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By : Borath
  • From ANON - Suicidal Skies on January 09, 2005
    Beautiful. Its a lovely fic thats heart warming...heh, I like yami rapes so this one was fresh, and new XD..as soon as I log on its going under recomended..good job XD
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  • From ANON - DS on September 20, 2004
    Wow...I must say I really enjoy this fic! *nods* Read it all throughout the night...and I'm blaming you if I dream something angsty tonight! XD Great fic! Love the sweet plot! Now I'm off to get my limited 3 hours p...p... T______T
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  • From MadameRuby on May 09, 2004
    You really did capture the depression/suicide attempts fairly well. Having gone through a suicidal phase myself, I can honestly say that you got Yami's feelings across very well. Maybe not as good as it could have been, but the true depth of it all can only truly be gotten across by someone who's experienced it. All in all, I think it was a wonderfully written fic with a lot of emotion put into it at the right places
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  • From ANON - EgyptianGenie on January 31, 2004
    This is increadable! You have surfaced an issue that needs to be recognized and paid attention to. I have been to the depression stage and back a couple times. But no where near that bad. I hope I never will and if I do reach that stage, I will keep this fic. in mind. ;c)
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  • From ANON - DKD on January 04, 2004
    I truly enjoyed your story. I hope your friend is doing better. They have a great friend in you. You're the type of person some of us need nowadays. wri writing and peace out!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Fenix on December 17, 2003
    that was a really good fic!! poor yami, at least everything came out okay in the end.
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  • From ANON - Deshret/Fechin_Lefay on August 07, 2003
    oh... wow, wow, wow.

    This is so connecting!

    Many people often think I'm just a quiet anti-social girl, or a bubbly artsy person, without a care. But no, I often feel like crap because I'm the unpopular girl, the 'ugly boy-girl', I can't focus or concentrate on my schoolwork, and my parents didn't understand.

    Wow, in so many ways, Yami in this fic was so much like me, I can really feel connected to him there.

    Too bad I didn't have a Joey or a Yugi in my life that I can turn to for support.

    Reading this, reading his struggles, and the support he gets...

    Well... it helped me, the ending gave me the first genuine smile I had in a few weeks.

    Domo Arigato.... Thank you.... Gracias....
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  • From ANON - bloody gem on May 18, 2003
    very good fic well writen
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  • From ANON - Shorty* on May 04, 2003
    Poor Yami! All that mental stress. The puzzle trap and Bakura's help were nice additions to the story. It's written well and very emotional.
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  • From ANON - adalee222 on February 13, 2003
    I saw this story in fanfiction.net already. And I still feel like to review in here. It is an excellent fic, and I feel re sor sorry for

    Yami. He shouldn't blame himself for his feelings. No one wanted to be raped, even that will protect his other half. And I love

    domination too, please continue the good work here.
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  • From ANON - Rockie on February 06, 2003
    Bravo, bravo! Good fic, a compelling plot, a bit of yaoi [at least for those who read a lot into every little thing, like Yours Truly -_^], and a serious messagemysemyself has been through depression, so I could feel Yami's pain and desperation.
    *shameless plug* I write at both fanfiction.net [sucks that they took out NC-17, but eh] and writing.com. Drop me a line if you've got time.
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