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Reviews for The Yami Virus

By : Aten

From ANON - Jupitor Knight on August 29, 2004
wow I was wondering how Bakura would handle Yami's rape. I can't wait to see what you do for the kids when they hit puberty. I really wish that somehow Aten could do better in school. Like maybe by some miricle and really hard work he becomes the top of his class. That would be nice. I had a similiar situation, I was labelled ADD and therefore put in basically the stupid classes then I worked my butt off the prove to teachers that I was just as smart as anyone else, just slightly distracted a bit more. I ended up graduating in the top 1/3 of my class. 60th in a class of 196. Anyway so I am proof that just because the school thinks your dumb doesn't mean you can really really prove them wrong. I also have a small request, could you write a lemon for my birthday. I have never asked for a lemon but this year I'd like to have one, My birthday is on the 4th of september, if your to busy I understand as I am fixing to get very busy with school starting on Monday and this will be the first time I will not be able to go home for my birthday. for its the firstkendkend of college. I'm turning 22 and i know that I should be considered to old to go home for my b-day but at the same time I know i will kinda of miss it. Anyway, great job can't wait to see you finish it, oh one more thing, for your halloween episode you should have aria wear lots and lots and lots of pink, I hate pink but i think it'll be enough to give her daddy's a heartattack. LOL. Well laters

This might post twice so i apologize for that my lemon I'm requesting I would like to be between Seto and Joey.
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From ANON - Jupitor Knight on August 29, 2004
wow I was wondering how Bakura would le Yle Yami's rape. I can't wait to see what you do for the kids when they hit puberty. I really wish that somehow Aten could do better in school. Like maybe by some miricle and really hard work he becomes the top of his class. That would be nice. I had a similiar situation, I was labelled ADD and therefore put in basically the stupid classes then Iked ked my butt off the prove to teachers that I was just as smart as anyone else, just htlyhtly distracted a bit more. I ended up graduating in the top 1/3 of my s. s. 60th in a class of 196. Anyway so I am proof that just because the school thinks your dumb doesn't mean you can really really prove them wrong. I also have a small request, could you write a lemon for my birthday. I have never asked for a lemon but this year I'd like to have one, irthirthday is on the 4th of september, if your to busy I understand as I am fixing to get very busy with school starting on Monday and this will be the first time I will not be able to goe foe for my birthday. for its the first weekend of college. I'm turning 22 and i know that I should be considered to old to go home for my b-day but at the same time I know i will kinda of miss it. Anyway, great job can't wait to see you finish it, oh one more thing, for your halloween episode you should have aria wear lots and lots and lots of pink, I hate pink but i think it'll be enough to give her daddy's a heartattack. LOL. Well laters
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From ANON - veggie_tart on August 27, 2004
hehe...not tomorrow- sunday... I'm sleep deprived. gomen. well then- looking forward to sunday. l8tr daiz! keep up the good work ^.~
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From ANON - veggie_tart on August 27, 2004
I absolutely love this story ^_^ I love all your fics^^ u have a very unique style of writing, that makes my day. I look forward to each chappie. I loved this chappie- and am looking forward to the sequel ^^ . I love Aten - so adorable. I was just wondering, you've done a fic about Seto and Joey's past , and one about Ryou and Bakura's. Are you planning on ever doing one about Malik and Marik's past? I love how you write Malik and Marik's characters- and would think you'd do a wonderful - no excellent job on a fic about their past. Think about it ^^ well, l8tr. I am looking forward to tomorrow ^^
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From ANON - RedConvoy on August 26, 2004
Bakura dealing with Aria's first period? HAHAHAHAHAH!!! He'll pass out!

Ryo: Aw Come on 'Kura! She just got her period for the first time!

Bakura: No! No! No! She can't have it! She can't! I won't let her grow up!

