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Reviews for I Give My Heart To You

By : Liscar

From ANON - Lady Elfskye on July 15, 2004
Finally I can read and review!!!! Damn!! What a story!!

She was afraid of a FROG?? And Mokuba did it?? SO, what *was* in that drink, anyways?? Pee?? Or something worse??

The whole Kira, Bakura, Yami episode was just too funny!! I was ROTFLMFAO so hard that my son asked me what was so funny. I couldn't stop laughing to answer him!! Damned if that didn't bring back memories of my son's childhood too!!

So, it's Pegsy that's behind it all?? Amara is the Keeper?? And Daddy Dearest is loose here too?? Oh, this just keeps getting deeper and more complicated!!

Here comes the bride!!! LOVELY LEMON!!! So, wedding at the end?? Draw straws, too funny!!

Take care an update soon!!

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on July 01, 2004
It's getting better though! I know that chocolate cereal is out!!! LOL!!

Anyways, Lemons are yummy! 'Specially if their out-of-control lemons!!! That was a good story!! I think I am gonna start putting pen to paper, as I actualld a d a brainstorm last night on which direction my story is going!! And, I will say this now, if something I write sounds like your work, let me know. I am *not* trying to copy anyone, but when I get something stuck in my head, I might use it by mistake. Interested in Betaing??? I'll need one.....

Update soon, kay??

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on June 30, 2004
DD: *giggle* I can SO see Seto in that scene in the doc's office.
YD: He's going soft.
DD: It's too cute.
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on June 27, 2004
It's not just the schedule, but also learning what they can, and cannot, have anymore. Things that were trivial before become super-stimulants, worse than caffiene!! But, anyways, as to your story.

Poor Grandpa!! I am sooo glad that Amara was there! Yugi and Yami!! YUM!!

Later girl!!

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on June 23, 2004
It's aaahhh....gone. I don't think I can get anything going right now. We just started a med schedule with my son for ADHD and things are a bit wired around here.

Anyways, another wonderful chappie!! Priceless sneeze!! Keep up the good work!!

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on June 16, 2004
Wow!! Whatta chappie!! Poor Joey!! Man, I feel for him, ya know. GO AMARA!!!! Damn, she's one fiesty bitch ain't she??? Update soon, OK???

dy Edy Elfskye
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on June 11, 2004
WOW!! *pants heavily* Whatta n!! n!! That was awesome!! Gotta keep this short, chibi in the vacinity!! LOLOL!! Gonna start on that story soon! Can't wait to read the next chappie!!

*runs off and attacks hubby*

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on June 05, 2004
Heehee!! I know all about the cats!! I have one of two laying on my lap most of the time I sit down to type! And if you don't pet, they get slap-happy!! And no teenagers, but an 8yr old and my 3yr old neice. LOL, House of Chaos! I'm gonna have to remember that one!!

Great chappie. Hmm.. I wonder who the man in shadow is? LoL~ the part with them in the office was so cute!! Everyone, including the other CEO, thought they were family!! Can't wait for updates!! Thinking of a story that sets Yu-Gi-Oh in the Star Wars realm. Just trying to work out the basics. Hmm, no lightsabers for the Jedis, nope, they use...Duel Monsters!!!

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - Seraph on June 04, 2004
Oh my great grecian god! O_O

This is the best... THE -best-... fanfiction I've ever read. Not best yugi fic... not best anime fic... best all-around, universal, standing tall-loud-and-proud ficcy of all time! Please, pretty please, by Slifer, Obelisk, Ra, Kuriboh, and whatever other gods there be in the world of Duel Monsters, take this as a sign to continue I Give My Heart To You. May your yami be with you, or your hikariicheichever better suits your nature! ^^
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on June 02, 2004
I Like Very Much!!!!!! Very nice, m'dear!! As for the rewrite, things here at home have made it a bit hard to focus lately, so the rewrite ain't going so good...

Take care and update soon!!!

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on May 27, 2004
That was absoultely wonderful!! Amazing lemon!! I love Kura x Ryou lemons!! Ugh!! That jerk hurt Ryou! He is all but dead! Such emotional writing!!

Update soon!!!

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on May 23, 2004
Wicked!! Wonderful lemon!!! Don't I know that fact is stranger than fiction! Some things that have happened to me over the years no one would ever believe!! You just have a very great way of writing things down so that it captures the humor and feeling exactly. I know what I want to say, I just can't put it into words. If your interested, I do have writing on fanfiction.net. One is on mediaminer too. Continue soon!! I really do enjoy this story!!

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on May 18, 2004
Thank you!! I had a wonderful vacation!!

Woman, you have a wicked sense of humor!! I like it!! That chappie was great, the ending scary! I did know that nothing was going to happen to Kira. Oy, She has pooed on him, peed on him, puked on him, Lord, what's next? This story just keeps getting betted bed better!!

Take care!

Waiting anxoiusly for updates,
Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on May 13, 2004
Wow!! An Earthquake! I've never been in a big one, but man, the little one scared me! Wonderful chappie. I love the scene with Kura and Seto though! Totally cool!! Anyway, I'm glad I found this update now, as I am about to leave for vacation in an hour. Whatta way to start my vacation!! Take care and update soon!!!

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on May 10, 2004
Oh,holey chit!! That was one wild lemon!!!!! YUM!! yes! We need Seto Amara action!!! Wow!! *snickers* Ok, I think I really like Kira!! She took a poopie on Kura!! ROTFLMAO!!! That was precious!!!

Lady Elfskye
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