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Reviews for Betrayal and Murder

By : Bloodline
  • From on March 23, 2005
    eey


    I love it .. :D That's all I have to say


    xxx Linda
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  • From Bloodline on March 04, 1920
    Thanks for the reviews and JD I thanx for the compliment you called me 9, thats so NIce infact I'm 7 :D
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  • From ANON - Caska (to lazy to sign in) on April 24, 2004
    you dont find many Seto/Bakura story's more Seto/Ryou so i was kind of suprised to see a Seto/Bakura but couldnt resist reading it :D it's a good story although Bakura is a bit OOC but thats okay. As for the spelling i only found one mistake but then again im not from a country where they speak english :P I hope you update soon cause i really want to read the lemon :D

    Love
    Caska
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  • From ANON - JD on April 24, 2004
    Please tell me that your 9 years old otherwise there is no excuse for this story. Have you ever watched the show? Do you know
    what totally out of charr tor to the point of being someone else is? Please save the readers of the world some greif, ok the readers
    of the world that are over the age o yea years old. Oh wait... isn't this supposed to be an adult site?

    Hey kid, go find your parents and have them enroll you into a writing class.


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