Ryo: (smacks Bakura from his hysterics)
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on August 26, 2004
ROFL oh man Heaven and Hell didn't want her!!! No wonder she's still kicking!!! You know, I do feel bad for the scorpion ^^ Kinda reminds me of the crab. Ooh I bet he's happy. ^^ Yami... well you know, that explains why he's such a ass. Period. Too bad they jsut can't destroy that door or something like that. Anyway, coodles for Yugi for not giving in and um, please make sure Anshar doesn't burn the Flame Swordsman plushie? ^^; I can really picture him and he kinda makes me nervous but hey, Joey and Seto trust him. Also, well sad to see this end but so glad you'll be doing a sequel soon. From waht you told us it will be a bigger blast to read and I bet write as well. I don't look forward to all the bad stuff but hey, that's why we keep coming back!! I can wait to see the tortue you inflict on the villians though. Oh yeah, one final question, will Miranda ever have another child? I have nothing agasint Robbie I think he is a very sweet child as are Aten and Aria and Mako and Hayden. Oh yeah that reminds me *giggles* TIME TO SQUISH THE CHIBIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Terra on August 26, 2004
I really liked this one. And I have had a few of those breakfasts too (shudder) but I hard charbroiled ham too. Any way looks like Yami got his to a degree. Be careful who you setp on on the way up...you'll meet them on the way down too.
Terra
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From ANON - Jupitor Knight on August 24, 2004
YEA EVERYONE IS ALIVE AGAIN with the exception of yami. I say that someone breaks the puzzle then hides one piece like far far far far far far away. So that if any one should ever try and put the puzzle togehter again, they will never be able to complete it nor will they bring back Yami. WEll later
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From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on August 23, 2004
oo that was good i liked the part where yami took malik... yay for that!
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From ANON - Dranzer's Yami on August 23, 2004
*jumps up and starts screaming * YES!!! YES!!! FIFTY POINTS TO YUGI AND MINUS FIFTY FOR THART SELFISH BASTARD AND PRICK OF A PHAROA YAMI!!!!! *drives a truckful of cookies and candies to Yugi's front door* you deserve all of this and more for FINALLY (might i add) getting rid of Yami!!! It's a shame though that Yugi couldn't have socked Yami one where it counted though....oh well....So, just curious, is Yami going to pose more problems in the future? or is he going to dissapear? Oh! and is Yugi going to hook up with someone new either in this story or the next? (just an idea or thought)
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From ANON - Liann on August 23, 2004
serves that stupid pharaoh right. *laughs at him* he's been such a pain in everyone's ass too. i like the evil yamut iut i also like seeing him being not evil... for lack of a better term. i actually thought yugi was gonna do worse that he did, if you catch my drift so i can go on wif my fic now ^_^ yami aten and aria are so awsome together! is it ever going to be like a yami and hikari aten/aria but completely different personalities (like ryou and baku sorta)? that would be cool
and last chapter, i forgot, *blanks out for a minute* shadi didnt say catastrophic *wondering if she spelt that right* i just luv it when he says that. haha. and when he says 'there has been a disturbance between the millennium items' *laughing* teehee i swear, he says it everytime he decides to show up
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From ANON - LittleUke Io and Uke Kit on August 23, 2004
UkeIo: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GO YUGI! It's about damn time he broke up with that bastard!

Uke kit: *grins* How dose it feel to be alone Yami? *giggles insanley* I loved the end of that chapter. Can't wait to read more. ja
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on August 23, 2004
YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!11 *dances and cheers happily* You go Yugi-boy!!!!! Ha oh I can change, I do love you HA!!!! That asshole wouldn't know love it it fucking raoed him then chewed him up and spit him out!!! Oh I think I speak for everyone when i say we are so glad he broke it off. Also, Aria and Aten, so cute ^^ Does this mean Aria will have a career as a world's greatest thief like her dad? Teh Queen of Thieves! ^^ And also glad you liked hte movie. peg wore pink bunny slippers? Now i gotta see it again! *laughs and wipes eyes* Aye gotta go, I have work soon. I wish thrusday would get here already!!
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From ANON - Jupitor Knight on August 21, 2004
WOAH, I can't believe you did that. Oh my God, what an ass Yami is. I would of hoped that being dead would of cleared up his disposistion. I guess I was wrong. Amazingly wonderful chapters I hope that now i'm back at school i can read as regularly as i did before and not have to miss a few chapters every other week.
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From ANON - Liann on August 20, 2004
*huggles marik* i ~love~ how you described baku and mariks last... 'last' moments on earth. its so discriptive and...painful to say the least. i'd never want to expierence that O_o; *awful thoughts swimming in head* *swats at them* *hiss*
it's too bad your fics arent drawn into doujinshi, or animated, ~that~ would be awsome!!!!!
*tries to sit around patiently for lemon* *twitch*
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