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Reviews for An Innocent Joke?

By : freewater
  • From ANON - yugismine on May 15, 2004
    Ooooh!!! YAY!!!!!!! New chapter finally up!!! I hate FF.net! Damn them for making me wait so long for this chapter!!! But, anyway, great chapter, really cute! Update soon please!!! ^__^
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  • From ANON - yukiko_angel-sythetic_darkness on May 14, 2004
    YK : Wow, it's so good :D Never heard of mediaminers ? you should post there ^^

    SD : Yeah really ^^

    YK : www.mediaminer.org, just go there, you're fic going to be luv~ !!!

    SD : and uptade soon too !!!!
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  • From ANON - Joufalcon on May 12, 2004
    Hey hey hey, I reviewed every chappie of this story when it was on ff.net, I also cried when I found out it got deleted, but not its back up and Im happy ^_^....YAY
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  • From ANON - Renee on May 12, 2004
    I realikelike what you've done here. The plot, the characters, everything.

    However, you have to make sure that you stay in past tense and don't suddenly switch to present tense. You do that sometimes.
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  • From ANON - Anvanimaserke on May 11, 2004
    WOW!!! such a good fic!!! it was amazing!!! so sad, and sweet, and just EVERYTHING about it was good!! I luv this pairing *huggles pairing* and they way you wrote this was so good!! they were both in character so well!! and the story idea was great!!! and dont worry, you lemons are really good!!! I like them ^^ but if you would like some tips i would be happy to meet you on a chat sometime and give you some advice ^^ if you want to, e-mail me, although i dont think your lemons need improvement. *screams* *kills you* THAT WAS MEAN!!! when you put 'the end' and it wasnt the end!!! I had a heart attack, you just lucky seth was was there to revive me or you wouldnt be getting this really long review!! and he had to revive me again atfter i died of a heart attack when Jou pulled the triger on the gun!!!!!! geez, this is such a good suspensful fic!!!! I really liked the part where they were at the club, it was really cool ^^ dunno why. but i luved it ^^ and all the angst ^^ I almost cryed it was so sad!!! especially when Jou's puppy got ripped!!! poor him!! ooo, or when seto saw Jou throw the puppy to anzu!!! ;_;!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so glad it all turned out good so far ^^ that is if Yami dosnt send Seto to the shadow relm 0.o LOL PLEASE!!!!!! *sacrafises several duel monsters in hopes of sumoning a new chapter* PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DBZVelena on May 11, 2004
    I'm reading this just before going to work.
    You made my day with this!
    I love it!
    Keep up the good work!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DBZVelena on May 10, 2004
    I got so angry over the suiside thing, but now they're back together so everything will be fine, and Yugi and Yami will just have to deal with the fact that Jou and Kaiba are together now!
    Loved this loads!
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  • From ANON - Mallory on May 09, 2004
    I followed this from ff.net and you just HAVE to write more this is sooo good, and I love all the twists please write more

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  • From ANON - yaoigoddess on May 09, 2004
    YAY!!!!! Their back together! You have to update soon. I really need to read more of this story. It is the best Seto/Jou story I've ever read (and I'm not just saying that) I can't wait till you add another chapter. You are an awesome writer. Please update soon, and until you do, I'll be reading your other fics.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 09, 2004
    One word. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
    Two more words. HOW CUTE!

    Nice way how you did the whole angst thing with the 'Take the puppy already!' AND the whole bathroom scene!

    I
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  • From ANON - Yukiko on May 09, 2004
    Your doing great with the story, i really enjoy reading it but don't stop. Please write a couple more chapters i would really like to know what Jou's friends do when they find out that he is back with Kaiba and what ever happended to Otogi and Honda? Are they dating or something. Please Please Please write more.
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  • From ANON - Yukiko on May 09, 2004
    Your doing great with the story, i really enjoy reading it but don't stop. Please write a couple more chapters i would really like to know what Jou's friends do when they find out that he is back with Kaiba and what ever happended to Otogi and Honda? Are they dating or something. Please Please Please wrote more.
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  • From ANON - DBZVelena on May 09, 2004
    I really hope they'll get back together I love them so much together!
    Write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Yukiko on May 07, 2004
    I loved the story, but please please write more. Are they going to get back together. Or does Kaiba have to be alone, you are a very good writer but can you please write a couple of more chapters? Hope you keep writing.

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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2004
    NO! What an ending! You better continue this!

    LOL, nice job anyway,

    Keep on Writin'
    Elaya
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