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Reviews for Arresting Development

By : NeoLizard28
  • From YourBrokenDoll on April 27, 2012
    is that it? *sad*
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  • From ANON - dannigurl on August 18, 2004
    That was a great story. I loved it. I hope its not the end.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2004
    Oooo, I loved the story! For a while it seemed as if Seto was the cop but Mokuba!!! And I love the whole demonic Yugi, you should play into that more, maybe another story idea? Anyways, i don't cazet}hether it is Seto or Mokuba, I love Yugi centric ficcies with either (or both) Kaiba brothers.
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  • From ANON - hmmm on May 10, 2004
    you should finish this its very dirty kinda good umm is the cop kaiba. don' write such short chapters
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  • From ANON - mikochef22 on May 08, 2004
    I really like this... I think I may know where its going... and i really want to know if im right! ....please continue with it as soon as you can ... Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
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  • From ANON - mikochef22 on May 08, 2004
    I really like this... i think i know where its going but i really want to see more of it... please continue ... Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
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  • From ANON - Morghann on May 05, 2004
    O.o Well, the beginning certainly gets my attention. Now, why doesn't this guy want Yugi to get a good look at his face? Hmmm??? ^_-
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  • From ANON - Lord Agent D. on May 04, 2004
    I found myself wishing that the story would move at a more rapid pace while I was reading this chapter, actually, though I understand the necessity of getting all the details concerning setting and,especially, atmosphere down before launching into the rest of the story. I also had a few questions; number one, what does Yugi mean by 'another stranger' who just wanted to dominate him? Number two, what happened to Yami, and why is there just a nameless darkness where he had been? Number three, and this is majorly nitpicky, I know, but he phe police officer is in fact Seto (and we have many reasons to believe he is) I would think that Yugi would connect the fact that Seto also happens to have such a piercing during the very last scene before swearing revenge... but again, that could just be me.

    I do enjoy the story so far, though, and I am looking forward to the next chapter. By far, my favorite touch is the dialogue; more of these lemony fics are just description and grunting, as though the characters were animals. Keep up the good work, and I hope my questions aren't too horribly obvious and stupid. Until next time!
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  • From ANON - Shakster on May 04, 2004
    Yah.... another great chapter... hurry and update again....
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  • From ANON - Neko on May 04, 2004
    I just have one question who is the cop and is one of yugi's emenies?
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  • From ANON - Lord Agent D. on May 04, 2004
    Great start to this story. I enjoyed the style and the subject matter quite a bit, and can't wait for more. However, if the cop's Kaiba, I'm going to be more than a little frustrated with you for dragging it out so long. (laughs)
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  • From ANON - yugismine on May 02, 2004
    o.O Well, ahem, I've definitely never read anything like... THIS before. It's, uh, kinda scary.
    Still, I wanna see what happens! More soon? Please?
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  • From ANON - yugismine on May 02, 2004
    o.O Well, ahem, I've definitely never read anything like... THIS before. It's, uh, kinda scary.
    Still, I w see see what happens! More soon? Please?
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  • From ANON - yugismine on May 02, 2004
    o.O Well, ahem, I've definitely never read anything like... THIS before. IT's, uh, kinda scary.
    Still, I wanna wha what happens! More soon? Please?
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  • From ANON - Shadow Sabre on April 29, 2004
    "Uno City." Heh.

    This is well-written, but I don't really care for non-con stuff. If it goes much further along these lines, could you put a warning in the teaser line?
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