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By : Reppa
  • From ANON - Raven Rae on September 13, 2004
    Please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    That story just needs to end with something else then that, specially for what they were both thinkthe the middle of it all.
    I loved it but it needs a lemon in it to be perfect, not that it aint right now

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  • From ANON - Denisse on September 04, 2004
    Why??????? WHYYYYYYYYYYYY don't you continue ..................-_-.....................
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  • From ANON - Jounouchi Katsuya on July 21, 2004
    Hmm... Will you put Seto/Jou together? Will you?!?! *cries* Very good story and wonderful plot so far! Please continue! *luffs lemons as well* Could you do that?! If you do could you make it Seto/Jou?! *ish a complete hentai* Pwease?!
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  • From ANON - Denisse on June 04, 2004
    Congratulations!!
    This Fic is a lot more realist than the previous one you've done.... I like it a lot. "Kiss my hand at my comand" had good sex scenes but I really disliked the lack of emotions. But this Fic is one of the best that I ever read. That small erotic scene with the kidnapper/Stalker was so hot, better that any of "Kiss my Hand.." Really sexy, an Uke Seto Kaiba is always so yumi.
    Very good plot too.
    PD: Now, I want to see a real JoeyXSeto Lemon ^_~ (You're the best).

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  • From ANON - random reader on June 04, 2004
    Oh it cannot be that easy. ^^;; *can't wait*
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  • From ANON - Saelbu on June 03, 2004
    This chapter was cool, I like this fanfic. I can't wfor for the next chapter. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Renee on June 01, 2004
    And so the plot thickens. Poor Noa, being made to do all the dirty work. Great work! ^^
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  • From ANON - Kat on May 31, 2004
    “I don’t care…I’ll sleep with you…let you fuck me, if you get me out of here.” *throws confetti* Go for it!! Woohoo, let's hear it for desperation!! *laughs* Sweet moves on Jou's part. Gotta love Seto's way of dealing with that kiss. Poor Noa, being thought of as expendable that way. Sheesh. Can't wait to see if they all make it out. Sooooo, let me ask this quesiton: With the old lady sitting in the rocking chair, are we talking Seto's got his own personal Norman Bates??

    Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

    KB
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  • From ANON - bloodquartz on May 28, 2004
    ohh, poor kaiba. Poor mokuba - and poor jou! although i'd actually feel a little sorry for stalker-boy when he gets a hold of him! ^_^
    This is brilliant. I'm really enjoying it - and looking forward to seeing what eventuates. Your writing is wonderfully fluent and you have a great grasp of the characterisation you've used.
    please write more soonish ^_^
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  • From ANON - yugismine on May 19, 2004
    Noo! Poor Seto! And poor Jou! I wanted to see their date!!! Oh well...
    Anyway, greatry, ry, hope you update soon! Can't wait to see what's gonna happen!
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  • From ANON - Renee on May 17, 2004
    Poor Kaiba! I hope Jou comes and kicks Kotei's slimy ass to the moon.
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  • From ANON - Renee the Rabid Squirrel on May 12, 2004
    o.O Kaiba got kidnapped?! Ack! Poor Kaiba! Poor Mokuba!

    Jou: Poor me! T_T

    Erm...right. Anyhow, great chapter once again. ^^ Love your stuff. Very well written.
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  • From ANON - MercilessTantalus-still offline >.< on May 11, 2004
    This is by far the best fanfiction that is still being updated on adultfanfic.net. Every time I come here, it is with dreams of new chapters of this story. I kid you not. PLEASE update again as soon as possible, and thank you SO much for writing!
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  • From itsallgood on May 06, 2004
    Woah...this is one good story, and an original plot too! I like how you've established the relationship between Jou and Seto, it's a fresh change from the norm. I also like how you haven't made Jou seem sweet and weak and fluffy. He can be dangerous, and you've shown that. Good work. ^^
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  • From ANON - random reader on May 06, 2004
    Poor Kaibe nee needs Jounouchi to cuddle him and take away all the nasty feelings.
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