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Reviews for The Yami Virus

By : Aten

From ANON - Gigi on April 27, 2005
The story is so rich!! I felt like I was watchin one of those fast paced soap operas! The writing is so natural and it felt warm too. Great! I can't wait to get back to reading!!
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From ANON - Miki on October 19, 2004
WOW!!! I first want to say that I have been reading you work for a long time but I just haven't really got time to write a post. I don't know why but I don't really post that often but you are a special case! I love your stories. You have got to be in my top five fanfiction writers. You're so awesome! Tehe did you know that my cousin also has a speech problem like aten's. It's so weird. but yea. Have you ever read Anchor to my Insanity? I think that is a awesome fic! If you get the chance, look it up!
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on September 07, 2004
So sorry to see a good story end but there is the sequel, the proverbial light at the end of the tunnel. Ooh if I were in Seto's shoes (and hte others) I would leave no stone unturned and makee the they will eb tortured until their beg to cease to exist. But hey, that's jsut me. You are by far one of my favorite authors and I respect your very unique sense of writing. You actually pull the reader within!! Almost like we're feeling the same anguish and joy the characters are feeling.*bows deeply* I am not worthy!!
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From ANON - Kat on September 07, 2004
Oooo not only will I not see Halloween the same way, I showed a couple of others that little scene and had grown men in hysterics. *smirks*

Shiiiit, hell of a cliffhanger to leave us with! Oh wait, Wednesday?! Sweeet! I can wait that long. Now I just have to wrack my brain and remember who Dom is. La

Hope you're feeling better!

Kat
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From ANON - Jupitor Knight on September 07, 2004
can't wait for tomorrow. Good job and your right about the opal my sister was born in october i should of known that. my bad.
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From ANON - Jupitor Knight on September 07, 2004
sorry my mistake for some reason i was thinking that the twins were born on halloween. Don't know where that came from. Great story thank you soooooooooo much for my lemon. it was short but intense, I like how Seto just couldn't draw himself away even with someone coming in the room. I hope your grandfather is ok. My grandfather last year had a type of throat cancer he still has not recovered his voice although the chemo is done, but he's a fighter and he's getting better. I hope your grandfather is going to be ok. He'll be in my thoughts and prayers.
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From ANON - Kitty Ryou on September 06, 2004
Wow! Wonderful writing as usual! You never cease to amaze me!! The kids are just too adorable and Ryou is such a sweetie!!! I love you characterization more than anything else in the world! I had missed a few chapters... okay like ten... and I spent all night reading them until like 6AM!! But it was sooo worth it! And I loved the Ryou's birthday chappie. I actualave ave the same birthday as Ryou, and he's my favorite character, September! G! Go me! *is happy that she is now 15* But it made me sad that the kids had to go back to school, and Robbie and Aten were separated! They are just too sweet! Anyway, a bit off the subject, but throughout your stories you always mention what happened to Ryou and BAkura in the pabut but you don't really have a story about it? Do you plan on making a story about the past when Bakura was abusive? I think that it would be a great story! *i love ryou so much he needs torture lol* But anyway, great great great story! I can't wait for the following chapters and sequels!!!! :)
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From ANON - Kitty Ryou on September 06, 2004
Wow! Wonderful writing as usual! You never cease to amaze me!! The kids are just too adorable and Ryou is such a sweetie!!! I love you characterization more than anything else in the world! I had missed a few chapters... okay like ten... and I spent all night reading them until like 6AM!! But it was sooo worth it! And I loved the Ryou's birthday chappie. I actually have the same birthday as Ryou, and he's my favorite character, September 2nd! Go me! *is happy that she is now 15* But it made me sad that the kids had to go back to school, and Robbie and Aten were separated! They are just too sweet! Anyway, a bit off the subject, but throughout your stories you always mention what happened to Ryou and BAkura in the past, but you don't really have a story about it? Do you plan on making a story about the past when Bakura was abusive? I think that it would be a great story! *i love ryou so much he needs torture lol* But anyway, great great great story! I can't wait for the following chapters and sequels!!!! :)
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From ANON - Caterfree10 on September 05, 2004
Konichiiwa!

