi at this point is akin to yr completely irrelevant character you see once and never again. You know like that cashier or soldier coming in to report something. If you intended yugi to be such a character you have one hell of a way of showing that by making yami be the only other person going thro the yami virus. Yugi/Yami is clearly not one of these unimportant characters. Yami has to deal with this virus, and not only that, gave away tips to deal with arias shadow powers. And if yami is to change from his jackass attitude at all, yugi has to be there, and besides he's in the circle of ryous closest friends, that in it of itself should make him more involved. They are clearly important to yr plot but yet are treated as totally pointless characters. This needs alot of work.
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on May 31, 2004
    Wow! Whatta chappie!! Poor guys! They really need out of there. My sis is a bit of a pain when it comes to that. She had a friend over tonight and that friend brought a friend who was a lesbian. She looked at me and told me this, and I swear, there was fear in her voice. I just looked at her and said, "uh, so?" She just shrugged and left. Poor Robbie! Aten is home now, though. Glad he's away from Rhonda, at least till he goes back to school. Man, that child, OHHH!! I just wanna smack her!! Aria, you'll be fine. Find Seth's tomb. Soon!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Dragon Tears on May 31, 2004
    God damn it! The world's full of homophobes! Did you know that Bush is making a law that bi and homosexual people can't adopt?
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  • From ANON - Xenobia on May 31, 2004
    **Squeals** ANOTHER PLUSHIE!!!! *moves plusies into anatomically impossible positions**

    What are we going to do about Rhonda? *starts to look for keys to cement mixer* I don't think she's too young for cement galoshes...what is she, a size 3 or 4?
    I miss Aria...she would know exactly how to handle a meany like her. *wipes tear from eye* Auntie Xeno misses her chibi!!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on May 31, 2004
    Hey c quo quote you on that? It sounds weird but I collect quotes in a journal of mine. Tristen's "brother" (gags) and every closed minded ass can jsut--You know what? It's not worth it. Too early to get pissed. I'm glad Aten's doing okay (makes voodoo doll of Rhonda and grabs box of pins) and Robbie is alive and well, if scared. But, I thought the High Priest bought Aria when she was 13? Aye maybe I'm wrong. I love your story so much and I an on pins and needles for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jupitor Knight on May 30, 2004
    Thank you for your sympathy. I just might take up your offer of emailing you but first i need time to grieve. Unfortunatly it will be at least another 2 weeks before i gett tit time. This past weekend I went to my Aunt Vickie's funeral, then this weekend we went camping (it was windy and i got sick) and then next weekend we are going out of town to my brother in laws graduation he's getting his masters. Plus i've got summer classes on top of that. But i'm not reviewing my life i'm reviewing your story. I really really want a otogi, Tristan lemon. I think it would be great. In fact i get jittery just thinking about it. The story is getting great. But with Aria in Egypt will she find the bones of Bakura and Seth. Plus isn't malik's sister in Egypt. Will she find her and bring her home. Oh you left off at such a terrible spot. I can't wait for the update. Thanks again for your sympathies.
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  • From ANON - Tatsu-Chan on May 30, 2004
    Yeah, a Tristan and Otogi lemon would be nice! Put it in!
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  • From ANON - Star on May 29, 2004
    Hi greeat storei i hope they can get Areia soon but she seems to be takeing care of things her self for such a little girll . and i realy hope you don't let the yamis die and find a cure in tiimeyou can make yami haave a hidden cure aaand make there haave to a price to be paid maybe like freedom but its your stori and i have weird ideas . see ya ps are you still thinkng about a yami bakura lemon .
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on May 29, 2004
    *cheers wildly/happily* Oh Aria you are the greatest!! Man she most defiantely is the daughter of bakura and he did teach ehr well!! Ooh hey she may be a kid but those bastards had what the fuck was coming to them. Is she gonna keep the puppy? And the lemon, HELL YES!!! god I sound like such a hentai ^^ Yes yes but pelase no chibi squishing. Oh and Aten is jsut hte most adorable thing in teh world!! Otogi should drown that bitch out. In fact, why don't tehy drown ehr period? I don't blame the girl's father. About tiem she got a spanking like that. next tiem he should use a belt like my dad did. Anyway Aria is free and she is one child you sure as hell don't want as your enemy. I love your story so much!! *does happy dance*
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on May 28, 2004
    OH HELL YEAH!! Go Aria!!! Ooohhhh, that was so...so...so...Arrrghh!! *Can't breathe from happy giggles at Aria's fun!* And she took the puppy with her!! How kawaii!! Oh, and Hell Yeah I'd like to see a Tris x Otogi lemon!! You write good lemons!! Sorry that it seems like I haven't reviewed in awhile. The darn things never go thru, and I didn't realize it till today!! So, I hope this one went thru!!


    *whimper* Monday?? We gotta wait till Monday?? *sniffle* *whimper* Here's to hoping DDYD updates soon to sorta tide. I just don't think I can wait till Monday.

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Xenobia on May 28, 2004
    Definitely need a Tristan x Otogi lemon...makes me feel squishy inside.

    I so love Aria...she's a chibi after my own heart. And spleen... And liver... I got goosebumps. *carefully kisses the chibi's cheek*
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on May 28, 2004
    That last part where Aria kicked some keester totally rocked! Awesome! I love it when Aria goes all daddy Bakura on people! Who's got daddy's bloodlust??? *grin*
    As for a TrisxOtogi lemon, I say go for it! A frilly pink apron? Wow- he's even girlier than me! My apron is black and says "Johnsonville brats." LOL
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  • From ANON - Dragon Tears on May 27, 2004
    Four things I have too say: One, HOW DARE SOMEONE STEAL YOUR LEMON!!!!!!!!!!! *glares at anyone who dare to even THINK about it* Two, Homework's piling up, so I might not have enough time to read and write a reveiw for every chapter, sorry 'bout that. Three, Aria's going to Egypt? Maybe she's found by Isis? And four, Poor Bakura! He has no idea WHAT he's doing, and he'l most likely be blamed for it! Kinda reminds me of Malik in this story's prequel...
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