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Reviews for You Look Marvelous

By : Reppa
  • From ANON - Setsuna-X on February 08, 2006
    the story sounds very interesting and I've read it all, but i was wondering if there is a way for u to re-load chapters 6 and 7 because whenever i try to access them to read [cuz i havent read those 2 chapters] it doesnt work. i want to see how Jou finds that stalked house and how he helps Seto and all that, but 6 & 7 just dont work. so if u got time, plz see if u can reload them. Thanx and props` on ur story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2005
    Just so you know, Chapter 6 and 7 of your story, You Look Marvelous, has been cut. After the disclaimer in 6 and after the first couple of lines in chapter 7. I do like the story, but I want to know what happens without jumping "scenes," as it were.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2004
    LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From on October 30, 2004
    i must say when i read this i just wanted to see what else you have written! i read kiss my hand at command and it was fabulous! can't wait to see what you'll cook up next!
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  • From ANON - random reader on October 23, 2004
    That was rather cute. A lemon would be nice. But I don't think it should have the morning after. Maybe a few weeks or something.
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  • From ANON - Nelly on October 20, 2004
    I'm rather saddened by the fact that it seemed to be cut off abruptly, but yeah.

    I certainly wouldn't mind another chapter for a lemon :3
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  • From ANON - Puppyslut on September 20, 2004
    Lemon would be great!
    But then, I'm always for it.
    It's great as it is though. Kudos, and such.

    -PS.
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  • From ANON - Euphoria on September 18, 2004
    I loved your story, I can't believe it's ended. Oh well, all good things must come to an end, but, not for another chapter. You should totally that PWP for the next chapter, who doesn't love a lemon? And, i'm a little curious over who's dominant in your story. (I vote Seto, what can I say, i'm cliche). Hope to see another chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Silkenrose on September 15, 2004
    Great Story. Please write more, a continuation would be awsome.
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  • From ANON - smily on September 14, 2004
    OOOOOH OOOOOOH A LEMON BETWEEN THEM SOUNDS GOOD, PLUS, LOVED THE FIC!
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  • From ANON - Jei on September 14, 2004
    I loved this! I wouldn't mind another chapter! *grin*

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  • From ANON - CrimsonDevil on September 14, 2004
    *Coughs* Ah... Only writing that PWP if you get enough reviews? *Puts this one up in the author's face before rushing them off to the WordPad*
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  • From ANON - Sushi on September 14, 2004
    Very good fiction. =D Of course you need a PWP as an ending. LOL. They need to hook up somehow. ;) Well more than they did. Loved the story though.
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on September 13, 2004
    Please do the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - deadghost on September 13, 2004
    oh yes, please please pretty, pretty... make a lemon...

    It was a good story, and what a better "thank you for reading my fic" present for your fellow readers than a good lemon?
    At least I would like it.
    Loved yor story, bye
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