Oh yeah! Like father Like daughter, teach that bastard a lesson, guys! *LAughs maniacally* Picturing the punishmentEricEric's brother was SOOOO sweet! ^_^ Anyways, Been a while since I've reviewed so I thought I would (Although I should be heading for neopets.com to get my pet back into a hotel no thanx to my ra damned comp not behaving right=P). Well, it's getting better and batter as always and I'm sure will get better as it drawsto a close. Speaking of, I'm starting to think this story's your longest one yet... Ah well. I have to go anyway. My pet's not gunna feed itself!

Ja Ne! ^_~
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on September 05, 2004
Okay Aher is weird but I would so love to join him int he fires. A changed man--Excuse me fora moment *leaves room to c, ra, rant, scream, and break stuff. Returnes* I needed to get that outta my system. Justic is BLIND. Also, Eric and Jason got what they justicly deserve. I don't beleive in alot of stuff but i do bleieve what sow sow in this life you reap in another. And soemtimes, one must play judge, jury, and executioner. Love teh kids' costumes and love the kids. Here *hangs them bag of candy* Sweets for the sweets and of course sugar-less sweets for Aten. Gotta love Halloween ^.~
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From ANON - Kat on September 05, 2004
Umm, loved the chapter. No, really I did. *blinks* See??
Shit, Charlie's being released?!
*giggles* Puppy Coitus Interruptus... *shakes head* sorry, couldn't resist.

Oh gods... tit or teeting? *snickers* Ohhh, I see massive amounts of fun ahead!

�How did you make out?� Robbie asked.
Umi pointed to Seto. �We can�t.�

*giggles* Love it!

�I want a tit!� Aten screamed excitedly.
Jay and Karl bheirheir lips and used the doorway to stay on their feet.
�We can�t help you with that, Aten. How about a treat instead?�
�I want a teet!�
Seto turned red and used the iron railing to hold himself on his feet.
Jay put two pieces of sugar-free candy each. �There�s your treats, boys.�
�Thants for the teets, Gay!�

*falls over howling* Oh Gods, oh Gods, oh Gods... *wipes eyes*

Oh my... Poor Robbie and Aten. Okay, question: will his flashbacks ever become easier for him to come out of?

Oy... breaking someone in half... Damn, I gotta go out to breakfast now?!

Aria grinned. �Who�s my daddy?�
Bakura lifted up his daughter. �Who�s got daddy�s murderous tendencies? Who�s got daddy�s bloodlust?�
Aria�s hair spiked and her canines were revealed behind her grin. �Me. I AM CHIBI BAKURA!�

Okay, never thought I'd say this: That's just a too cute father and daughter scene! *grins*

Robbie in the Shadow Realm?? Okay, teaser for the next story yes? *smirks*

Awwwww, what a sweet and peaceful end. *g*
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From ANON - Jupitor Knight on September 03, 2004
umm just to let you know thanks again for the lemon your giving me and also the birthstone for october is a emerald, saphire is for september. I'm pretty sure the kids were born on halloween weren't they?
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on September 02, 2004
*blushes and smiles* Glad ya like that kind of cake and I still have half hte cake left. A bra hanging off Battle Ox's horn? *ROFL* Oh can you blame Aira? Heh well I jsut hope she doesn't decide to show Umi her bra jsut yet. The presents they got were more than adorable and seriously, maybe Ryou should have gotten Duke something lacey. Seriously he acts so--girly (not in a bad way mind you). Well Yami has finally stopped pestering yugi, ne? Good! ... I think. Well sorry this is short but I gotta jet. Happy Birthday kiddies and don't get sick eating birthday cake. Oh yeah, I totally like Gabby she's a sweety!! *big grin*
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on August 29, 2004
what can i say except happy birthday ryou!!! *giggles* want some cake? i baked a classic yellow cwithwith dark chocolate frosting of two laye^ an^ and the gifts he got, so beautiful!! Miranda is a major sweetheart. No more kids? Oh well... but Robbie has Aten and Aria and everyone else. Poor Pinchy... goddess save that scorpion. 4 more chapters? *sqeuals* I can't wait!! Halloween is my ultimate fav time of year though!! sometimes i wish i was born on Octinstinstead of a month early. Oh well, loved the movie and the new cards ryou got. those cosmo cards rock!! Laterz!! *hugs and kisses ur way*
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From ANON - veggie_tart on August 29, 2004
Again, awesum chappie! Thank u 4 the plushie ^.^ I'm happy u'r doing a story with their past ^_^ yay! Aw...a halloween chappie...That'll b so cute...Well, do keep up the great work! Lookingwardward 2 next chappie! l8tr.
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