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Reviews for The Yami Virus

By : Aten
  • From ANON - Terra on April 30, 2004
    Miranda teasing Seto. A jerk getting the terror of his life. Yamis on the hunt. Drama, sorrow, joy. What more could you ask for in a story let alone a single chapter.

    This is one of the best chapters you have written and I've read them all.

    Good Job again.
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  • From ANON - Dragon Tears on April 28, 2004
    I wonder how Robbie's father is going to accept everything... let's hope he takes it better than Stevin did!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on April 28, 2004
    Hee so right, we're human we're allowed to forget things. Ryou is being a bit protective, I mean yes Aten doesn't have a strong heart but he deserves to enjoy the life as much as he can. But that's a hard question, death. Aye ve. Oh and the morning with Aria, who doesn't act like that? *snickers* Mr. Gillian is a @#%* and please tell me Marik will kick his ass when Aten asks what a fag is? Or better yet, jsut tear his tongue out. And what Bakura is feeling, is that the first tell sign of the Yami Virus? I better go, I think i pull a muslce in my left side of my chest. Waiting for Friday.
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  • From ANON - Terra on April 28, 2004
    Perfect capturing of real life. Kids playing, people off to work, parents worried over their families. Looks like Bakura is a bit sick th Chi Chibi Yami is not a morning person but she loves her brother so.
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on April 28, 2004
    He goes today after school to get checked. I'll let you know on Fri. Your Step-Chibi sounds so cute!! I guess my son's eyes would be the same, if they stopped changing colon mon me!! They go from a slate grey to blue to hazel all the time. Depending on mood. His hair is dirty blonde. He's 8. Lord, they grow up so fast, don't they?? I guess that's why I like this set of stories the best of yours and DDYD. The kids. You all write from personal experience and make things feel so real.

    Wonderful chappie again as usual! Ryou is such a caring parent. I kinda feel for Marik. Having to give all those answers to such a young kid, and remember your own death at the same time. I remember Marik's stupor. I think that I'm kinda glad that Aten didn't just give up. But I hope that everything can start to go better for him. At least that ass was nicer than the kids in our neighborhood. Fag is the nicest thing they call people. He just didn't want his ass kicked right at the moment probably.

    Well, I'm out. Thank you for writing such great stories!! See you on Friday! Thanks for thinking of us.

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - SweetMisery1 on April 28, 2004
    Poor aten...i have a question does the fact that Aria's doll is named Jessica mean anything or is it just a coincedence? Great story, please update
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  • From ANON - star on April 28, 2004
    cool , thanks .
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  • From ANON - chaos queen on April 27, 2004
    **huggles Bakura** my poor Kura!
    poor aten! *squishes*
    do you enjoy hurting my favourite bishis?
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on April 26, 2004
    Oh nightmares everywhere! Where's a dreamcatcher when you need one? Poor Aten *cuddles him and hands him stufed momma monkey holding ay moy monkey* I have no idea what to say except I must read the next chapter. Please don't ever stop writing!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on April 26, 2004
    Thanks for the note. Just found out today that they don't think he outgrew it after all. He goes in on Wed to have his heart checked. I'm scared. One of his valves in his heart flutters sometimes instead of opening and shutting.

    Anyways, Poor Guys!! *huggles Marik, Aten and Bakura in one giant hug* Nightmares suck. Especially about dying. Aten need to know that it is OK to feel. Feeling helps to heal. But I guess he's just too little and it's too soon to realize that.

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on April 26, 2004
    *grabs a dust pan* saakurakura's ashes! lets see, im pretty sure i saw some bakura crums around this nightmare some where...lol... poor aten and robbie and and bakura, and ryou, and marik..yeah...
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  • From ANON - Dragon Tears on April 26, 2004
    GAH!!!!!! I JUST HATE HOMOPHOBES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's a sad, sad world we live in if we can't accept other people's differences...
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  • From ANON - Terra on April 26, 2004
    Looks like a few storms are coming for our beloved Yamis.
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  • From ANON - Dragon Tears on April 26, 2004
    Dragon Tears: Woah... O.O Just how much research did you DO on heart failure?
    Brain: Alot more than you at any rate...
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on April 25, 2004
    YD: Marik was...crying. Gods!
    DD: Poor Aten, Ryou's being WAY over protect
    YD
    YD: Typical reaction, but not good for his self esteem.
    DD: Joey's gonna crack when he finds out.
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