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Reviews for The Yami Virus

By : Aten
  • From ANON - Terra on July 21, 2004
    It's amazing how children act out their fear. That was very wonderfully done. Can't wait for the goodbye lemon. Very sweet and sad. I loved this.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on July 21, 2004
    “What made you think you had any right to fire that ball of energy to your brother?” Marik asked angrily.
    Ryou gasped. “Youndy, dy, did you throw a ball of energy to your brother?”
    Aria’s bottom lip trembled. “Yes, mommy.”

    LMAO! Lessons in parenthood Yu-Gi-Oh style! I loved that! Very creative! Fantastic job:-)
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  • From ANON - KittyRyou on July 20, 2004
    Nice! I love all of your stories so much, but I have a hard time keeping up with you because you update so quickly! I love your characterization! The kids have got to be the best OCs EVER made! And I love Miranda and Robbie too! You have such a wonderful talent; I hope you never give up! Give Ryou a kiss for me! Update soon! (i know you will!)
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on July 18, 2004
    okay everyone say it with me 'aaaawwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!' Hee I think Hayden would be a great racer and Aten a great painter. So he does have a slight flaw when it comes to art. He does his best and he's so cute. I found that whole guardian angel bit really sweet too. Oh and Umi and Aria are just so adorable and mako is a riot. Lemme guess, teh gang won't find out the cure until too late? Love your story and am so glad you're writing it too. laterz!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on July 18, 2004
    Oh, my goodness!! That was one of the sweetest chappies that I have ever read!! I have tears in my eyes from the sweetness and laughter. Everything was just so cool! *Squishes Aten softly* Stay back boys, this chibi needs a rest!! Wow!! Umi is so cute too!! Aria, crying, and happily?? I wonder what she's gonna give him in return?? Oh, are you gonna get back to Yugi?? Just wondering.

    Looking forward to next time!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Terra on July 18, 2004
    Oh the camp reunion brought back memories of all the weird stuff I have packed away from my son's creativity. It's all treasures to me though.
    Very nice that reunion, seems like a lot of fun there.
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on July 17, 2004
    AWWWWWW!!!! That was a totally sweet chappie!! Aten must be in heaven!!! It's great to have friends like that to be with you no matter what. Miranda is lucky to have those guys with her and Robbie. *squishes Aten and Seto plushies, places Ryou and Bakura plushies in compromising positions* Hmm, need more plushies...

    Anyways, I t I h I have a feeling I'll be helping Tris squish Aten!! Take care!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From darkvixen on July 16, 2004
    hey there was up, i'm back, didn't even know i was gone did ya ^^ well i caught up with all thapysapys i missed, this storie just keeps getting batter wonderful_writer_bakurasgirl ^^ poor miranda, though im glad Aten is having a good time ^^
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  • From ANON - Lully-chan on July 16, 2004
    Ahhh...I forgot it was time for an update today~ So I was surprised (and super happy :D) when I saw this. Anyway: ::squeal:: Aten is soooo adorable! I thought the part where he said Aria sent her bike to the Shadow Realm was hilarious. ^0^ Aten is quite the little artist, I see. At last the poor little guy has been accepted and has some new friends...I feel so happy now! ::big grin::
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on July 16, 2004
    *squeals in delight* Oh i'm so happy for Aten!! You'll need to hold me back cuz i wanna hug him until he can't breathe!! *giggles* I swear I can almost picture the arts adn craft Aten was doing. I know Tirsten and Seto will love their gifts. Also, Miranda and marik kinda remind me of really close friends. And that Daniel is such a sweet heart!! He'll understand. I love your story so much!!! *giggles happily*
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  • From ANON - Terra on July 16, 2004
    That chapter left me with the best feeling. It was so touching. The camp and how Aten felt and then Miranda and Marik, both were simply touching.
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  • From ANON - Isawa17 on July 15, 2004
    Awww. that's so sad! She lost her baby! T_T_T
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  • From ANON - Terra on July 15, 2004
    Caught up again. That was a very emotional chapter. It was nice to have the uplift of Aten at camp after so much unhappiness. And Seto is such a good guy, hugging Miranda like that.
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  • From ANON - Lully-chan on July 15, 2004
    ::sighs sadly and schnuggles up with her Malik plushie:: ;_; Poor Miranda and Robbie. It was nice of Marik to be there for her! ::glomps him:: Malik is so lucky. AHAHAHA! =P Can't wait for another update.
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on July 15, 2004
    You are very right about that revenge deal As lon Ver Vera gets what is coming to her then I'll be happy. Oh poor Miranda... *wiping away tears* My cousin went through the same thing and lost her first baby like that but she wasn't very far along but god it still hurt. I think what touched me the most was when Seto willingly gave miranda a hug since she really needed one. Aye they are such great friends to be there for her. Seems Aten made a new frien I' I'm very happy there. Aye one again you have outdone yourself. I bow to you, the great master of writing *bows deeply*
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