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Reviews for The Yami Virus

By : Aten
  • From ANON - star on April 25, 2004
    Hey good chap and thanks for resopnding . I think thats what i meant I think what do I know I was just courios Ii thought it would be intersesting can I email youu with this thought . see ya
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on April 24, 2004
    *heaves a great sigh of relief* Oh you scared me!! Sorry jsut in my family if you get a letter like that, means that person is dead. Hey great news, Robbie gets to see his dad ^^ That's great to but but about Aten... ouch! Poor kiddo... I hope he takes it well as he can fro an 8-yr-old. Wow AB- that is rare. Best of luck wiht this story ^^ nearly forgot to review myself. Love it and can't wait for the next cahpter. A nightmare? Ugh even in death and death after death Steven stills haunts the family. What I'd give to torture him until time stops.
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on April 24, 2004
    ooo...poor aten, poor bakura, how will bakura ever over come stevens curse? pls update! ^^
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  • From ANON - Sweet Misery on April 24, 2004
    yay, you didn't kill of Robbie's dad!! Is Ryou gonna become one of those scary overprotetive parents??? and how can ryou afford a pacemaker for Aten when he had financial issues for his own?
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on April 24, 2004
    I know you like to start things off with a bang!! You wouldn't be you if you didn't. I was just teasin' you!!

    Poor Aten!! Terminal is one word I don't like. I just cannot put myself in Ryou's position. If someone told me my son (who's 8) was gonna die, I'd probably be the same way. Hell, I was when they told me he had a heart murmur in a valve. I wouldn't let him do anything. He's since outgrown it. But it is scary. To cute with Kura holdin the kids. I had a feeling you wouldn't kill Daniel. Take care!! OOHHH, hurry up Monday!!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Terra on April 24, 2004
    So sad and so touching. Bakura is such a big softy when it comes to his family especially the kids. Sucks that the world never stops when it seems like you world is falling down around your ears. No parent wants to their child has a terminal illness. Poor Ryou and MArik.
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  • From ANON - Star on April 23, 2004
    hey this is a good start I hoope Aten will feel better. poor miranda to losse some one like that so far away.
    I do have a question I hoope you don't mind if you do a yami bakura and yami lemon could you a story as a one shotbut part of this story please thanks just wondering .
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on April 21, 2004
    awww... thats so sad... poobbiobbie... keep updating
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on April 21, 2004
    Great first chapter. Hope Aten is ok. Poor Miranda. Waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Dragon Tears on April 21, 2004
    Dragon Tears: Alive? Well? Promoted in to a new rank for his bravery?
    Brain: *looks at her weirdly*
    Dragon Tears: *shrugs* Can't blame a girl for trying... Awww, does Aten STILL have his learning problem... Poor him... Oh, and can you add Eric (sp?) in there, make him do evil things, so I can have motivation to torture him?
    Brain: *shakes head in dispair* Kami-sama, you are SUCH a paradox... One moment you'll be saying why humans can't all just accept each over for who they are, and end wars, and the next? You'll be going on about torture humans and blood...
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  • From ANON - sweetmisery on April 21, 2004
    Nooooo, please continue. Maybe Aten can comfort him
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  • From ANON - Isawa17 on April 21, 2004
    WOw! my really like this one so far! I also like the end of your last one ^-^ can't wait to see the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on April 21, 2004
    AARRGGHHH!!!!!
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    You just can't start calmly, can you? No, you gotta start with a bang. And a big one too.

    Waiting with antici-pa-tion...

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on April 21, 2004
    Nice way to start! Lemony goodness!
    Ryou's honesty scares me! I like Bakura's excuse-gymnastics......lmfao! It can't get much better than that! (Damn, Bakura would look hot in skin tight black spandex...)
    I have a bad feeling aboutandaanda's hubby-kins.....*Big hugs to Miranda and Robbie*


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  • From ANON - Terra on April 21, 2004
    Man what a cliffhr!! r!! Great!! Cargo bay is a good place for an explosion too.
    Chibi wants to see how much love they have made. (snicker) Gymnastics! LMAO I wanna do 'gymnastics' with Bakura too. Wonder how he does with uneven bars?
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